my father英语作文1

　　my father is a chinese teacher.he is very active and he is very smart! but,he is very kind.

　　my father has many hobbies. he likes playing basketball and football. he likes ranning and swimming.he is good at swimming.

　　hes favorite food is beef. he thinks beef is tasty.he likes vegetables,but he doesnt likes cabbage.my father likes apples and oranges,but he doesnt likes bananas,he thinks bananas isnt tasty!

　　this is my father !

my father英语作文2

　　Hi, my name is Cindy. I have a good father. I like him very much. My father is a policeman. He is tall and strong. He looks very cool in the black police uniform. He works in the police station and he is very busy every day. He likes helping people. So he often goes everywhere by his motor cycle. When he sees the people in the trouble, he will try his best to help the people. He is a good policeman. And many people like him very much, too. They often say: "Mr Li, you are a good policeman. We like you very much." But my father always has a point: Helping people is his duty. My father likes reading books very much. Because he thinks: A good book is a good friend. So he reads books after work every day. Sometimes he plays games with me. We are very happy. I like him very much, because my father is not only my father, but also my good friend. This is my father. He is a good father. I like my father very much! My dear friends, do you have a good father, too?

my father英语作文3

　　My father is a drinker. If he hears others to ask him to drink, he will take someone else to a hotel. Ask people to pay, drink and drink until midnight. One day, he went to play mahjong and we thought he didn't drink. Dad played mahjong and went to a hotel to drink, until the red face went home, but dad lost half the way and he lost his way. I had to go to a hotel and say to my boss, "I'm lost. Can't you wait until my family finds me?" In the evening, we found him. When we were about to pick him up, mom saw daddy's face turned red and said angrily, "who beat you?" Father quickly explained: "this is not someone else hit me, this is my drunk and drunk will produce red." My mother said, "don't drink any more, or we will ignore you. Let's hurry home and go to bed."

　　You see, this is my father. My father is very good at drinking bars.

my father英语作文4

　　Hi, my name is Cindy. I have a good father. I like him very much.

　　My father is a policeman. He is tall and strong. He looks very cool in the black police uniform. He works in the police station and he is very busy every day. He likes helping people. So he often goes everywhere by his motor cycle. When he sees the people in the trouble, he will try his best to help the people. He is a good policeman. And many people like him very much, too. They often say: "Mr Li, you are a good policeman. We like you very much." But my father always has a point: Helping people is his duty.

　　My father likes reading books very much. Because he thinks: A good book is a good friend. So he reads books after work every day. Sometimes he plays games with me. We are very happy. I like him very much, because my father is not only my father, but also my good friend.

　　This is my father. He is a good father. I like my father very much! My dear friends, do you have a good father, too?

my father英语作文5

　　My father has a tall and strong figure. I looked up, and his body as a mountain made me feel steadfast. Dad is a violent temper. A pair of small eyes are black and bright like black pearls. A bright, wide enough to make people tremble.

　　Whenever I made any mistakes, he would glare at me and teach me later. Let me get a cool back.

　　My father is a good father though he is a bit short tempered.

　　I remember the winter of that year. It was very cold and strong. It was very cold. He came to school on a bicycle to pick me up. I didn't have gloves. He brought down his gloves for me. He forgot that he had a very strong chilblain on his hands, and when he got home, he was too cold to hold the key. I felt a pain in my heart. I hurried to help him open the door, and poured hot water for Dad to warm his hands.

　　There are many things like this, my father, he is like a glove in the winter, giving me warmth; he is like an umbrella in the rain, and let me not get wet; he is a warrior who will protect me in danger.

　　My father, a good temper, but a great father who loves me very much.

my father英语作文6

　　Hi, my name is Cindy. I have a good father. I like him very much.大家好，我叫Cindy。我有一个好爸爸。我很爱他。

　　My father is a policeman. He works in the police station。He is tall and strong. He looks very cool in the black police uniform.我爸爸是一名**。他在**局上班。他长的很高，很强壮。他穿着黑色的制服看起来很酷。

　　He likes helping people. He often goes everywhere by his motorcycle. When he sees people in trouble, he will try his best to help them. He is a good policeman. And many people like him very much. But my father always has a point: Helping people is his duty.他喜欢助人为乐。他经常骑着自己的摩托车到处去。每当看到别人有困难，他就会努力帮助他们。但是我爸爸的观点是：帮助别人是自己的职责。

　　My father likes reading books very much. Because he thinks: A good book is a good friend. So he reads books after work every day.我爸爸很喜欢看书。因为他觉得：一本好书是一个好朋友。所以他每天下班都要看说。

　　Sometimes he plays games with me. We are very happy.有时候他会和我一起玩游戏。我们很开心。

　　I like him very much, because he is not only my father, but also my good friend.我非常爱他，因为他不仅是我的爸爸，还是我的好朋友。

　　小作者分别从爸爸的职业，爱好，习惯等方面，非常形象的介绍了自己的爸爸。

my father英语作文7

　　This year is 40 years old, medium size, big eyes, smart and smart.

　　My father is a soldier. Now he works in the development team and serves as vice captain. My father seldom comes back. Only my mother and I are left at home. Every time we do the opposite, there will be plenty of food left.

　　Every time to the end of the week, my little friend and dad came back from my yard, and my dad didn't come back. It was I quickly called my dad to the police station, but the soldier said, "your father is out." this is what I think: dad must be busy and can't call him.

　　I remember, my birthday, my father promised me, he wanted to come back, mother prepared a rich dinner, mother let me first eat, but I do not want, I hope that Dad can share with me, I wait for the stars and other stars are water, and I do not sleep on the table. After a while, I found someone holding me. I opened my eyes and looked at my father, and my tears flowed down. My father said to me, "I am a soldier. I want to defend my motherland, my children can live a happy life like you!"

my father英语作文8

　　My father is the busiest one in my family! He is a “workaholic”. He goes home very late every day.

　　He gets up at 6:40a.m. He eats breakfast at 8:00a.m, he eats breakfast and then goes to work. He eats lunch at 12:00noon.

　　He goes home at 10:00p.m. He goes to bed at 1:00p.m. Is your dad busy?

my father英语作文9

　　My father always stands in the center of my life, from past till now and possibly in the future.

　　My family was rather poor when I was in my childhood. We didn't have our own house and had to live in a shabby, small room rented from my father's factory. The room was so small that there was little space for people to walk. I didn't have my own bed and had to sleep with my parents. This is terrible both for my parents and me.

　　But father made this all different! Since the room was on the third floor, namely, the top floor in that old style building, the roof was quite high above the floor. So father got an idea. He bought two thick ropes and a flat wood that later was planed smooth, painted and drilled two holes on both ends.

　　Then he hung the ends of ropes up to the roof. During the daytime, these two ropes would be tied up so that people down could walk freely! When night came, father would loose the ropes and tied them to the two holes of that flat wood. The length of these ropes was just long enough for me to sit or sleep on the board without other's help.

my father英语作文10

　　I am a girl of ten, and I live in a small mountain village far from Taiyuan. The only person that lives with me is my mother, because my father is away for eight years, working in a city.

　　During the Spring Festival, my father came back home. He looked thin and tired. He gave my mother two thousand yuan, and told her that he would work even harder, earn more money, and then he could take us to the city. He stayed at home for only ten days.We are living a poor life now. But what I want most is not money, but my father. I miss him very much!

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my father英语作文10篇（扩展1）

——my,dream大学英语满分作文5篇

my,dream大学英语满分作文1

　　Everyone has their own dreamsSo do I.An old saying:Great dreams make great man.It is very important to dreamSo hold on to your dreams;One day they may just come ture.You must believe:Where there is a willthere is a way.

　　My dream is to be an expert in English.You may ask:Why can like this?I will tell you:In factI have a lot of reasons.

　　FirstBecause English is an international language now.It is widely used in the world.Just the study of English makes life so colorful.English is taught throughout the world.So we must learn English.

　　NextBecause we need a common language to communicate.This kind of language is English.I would like to walk out of Chinainto the world.I love my motherlandChinaI will let her become more prosperous and powerful.

　　FinallyBecause I am going to promate Chinese culture everywhere.I am going to teach Chinese all over the world.I can undoubtedlly change the world for the better!

　　I do not give up my dream no matter what happens.Nothing is difficult in the world if you put your heart into it.I feel strongly that I can make it.Let us make miracles together!

my,dream大学英语满分作文2

　　Dream, avers, countless people in compiling the dream of frustrations. At night, when the dark dream of fire happens, bring people farther and nearly hope suddenly. It floats in the imagination and expect, is the people heart longing.

　　In reality, under the impact of dreams just peace of mind, make life more than a light. Established in persistent dream forever, sweat, and tears, overlooking efforts over the past: the great Madame Curie to benefit human, hard struggle for life, and finally produced a pure radium. Her life though because long-term accept radioactive substances stimulation and gone, but she dreamers never stop footstep. She used her dream, write down the eternal life.

　　But we, because many obstacles and stopped because of laziness, or heart and give up the dream. Don't flashy longing dream will come true, also don't immersed in a busy and noisy. Choose the right way, so you must go, no matter how long the road ahead, regardless of whether, as long as have danger "and a" belief, came to the joy of dreams, is far away from you will also?

　　The dream is flower seeds, the eagle's dream is ready to fly. "Li-an old hero, costraint", even a nag are able to support the weak body dream. So, whether we should be more young take advantage of this wonderful time chasing the dream trace?

　　Dream, it is like the butterfly wings, with beautiful we capture it, But it is more like a fragrance pubi fragrance, we find it, temptation to catch a refreshing "to". Also no wonder that someone will give up the pursuit of dreams, because "the real dream too is". Don't dream really so hard to reach? No, because those who are too greed, will put the dream with high places, all day but never considered himself ever reach the dream. When it is discovered, he is already dispirited and discouraged, no interest in exploring the dream again.

　　Dream really so far? In fact, it might be far ahead, are you looking forward to your hand, eagerly. Or, it in the corner, prepare crossroads in unexpected jumped out when you scare you jump, give you a surprise. It may be illusory dreams, perhaps is immensely. The life forever, because dream and flash.

　　In the streets to see the girl singing a song, sweet singing on stage, this should now, but in the eyes of silent singing. Oh, don't disturb her, don't think she is poor, you know, she is in order to realize her dream and playing well. In the persistent efforts, sweat, and tears filled with turn your heart, your dreams will release its.

my,dream大学英语满分作文3

　　I want to be an inventor in the future. I want to invent new things such as AI robots, new energy cars and electronics ,etc. For example, I will make a new energy car, because there is too much pollution. It can make use of wastes as energy and when there is a traffic jam ,it can fly in sky and drive into water ,it can be faster, more comfortable and convenient . I want to make the world better, I'll follow my dream.

my,dream大学英语满分作文4

　　when i was a naughty boy, may be because of the influence of the film."iao bing zhang ga",my dream was to be a soldier just like zhang ga. i thought if i was a soldier, i should be able to swim, pe and climb trees as he did. it seemed to be very wonderful. so i began to learn swimming, ping and climbing trees. i practiced every day and finally i could do them well. but when i entered junior high school and had the military training. i suddenly found that being a soldier was very difficult and i wasn＇t strong enough to bear it . i had to give my dream up.

　　but i wasn＇t discouraged, and i had new aim, which was to be a postman, or rather to be a newspaper boy. as a newspaper boy. i could speed along streets on a bike and throw newspapers onto every porch. that＇s also very cool. so i started learning to ride a bicycle. after the everyday practice, i could go very fast by bicycle. but to my disappointment, the job which i wanted only eisted in western counties not in china, because there was no porch in china. and chinese postmen had to stuff very thick newspapers into very small mailboes from very narrow entrances. the job was far from what i had epected. so once again my dream fell through.

　　perhaps you have had the same eperience as i and most of your dreams haven＇t come true yet. but i think it doesn＇t matter, because if you have a dream, you＇ll make many efforts to realize it. this course is really important. if i hadn＇t dreamt of being a soldier or a newspaper boy. i wouldn＇t have learned to swim, to pe, to climb trees or to ride a bicycle. even if our dream can＇t come true, you＇ll learn much from the efforts you have made. so what i want to tell us is that dream helps us to grow up and teaches us how to control our lives . it is dream that gives us power and makes our lives colorful

my,dream大学英语满分作文5

　　When I was small, because often sick, and often go to see a doctor. Every time a doctor my disease good, I think the doctor is like a magician, very strong, very magical, I dream I can be a doctor when he grows up.

　　Didn't go to school before I like and grandpa play the game of doctors and patients. Grandpa and I are so play, pretend grandpa is sick, come to me to see a doctor, I took a toy stethoscope help grandpa hear here, listen to there, although I don't know should listen to what position, but I listened very carefully, and then I find a piece of paper as records, drawing on the paper, wildly seriously say: "the patient, you have the cold, need an injection." Then I took the toy needle and cotton buds, alcohol to disinfect with a bowl of water, I solemnly to help grandpa disinfection, give or take an injection, and prescribed some medicine, and finally told him: "the patient, must take medicine on time, drink more boiled water, so your condition will soon be ok."

　　Gradually I grow up, I know grandpa and grandma already have diabetes, high blood pressure, my grandma body is not good, there are frequent dizziness, vertigo once grandmother also fell handles all hurt, they are my most close relatives, I don't want they get sick, I hope they healthy, so I more determined to grow up to be a doctor, because the doctor can make sick people rehabilitation, let people away from pain.

　　This is what I always dream of.

my father英语作文10篇（扩展2）

——My英语作文5篇

My英语作文1

　　I have a dog. My dog name is DuDu. DuDu is 9 years. DuDu is fat. It wears a white coat. DuDu has two big eyes and two small ears. It has one short mouth. My dog is smart. I like my dog. Do you like it?

　　我的狗

　　我有一只狗。我的狗名叫杜都。都都是9年。都都是脂肪。它穿着一件白大褂。嘟嘟有两只大眼睛和两只小耳朵。它有一个简短的'嘴巴。我的狗很聪明。我喜欢我的狗。你喜欢它吗?

My英语作文2

　　Everybody has a wish, but thry're all different. me, too, also have a wish. what is my wish, do you want to know? my wish is , i have that wish because . my wish might not be something that's great, but it's my wish. it's very important to me, no what have happened.

My英语作文3

　　今天的天气虽然不怎么好，可是我的心情是阳光明媚的，因为昨天我写了一篇作文发表到优秀作文网**，这是大家对我的认可和鼓励，写作的道路上我才刚刚起步，虽然前方的路还很漫长，但是我相信有了我向老师虚心实意的求教，妈妈不辞辛劳的辅导以及我自己的不懈努力，我一定会越走越好，越走越远的。

　　Today's weather is not so good, but my mood is sunny, because yesterday I wrote a composition and published it on the excellent composition website, which is everyone's recognition and encouragement for me. I just started on the road of writing, although the road ahead is still very long, but I believe that with my modest and practical advice from the teacher, my mother's painstaking guidance and my own My unremitting efforts, I will go better and further.

　　今天的我很快乐，虽然我并没有得到什么，但我感觉自己也能做一些事情了。

　　Today I am very happy, although I did not get anything, but I feel that I can do something.

My英语作文4

　　In ten years,I think the I‘ll be a reporter.I‘ll live in Shanghai,because I went to Shanghai last year and fell in love with it.I think it‘s really a beautiful city.As a reporter,I think I will meet lots of interesting people.I think I‘ll live in an apartment with my best friends, because I don‘t like living alone.

　　I‘ll have pets.I can‘t have any pets now because my mother hates them and our apartment is too small.So in ten years,I‘ll have many different pets.I might even keep a pet parrot! I‘ll probably go skating and swimming every day.During the week I‘ll look smart,and probably will wear a suit.

　　On the weekends, I‘ll be able to dress more casually. I think I‘ll go to Hong Kong on vacation,and one day I might even visit Australia.

My英语作文5

　　Ten years later, I write to you for the first time, my mood is unable to use my poor language to express, is very complex, some excitement, are looking forward to, and some fear.

　　I have a lot of question want to ask you, there are many many words can express... .

　　After ten years of I, how are you now? Happiness? Do you still insist on ten years ago that become a cartoonist, a novelist's dream? This dream realized after ten years?

　　Or have forgotten it? Just have a simple job, live a flatly light day?

　　Where more will not be dropped off in the exam, not on the university and was wondering how is good looking for work, lived a poor dog's life?

　　My parents are ok? You have to let them live a good life, healthy? They also like ten years ago young and tall? Or is the white-haired?

my father英语作文10篇（扩展3）

——Father英语作文3篇

Father英语作文1

　　You are my adversary, but you are not my enemy.

　　For your resistance gives me strength.

　　You will give me courage.

　　Your spirit ennobles me.

　　And though I aim to defeat you, should I succeed, I will not humiliate you.

　　Instead, I will honor you.

　　For without you, I am a lesser man.

　　参考译文

　　对手

　　你是我的对手，但不是我的敌人。

　　因为，你的对抗给予我力量。

　　你的.意志带给我勇气。

　　你的精神使我崇高。

　　我要尽力击败你，但即使我胜利了，我也不会羞辱你。

　　相反，我将以你为荣。

　　因为如果没有你，我就无法达成今天的成就。

my father英语作文10篇（扩展4）

——Unit 4 my英语说课稿 (菁选3篇)

Unit 4 my英语说课稿1

　　Good morning, ladies and gentlemen, it's my great honor/ to interpret my lesson plan here. /Now I will explain this lesson from 5 aspects----****ysis of teaching materials, ****ysis of students, teaching aims, teaching methods, and the most important one /is teaching procedure.

　　Now, let's focus on the ****ysis of teaching materials. My topic is unit 4 my home（板书）.It contains 2 parts----Let's learn and Let's do.（板书）It is very important in this unit. With the basic knowledge of this lesson, Ss can learn the following class well. The key points of this lesson,/ Ss are able to master key words, such as kitchen bathroom and so on ,and the key sentences like where's the …/ Is she in the…? And the difficult points are the pronunciation of the words kitchen and bathroom and how to lead Ss /to use the learnt knowledge in a real situation.

　　Next, it is about the students, and my Ss are in Grade 4, they are full of curiosity,/ creative and willing to express themselves. And they have learnt some words and expression before, so it is not difficult for them/ to learn today's lesson.

　　And based on ****ysis of teaching materials and students, I set the teaching aims as follows: the first one /is language knowledge, by the end of the lesson. Ss will be able to listen, speak, read and write the new words: kitchen bathroom and so on, and the key sentences like where's the …/ Is she in the…? The second one is language skills, through this lesson, Ss' can introduce their homes in English briefly. The last one is the emotion aims, which is to encourage Ss to love their homes and also develop their awareness of keeping their homes clean.

　　And in order to achieve teaching aims better and stress the key points, break through the difficult points efficiently, I will mainly use task-based teaching method, situational teaching method and TPR teaching method./ To make the English teaching more directly, CAI and tape recorder will be needed.

　　Now I will talk about the most important part ---teaching procedure (and the purposes of my designing). I will pide my lesson into 4 steps.

　　The first step is warming up (about 5 mins). After greeting with Ss, I will begin the lesson by singing a song, and I'll invite the Ss to sing/ say it with me. Like this_________________.

　　My purpose here is form a better English learning surrounding for Ss, it can draw Ss attention quickly to the English class and arouse their interest.

　　After the song, I will say we all have happy families, so is Amy. Look, this is Amy's home. (板书：房子)

　　(呈现单词) ①I'll have a riddle for students to guess what room it is(板书). And I'll give them some tips to help them to get the right answers. For example, I'll give some hints like there is a bed and a closet in this room. Oh, it's a bedroom. Great, this is the study(通过猜谜呈现两个单词) and I will ask Ss to read after me of the words

　　② How about this one? I'll cover a part of the rooms and let Ss guess. Bingo, it's a bathroom. And I'll ask Ss to read after me.

　　③Now Amy's hiding in one of the rooms, I'll let Ss guess “ where is …”/ “ is she in…”/ yes, she is/ no, she isn't.

　　My purpose of this part is to use different ways to present the words and sentences for a better understanding.

　　After presenting these words and sentences, I'd like to go on the third step---practice. I'll let Ss review the words and sentences by a chant。For the first time , we will have the chant together and do the actions. Like this “go to the living room, watch TV; go to the study, read a book” And for the second time, I'll say watch TV，Ss say go to the living room. I say read a book, Ss say go to the study..

　　After a chant, I'll have a game called hide and seek let students guess where is Amy. I'll let Ss close their eyes and I put a picture of Amy may be in the study, and students may ask “ where is Amy? Is she in the bedroom?” I'll say “No, she isn't” “where is Amy? Is she in the study?” “ Yes ,she is.”

　　My purpose here is to let Ss consolidate the knowledge in a relaxed atmosphere.

　　After practice, I'll move to the fourth step---extension. First, I'll pide the whole class into groups, four in a group. Discuss and draw their own homes ,describe where their parents are in the home。At the same time, I'll walk around the classroom and give them some suggestions. Maybe 3 mins later, I will invite some groups to come here to perform their dialogue, and I'll give them comments.

　　My purpose is to focus on the Ss and cultivate their language ability and cooperative ability.

　　The last step is homework. I'll ask Ss to listen to the tape and follow it 3 times. Because it can help them to correct their pronunciation after class.

　　And this is my layout.

　　That's all. Thank you for your attention!

Unit 4 my英语说课稿2

　　一、说教材：

　　今天我上课的内容是PEP小学英语Book3Unit 3 My friends A部分的了Let’s leam 和Let’s find out。本册在本套教材中起着个“过渡”这样一个作用，由听说逐渐转向听说读写，逐步渗透书写，对学生提出了新的要求。即四会单词的加入。而本单元的四会单词又是比较难的一单元，本单元主要围绕“我的朋友”即如何描述自己身边熟悉的人来展开的。本节课主要是让学生学习几个描述人物外貌特征的单词或词组，如：long hair， short hair， thin ，strong， quiet。并且能结合句子“He has…，She has…，She is… ，He is…”在生活中运用所学语言。本课教学内容贴近学生生活，比较容易让学生接受，难在单词的灵活运用上以及个别个别单词的发言，如quiet，thin，所以我在安排教学时，把单词和句子结合起来，把单词的运用做作为重点，而不是单纯的认读单词。

　　二、 说教学目标：

　　英语课程标准为旗帜鲜明的提出“以培养学生的创新精神的实践能力为重点，全面推进素质教育”。作为一个英语教师，必须明确英语教学的目的的就是培养学生用语言进行交际的能力。教学的主要任务不是积累知识，而是发展思维。教师在传授知识的同时，更主要的是设法结合学生的生活实际创造交际活动的情景，以增强学生学习英语的兴趣，使他们能积极参与言语实践活动。因此，基于以上观点对知识传授、能力培养、思想教育三者**的要求在分析教材的基础上我拟定这节课的教学目标为：

　　知识目标：

　　1、能听、说、认读friend， long hair short hair， stong， quite， thin等单词和词组。

　　2、能听懂、会说My friend is strong/thin。 He has short/long hair/big eyes/small mouth并能在实际中运用；

　　能力目标：

　　1、培养学生的英语听力和用英语说话的能力。

　　2、培养学生的语言创新能力。

　　情感目标：

　　1、培养学生的合作意识和竞争意识。

　　2、对学生进行关心朋友，朋友间要互相帮助的思想教育。

　　说教学重、难点：

　　重点：描述人物相貌特征的词汇。

　　难点：quiet的发音。

　　三、 说教法、学法：

　　（一） TPR活动法

　　用TPR活动法生动愉快地让学生适应上课，开始进入状态，同时更是一个对以前的学习内容的复习，为下面的学习内容做铺垫，为学生展开新内容提供知识基础，也为课堂气氛增色不少。

　　（二）词不离句、单词与句子教学相结合：每一个单词或词组出现后作相应的运用，以及替换练习，这是一种语言的内化和创造过程，使学生更易接受和理解单词，并有利于单词的运用以及接下来的会话教学。

　　（三）小组学习法：每四、五人一组，在互动中互相启发产生思维的碰撞，同时注意保证每个学生都有机会参与学习、而培养学生和伙伴合作的意识和策略，提高人际交往能力。学生也在**与合作的交织中调控了自身的学习，变得自信、自强。

　　（四）练习法：最后设置一个读短文和写的练习，让小学英语从听说走向听说读写，为以后的“写”做准备。

　　（五）竞争教学法：本节课中两大组竟赛描述My friend。 可以激发他们的积极性，使他们将***高度集中在所学内容上，提高学习效率。

　　四、说教学过程

　　本堂课我大体上分为四大块；

　　（一）热身和复习

　　安排Let’s do 和 Look and say 。

　　这一过程既是学生复习旧的语言知识，为下一步学习作好铺垫，也是通过TPR活动让学生把所有的***集中到课堂中来，为英语学习创造了一种良好的氛围。

　　（二）新课呈现

　　1，运用复习中的旧知引出新知，long hair ，short hair。学生容易接受和理解，并及时运用。In our class。 Who has long hair ？。Who has short hair。？

　　2，运用黑板上的人物图形，紧接着教授strong 和 thin 通过图片中人物的对比学生比较容易理解，并及时运用。Who is strong？ Who is thin？ 用学生身边的人使学生说得亲切，熟悉，更易接受，易于信息的接受和生成。

　　3， Let’s chant 及时巩固新学的两组词汇 long hair， short hair ，strong， thin。 并为下一个单词quiet创造一个情镜，由大声的朗读转为安静的场景。

　　4，quiet的教学，利用场景让学生明白安静的意思，再分析人物，由场景的安静转入描述人物的文静。让学生逐个理解，并注意发音。让学生看清教师的口型再读，突破难点。

　　5，听录音，同桌共找，后再跟读

　　听音共找是比试，以促进其认真听并且积极辩音，又能让学生自觉做到眼、耳、手、脑共到，跟录音则是让学生接触到有英语本土味道，较纯真的语音，模仿地道的语言、语调。这对与我们这些没有在大的语言环境中学习语言的学生来说非常必要，特别是教师本身在这方面有欠缺，更应让学生多听录音。

　　（三）趣味操练

　　趣味操练以My friend为主线来安排：

　　①描述教师的朋友（看图片），让学生会用一个一个句子描述friend的外貌特征。

　　②让学生描述自己的friend，由一个个句子提升到几个句子或是一小段话。经过小组讨论，相互交流，合作学习，学会说一段话。

　　③再由说一段话过渡到阅读并理解一段话（四年级的学生还比较好动，注意易分散，爱表现自己。希望得到老师的认可和表扬，而比赛是最能引发学生的兴趣，发挥学生学习的主动性；使他们的***始终集中在课堂上，同时也培养了学生的合作竞争意识）所以在操练时始终结合分大组“比赛”激励学生来说，大胆的表述。

　　（四）巩固和延伸：

　　①准备了一个写的练习，选用词汇，写全短文〈发挥学生的创新精神，给学生一个展示自己的舞台，更是为以后的写作作准备，真正落实英语教学的听、说、读、写〉。

　　②描述自己的'家人，扩大所学词汇运用的方面，使学生更好的在生活中运用词汇。

　　这就是我本堂课的全部内容和设计意图，希望各位老师给我多提宝贵的意见。

Unit 4 my英语说课稿3

　　一、教学要求：

　　1、能听懂日常用语That’s my new ruler。 It’s very nice。要求读音正确，语调自然。

　　2、能运用句型That’s my…It’s very…对物品进行简单描述，语音语调正确。

　　3、低年级学生的英语学习方法引导。

　　二、教学重点：

　　1、培养学生的学习兴趣，能听懂日常用语That’s my new ruler。 It’s very nice。等。

　　2、培养学生的观察能力。

　　三、教学准备：

　　词语卡片、小黑板

my father 英文作文

　　四、教学过程：

　　A、greeting

　　继续巩固用英语**教学让学生初步听懂课堂基本用语，例如Class begins， Stand up， Sit down， please。 Hello ， boys and girls。并且做出相应的反应。

　　B、Free talk

　　T：Class begings。

　　S1： Stand up。

　　T： Hello， boys and girls。

　　Ss： Hello， Miss Jiang。

　　T： Hi， What’s your name？

　　S： Hello， my name is …。

　　T：How are you？

　　S1： I’m fine， thank you。

　　T： Nice to meet you。

　　S1： Nice to meet you， too。

　　开起小火车，一个接一个和后面的小朋友打招呼。

　　C、Presentation

　　1） 教师拿出一本新的英语书用Is this …？问学生，再指着远处讲台上的一把新的尺子，Is that … ？ **，从而呈现That’s my new …

　　T：Is this a book？

　　Ss： Yes， it is。

　　T： This is my new book。

　　T： （指远处）Is that a ruler？

　　Ss： Yes ， it is。

　　T： Good。 That’s my new ruler。

　　让学生通过This is my new book。和 That’s my new ruler。 的对比。体会 this 和 that 的不同含义和用法。

　　2）教new 这个单词时，教师用新、旧物品作比较。

　　T： Look， this is an old book。

　　T： Look， that’s a new book。

　　在学生操练new 之后，再让学生用new 进行组词操练：a new bag， a new book等。

　　D、Learn to say

　　1）放录音让学生跟读的方式学习对话内容。在学生跟读时，要他们尽量模仿录音中的语音、语调。

　　2）引导学生采用分角色朗读、分组朗读等多种形式练习，进行课文对话操练。

　　3）在班级中开展“小擂台”比赛，看谁领读得好，谁就成为“小擂主”。

　　E、Practise

　　在学生听、读对话后，教室**学生运用实物、图片、多**等直观**，创设情境，进行多层次的操练。

　　S1：That’s my new pencil。

　　S2：It’s red。 It’s very nice。

　　F、Assign homework

　　听录音，朗读。

　　五、板书设计：

　　Unit 4 My nice ruler

　　——That’s my new ruler。

　　——It’s very nice。☆教学调整☆

　　六、教学反思：

my father英语作文10篇（扩展5）

——New Years Day英语作文10篇

New Years Day英语作文1

　　New Years DayJanuary 1st is New Years Day. Its a great day for all the people throughout the world. As the saying goes, "A good beginning is half the battle". So, many people go all out to celebrate the important day. On that day, I went to the Book City with my classmates. We bought a lot of useful reference books and interesting story books. I believe "Knowledge is power". I hope I can learn a lot from these books and improve my study. In the evening, my family had a big dinner party.All the members in my family wished me a good luck in the new year.

　　新年DayJanuary 1日是元旦。这是一个伟大的一天所有的世界各地的人们。俗话说的好,“良好的开端是成功的一半”。所以,许多人全力以赴去庆祝这个重要的日子。在那一天,我去了书城和我的同班同学。我们买了很多有用的参考书和有趣的故事书。我相信“知识就是力量”。我希望我能学到很多东西从这些书籍和提高我的学习。在晚上,我的家人有一个大型晚宴。所有成员在我的家人希望我在新的一年里好运。

New Years Day英语作文2

　　Well, New Years Day is coming. Do you want to know what I am going to do next year? I am going to leave my home for Xiamen with my family . We are going to there by plane .And after we are getting there, we are going to eat delicious food, climb the mountains, visit the Jin Bang Park and the Bai Lu Zhou Park.We are also going to go shopping , play basketball with my uncles at the same time. And we are going to stay there for a month . After a month , we are going to come back to our home.We will have a good time there. How about yours? What are you going to do next year?

New Years Day英语作文3

　　The New Year’s Day is on January 1st, in this year, people will have one day’s off, and it is different from before. On that day, I am going to travel to Nanning, I haven’t been to Nanning for two years, I miss the days there, I will visit my friends. I will have a good time.

　　元旦在一月一号，在今年，人们放一天假，这和往年不同。在元旦那天，我准备去南宁玩，我应经有两年没去南宁了，我想念在南宁的日子，我将要拜访我的朋友。我将要度过美好的时光。

New Years Day英语作文4

　　Spring Festival is originally a very happy and beautiful festival, but people do not speak the civilization, so that the original happy Spring Festival has become a little fun.

　　But theres a chance to change it now. Come on, friends and relatives, lets make this Spring Festival back to a happy and happy holiday. Lets get up and talk about civilization.

New Years Day英语作文5

　　Its New Year! This is the happiest thing for every child. I have a happy day in my hometown Qiandao Lake.

　　The new year, each place has different customs, where we have a very unique customs, for example: kill the swine is one of them.

　　There are plenty of drinks, so they are fat and heavy.

　　As night falls, with the sound of festive firecrackers, a beautiful flaming flower rises in the air, and people welcome a new year in the laughter and laughter.

New Years Day英语作文6

　　This winter holiday I stayed at home. I am happy because my father and my mother could spend more time with me during the Spring Festival. Besides, on the eve of the Spring Festival, we had a great family reunion dinner and then we watched Spring Festival Party on CCTV1. Sometimes, I reviewed my lessons. I had a very wonderful holiday.

　　整个寒假我都呆在家里，我很高兴因为新年期间我的爸爸和妈妈能够花更多时间和我在一起。而且，在新年前夕，我们一家吃了团圆饭，然后我们看**电视一台的新年联欢晚会。有时，我复习功课。我度过了一个非常愉快的假期。

New Years Day英语作文7

　　New year is coming, I’m going to do a lot of things next year. First, I want to improve my English, so I’m going to practice it very often and have many conversations with my friends.

　　Then, I want to take part in the sportsmeeting and get good grades, so I’m going to do sports every day such asswimming, running and so on. At the same time, I’m going to eat more healthyfood instead of junk food.

New Years Day英语作文8

　　The new year is coming.And in the new year, I have three dreams to achieve.

　　Firstly, I want to pass the English exam.In order to achieve it,I will spend half an hour to practice the English.Secondly,I want to practice flute and Guzheng.I have learned them for many years, but I still havent grabbed them well.Thirdly,I want to earn three hundred yuan a month by doing the part time job online.Wish all my hopes will achieve in this new year.Best wishes to me.

New Years Day英语作文9

　　Next year,I will do many things.Im going to get good grades .Because in this year,I Was not get good grades.Im going to play soccer ball. because I think that can make me healthly.

　　Im going to eat more vegetables and Im going to learn a new language.Im also going to visit my grandparents and cousins.I will go to a summer camp.Because its interesting.Im going to help my parents to clean the house.I will buy some gifts for my friend.I think that can make them happy.In next year ,Im going to make my parents happy.And cook for them.

New Years Day英语作文10

　　Everyone like Spring Festivel. Why? Because everyone have a long holiday. People don‘ go to work. Everyone can sleep to nine o‘clock. Every chlidren also like Spring Festival. Why? Because. Every chlidren don‘t go to school. Every chlidren have many money. Every people have many new cloths. Duration in Spring Festivel every people eat dumplings.

　　We have story for Spring Festivel. Longlong ago. A beast named nian. He is very bed. Every year he always eat many people and animal. At lost many people kill the beast. So we are commemorate this day.

my father英语作文10篇（扩展6）

——爬山英语作文10篇

爬山英语作文1

　　One day， Mother and I went to climb Mount Huang。 When I began to climb， I felt very easy。 But when I climbed the haft way， I was very＇ tired。and quite out of breath。 I asked mother， "Can I climb to the top?" Mother answered， "As long as you have courage， you can conquer every mountain，

　　no matter how high it is! "So I went ahead。 Half an hour later， I climbed to the top finally。 What a wonderful day I had!

爬山英语作文2

　　For the first time,I climbed to the top of the mountain and enjoyed the beautiful scenery.

　　It was a weekendwhen a good friendof mine asked me to climb a famous mountain here. Ive always heard of this mountain,but I havent found the time to climb it. So when my friendasked me out,I readily agreed.

　　On the way to climb mountains with my friends,we also met many climbers,including young people and old people. The young mans speed of climbing was fast,and he disappeared in a flash;the old mans climbing was very casual,at least slowly,with a happy face. Maybe young people climb the mountain to get to the top of the mountain,while old people climb the mountain to enjoy the scenery along the way.

　　My friends and I are neither the first nor the second. We will carefully taste the scenery along the way of climbing. The speed of climbing is not so fast and slow. Although its not as fast as those brothers who cant be seen in a moment,its faster than those masters.

　　When my friends and I climbed to the top of the mountain,it was the setting sun,and the red sun dyed the sky red,which was shocking enough. My friendand I found a place with a wide view. At a glance,the mountains were rolling. Those mountains were like a line of waves,rolling away to the distance.

　　"Wow,its beautiful!" I couldnt help sighing,and my friendfollowed. The scenery on the top of the mountain is really beautiful. Its the majestic atmosphere that makes people feel shocked. My friendand I stood at the top of the mountain for a long time. Finally,as the light in the sky became more and more dim,my friendand I went down the mountain reluctantly. When I went down the mountain with my friends,we were sitting in the corridor. We enjoyed the scenery. On this day,my friends and I got a lot.

　　The first time I climbed the mountain,I felt the fun of climbing the mountain,and also read the scenery of the mountain top. If I have time,I will go climbing again.

爬山英语作文3

　　For the first time in everyones experience!For example:the first time to ride a bicycle,write a book,play a com*r for the first time,keep a dog for the first time,etc!And my first time is climbing!

　　On a sunny holiday,our family unanimously decided to take exercise - climbing Maanshan!Maanshan ecological park is located in the south of Yangwu village,Daling mountain. The main peak is 329.2 meters above sea level. It is pided into two small peaks at the front and back. It is named Maanshan because of its shape similar to Maanshan. It used to be a quarry. All the stones mined were transported to all parts of the city as building materials,bringing considerable economic benefits to the local area and seriously damaging the ecological environment. In order to build a civilized,harmonious and ecological home,the village commi* decided to close the quarry and invest 5 million yuan to build it into an ecological park. Now there are Jinling,Qixingling,Jiti stone,Qilin mountain and other scenic spots. When I came to the foot of Maanshan,I stared at the top of Maanshan stupidly. In my mind,I thought of the complacent expression of climbing to the mountain. After that,I cant wait to follow the route to the top of the mountain!

　　At first,I was a living tiger,just like a hungry tiger,flying to the top of the mountain!The road is getting steeper and steeper,and the fork road runs across. Its half the way to the top of the mountain. After a long time,the physical strength is naturally consumed and the knowledge is not much. Im sweating!!Seeing thousands of houses,cars and pedestrians under my feet,I secretly encouraged myself:there is still a little way to go,stick to it,and soon climb to the top of the mountain,dont be discouraged,learn to stick to it on this road!Only persistence can make people succeed!Time flows silently on me. I climb to the top of the mountain. I am ecstatic and rush forward in one breath. Finally climbed to the top of the mountain!Ah!The scenery at the top of the mountain is so intoxicating and impressive!

　　As if everything under my feet is my world!The whole village can be seen clearly. I learned a truthfromit,that is:in life,whether it is laid-off,or encountered difficulties,or be fired and so on. Dont be discouraged. As a human being,we should learn not to be discouraged in the face of difficulties. In all kinds of tests of life,just like climbing a mountain,we cant give up halfway,as long as we stick to it,we will succeed!

爬山英语作文4

　　We had a seven-day holiday for May Day. So my family and I went to climb Country Mountain.

　　五一节我们有七天的假期。所以我和家人去爬山了。

　　We went there by my father's car. It took about an hour. It was long and dull.

　　我们坐我父亲的车去的。大约花了一个小时。它又长又闷。

　　At about nine o’clock, we began to climb the mountain. We enjoyed it and we didn't feel tired at all. We sang and chatted while we were climbing the mountain. When we got to the top of the mountain, we found ourselves sweating and out of breathe.

　　大约九点钟，我们开始爬山。我们很享受，一点也不觉得累。我们一边爬山一边唱歌聊天。当我们到达山顶时，我们发现自己出汗，上气不接下气。

　　We sat on the stones in the sunshine to have a rest. There were many pine trees around us. The grass was getting green; the wind was soft and fresh.

　　我们在阳光下坐在石头上休息。我们周围有许多松树。草渐渐绿了；风柔和而清新。

　　Everything was so beautiful that all of us couldn't help shouting to the mountain loudly, “We love nature!”

　　一切都是如此美丽，以至于我们都忍不住对着山大声喊道：“我们热爱大自然！”

爬山英语作文5

　　In order to encourage the people in all aspect to take outdoor. Our city will organized a mountain climbing on may . Thounsands of us took part in it.

　　It was a exciting day, at 9 am all the people get tegother at the foot of the mountain. We are seting out for the high mountain. During the way to the top of the mountain, we all enjoy ourself . We singing , laughing, and see the beautiful scenery. When somebody fell behind, the others will come and offer help.

　　After 3 hours, we all get to the top of the mountain, and we bathed in the sunshing , looked forward . We all cheered with joy.

　　The activity is good to us. Not only did it give us relaxion from heavy work , but also get us close to nature. It also promoted the realationship . What a wonderful day!

爬山英语作文6

　　Yesterday was Saturday. Lin Jiali and I came to the Nanshan Mountain by Bus 226. We climbed and climbed. We are thirsty and tired. We stopped to climb and drank some water. Then we climbed again. Look! The Nanshan Mountain is very beautiful. The tree is green. The water is clean. The air and the land clean, too. So we took a lot of photos. It was fun. We were so happy.

　　Come and climb the Nanshan Mountain! You can do these things too.

　　昨天是星期六去爬山。 林佳力和我的总线 226 来，南山。 我们爬啊爬。 我们又渴又累了。 我们爬上停下来，喝了些水。 然后我们再爬山。 看看 ! 在南山是很美的。 树是绿色的。 水是干净的。 空气和土地太干净。 因此，我们花了很多。

爬山英语作文7

　　For the first time,I climbed to the top of the mountain and enjoyed the beautiful scenery.

　　It was a weekend when a good friend of mine asked me to climb a famous mountain here. Ive always heard of this mountain,but I havent found the time to climb it. So when my friend asked me out,I readily agreed.

　　On the way to climb mountains with my friends,we also met many climbers,including young people and old people. The young mans speed of climbing was fast,and he disappeared in a flash;the old mans climbing was very casual,at least slowly,with a happy face. Maybe young people climb the mountain to get to the top of the mountain,while old people climb the mountain to enjoy the scenery along the way.

　　My friends and I are neither the first nor the second. We will carefully taste the scenery along the way of climbing. The speed of climbing is not so fast and slow. Although its not as fast as those brothers who cant be seen in a moment,its faster than those masters.

　　When my friends and I climbed to the top of the mountain,it was the setting sun,and the red sun dyed the sky red,which was shocking enough. My friend and I found a place with a wide view. At a glance,the mountains were rolling. Those mountains were like a line of waves,rolling away to the distance.

　　"Wow,its beautiful!" I couldnt help sighing,and my friend followed. The scenery on the top of the mountain is really beautiful. Its the majestic atmosphere that makes people feel shocked. My friend and I stood at the top of the mountain for a long time. Finally,as the light in the sky became more and more dim,my friend and I went down the mountain reluctantly. When I went down the mountain with my friends,we were sitting in the corridor. We enjoyed the scenery. On this day,my friends and I got a lot.

　　The first time I climbed the mountain,I felt the fun of climbing the mountain,and also read the scenery of the mountain top. If I have time,I will go climbing again.

爬山英语作文8

　　Everyone will have some unforgettable memories. These big and small memories are like the shining stars in my memory,and one of them is the first time I read science books.

　　It was the second day of the summer vacation for Daban. It was sunny and a little sultry in the morning. My father said to me happily,"son,today my father will take you to climb the mountain and enjoy the beautiful scenery on the top of the mountain." I readily agreed. So we came to the famous Dayang mountain in Dongzhu.

　　My father and I went to the foot of the mountain,looked up,and could not see the top of Dayang mountain. My father said,"climb to the top of the mountain and you can enjoy the most beautiful scenery in the world." I look forward to my father.

　　At the beginning of climbing,I was full of energy and very relaxed. But when I climbed to the middle of the mountain,my body became heavier and heavier like lead. Dad saw me like this,so we rested for a while,and continued to climb up. After a long time,I saw that I was exhausted when I was near the top of the mountain. I begged dad to take me down the mountain. Dad encouraged me:"hold on a little longer,and soon I will be at the top of the mountain Well,the ancients said,"you will be at the top of the mountain and see all the small mountains." dont you want to experience this feeling?" I gasped and said,"Dad,I really cant climb. I cant move my legs anymore. I want to go back..." Dad helplessly took me down the mountain.

　　At that time,I didnt stick to it. Unfortunately,I missed the beautiful scenery at the top of the mountain. Ive learned that if I do anything,work hard and stick to it to the end,there will be gains. Study is also,persist in the end will achieve good results.

爬山英语作文9

　　For the first time in everyones experience!For example:the first time to ride a bicycle,write a book,play a com*r for the first time,keep a dog for the first time,etc!And my first time is climbing!

　　On a sunny holiday,our family unanimously decided to take exercise - climbing Maanshan!Maanshan ecological park is located in the south of Yangwu village,Daling mountain. The main peak is 329.2 meters above sea level. It is pided into two small peaks at the front and back. It is named Maanshan because of its shape similar to Maanshan. It used to be a quarry. All the stones mined were transported to all parts of the city as building materials,bringing considerable economic benefits to the local area and seriously damaging the ecological environment. In order to build a civilized,harmonious and ecological home,the village commi* decided to close the quarry and invest 5 million yuan to build it into an ecological park. Now there are Jinling,Qixingling,Jiti stone,Qilin mountain and other scenic spots. When I came to the foot of Maanshan,I stared at the top of Maanshan stupidly. In my mind,I thought of the complacent expression of climbing to the mountain. After that,I cant wait to follow the route to the top of the mountain!

　　At first,I was a living tiger,just like a hungry tiger,flying to the top of the mountain!The road is getting steeper and steeper,and the fork road runs across. Its half the way to the top of the mountain. After a long time,the physical strength is naturally consumed and the knowledge is not much. Im sweating!!Seeing thousands of houses,cars and pedestrians under my feet,I secretly encouraged myself:there is still a little way to go,stick to it,and soon climb to the top of the mountain,dont be discouraged,learn to stick to it on this road!Only persistence can make people succeed!Time flows silently on me. I climb to the top of the mountain. I am ecstatic and rush forward in one breath. Finally climbed to the top of the mountain!Ah!The scenery at the top of the mountain is so intoxicating and impressive!

　　As if everything under my feet is my world!The whole village can be seen clearly. I learned a truth from it,that is:in life,whether it is laid-off,or encountered difficulties,or be fired and so on. Dont be discouraged. As a human being,we should learn not to be discouraged in the face of difficulties. In all kinds of tests of life,just like climbing a mountain,we cant give up halfway,as long as we stick to it,we will succeed!

爬山英语作文10

　　Hi,every one.I'm Jane.I had fun yesterday.In the morning,I learned Chinese.My Chinese theacher is Miss.Lee,she is very kind and she always help me with my Chinese.She teached me about Chinese history.ANd I really love Chinese!Then I took some photos with my pet.My pet dog named Coco,it's cute.After that,I song and danced in the art club.iN THE END,I climbed the mountains with my parents.WE ate a lot of delicious food at the top of the mountains.During the daytime,I had a good time.I felt tired but I think I was happy.

　　大家好，我是简。我昨天玩得很开心。早上我学习了中文，我的中文老师是李**，她很善良并且经常帮助我中文。她教我*历史，我真的喜欢 中文。接着我和我的宠物拍了一些照片，我的宠物狗叫可可，它很可爱。接下来，我在艺术俱乐部唱歌跳舞。最后，我和父母去爬山，我们在山顶吃了很多美味的食物。在一整天的时间里，我玩的开心，虽然我感到累，但是我很快乐。

my father英语作文10篇（扩展7）

——节日英语作文10篇

节日英语作文1

　　My favorite holiday is New Year. It is a very important festival in Chinese culture. In fact, its the highlight of the year. Everyone returns home for a family reunion.We have a big feast and chat about all the things that have happened in our lives. People also visit each other. We exchange gifts and good wishes for the next year.

　　我最喜欢的节日是新年。在*文化中，新年是一个非常重要的节日。事实上，它是一年中最好的(日子)。每个人都回家与家人团聚。我们有一个比较大的盛会并且(与他人)畅聊所有发生在我们生活中的事。人们总是互相拜访。我们交换礼物和来年的祝福。

　　New Year is especially fun for kids. Thats because we get presents and treats, including red envelopes filled with money. We also get to set off fireworks. But we never forget that this holiday is a time to give thanks. We feel grateful for our family and the things that we have. Finally, we think about the future and the great year ahead.

　　对孩子来说，新年是一个特别快乐(的`日子)。因为我们可以得到礼物和乐趣，这其中就包括红包。我们也可以放烟火。但我们从未忘记新年是一个给予(他人)感恩的日子。我们对家人以及拥有的事物感恩。最后，我们考虑未来和美好的新一年。

节日英语作文2

　　Dragon Boat Festival, often known as Tuen Ng Festival or Duan Wu Festival, is a traditional Chinese festival held on the fifth day of the fifth month of the Chinese calendar. It is also known as the Double Fifth.[citation needed] It has since been celebrated, in various ways, in other parts of East Asia as well, most notably Korea.

　　The exact origins of Duan Wu are unclear, but one traditional view holds that the festival memorializes the Chinese poet Qu Yuan of the Warring States Period. He committed * by drowning himself in a river because he was disgusted by the corruption of the Chu government. The local people, knowing him to be a good man, decided to throw food into the river to feed the fishes to prevent them from eating Qus body. They also sat on dragon boats, and tried to scare the fishes away by the thundering sound of drums aboard the boat and the fierce looking dragon-head in the front of the boat.

　　In the early years of the Chinese Republic, Duan Wu was also celebrated as "Poets Day", due to Qu Yuans status as Chinas first poet of personal renown.

　　Today, people eat zongzi (the food originally intended to feed the fishes) and race dragon boats in memory of Qus dramatic death.

　　中文：

　　龙舟节，端午节经常或端午节，是一种传统的*节日对**历5月5日举行。它也被称为端五。[来源请求]它已经被庆祝，以各种方式在其他地区以及东亚，尤其是韩国。

　　端午确切的起源尚不清楚，但一种传统的观点认为，节日来源在*诗人屈原的战国时期。他犯的河中溺死自己，因为他是由*的**深恶痛绝楚**。当地群众，知道他是一个好人，决定投身到河里的鱼的食物，饲料，以防止吃屈原的尸体他们。他们还坐在龙舟，并试图吓唬由船上和激烈的寻找龙在船头头战鼓齐鸣声中的鱼了。

　　在***初年，段坞也被“诗人节“庆祝，由于屈原作为*的第一个著名的诗人的个人地位。

　　今天，人们吃粽子的曲的戏剧性**内存和龙舟比赛（原本打算饲料鱼类的食物）。

节日英语作文3

　　I am interested in the traditional festivals in the favorite is the Spring Festival, because it is the Chinese the most solemn traditional folk festivals.

　　Every year New Years day, the streets are full of red lanterns, families are labeled as the Spring Festival couplet, colorful flags fluttering. The mall is packed, buying necessities and lively.

　　Chinese New Year! Mother will prepare rich food, buy beautiful new clothes back to me. Dad bought fireworks and firecrackers, "bang, bang, bang." Firecrackers rung, and fireworks bursting in the air, colorful striped falling down, like a fairy scattering flowers, beautiful. Send red envelopes to our grandparents walked over and said: "happy New Year! Learning progress!" I took the red envelopes, and said, "thank you grandma and grandpa, I wish you longevity and health!" I, father, mother, grandpa, grandma came into the room, we eat fruit and see gala, really happy!

　　How busy Spring Festival! I love Spring Festival!

　　我感兴趣的传统节日中最喜欢的是春节，因为它是*民间最隆重的传统节日。

　　每年过年，街上挂满了红红的灯笼，家家户户都贴**春联，彩旗飘飘。商场里是人山人海，购买年货，可热闹了。

　　过年啦!妈妈会准备丰富的食物，还给我买漂亮的新衣服。爸爸买了烟花和鞭炮，“砰，砰，砰。”鞭炮响起来了，烟花在空中绽开，五颜六色的彩条飘落下来，就像仙女散花，美极了。爷爷奶奶笑呵呵地发红包给我们，还说：“新年快乐!学习进步!”我接过红包，并说：“谢谢爷爷奶奶，祝你们健康长寿!”我、爸爸、妈妈、爷爷、奶奶进屋了，我们一边吃水果一边看联欢晚会，真开心!

　　春节多么热闹啊!我爱春节!

节日英语作文4

　　My favorite festival is Christmas Day. It’s not the trditional for Chinese. It’s for the foreigners, which Christmas Day is to them what Spring Festival is us. But with the development of the society, more and more foreigners e to China. And then it is popular in China. I feel excited to see the Cristmas decoration and Christmas trees. I also like Santa Claus, who will give Christmas present for us under the table. And people will say ”Merry Cristmas” to each other on that day. It is wonderful to have a foreign festival.

节日英语作文5

　　National Day is ing,and we can have a seven-day.My family are going to Hainan.It's a good seaside city.We are staying there for a week. We are going to the beach and going swimming in the sea.We're visiting Tianya Haijiao,Wanquan River and many other beautiful places.I think we'll have a good time there.

节日英语作文6

　　China has many traditional festivals among the year. But I like Mid-Autumn Festival the most. It means harvest, because it is celebrated in the harvest season. And it is the time for famers to express their thanks for harvest. In addtion, it’s the day for reunion. Some people call it Tuanyuanjie. The people work or study far awayfromhome will come back to get-together with their families. They will eat a big meal and mooncake at that time. I hate parting but love reunion. So Mid-Autumn Day is my favorite festival.

节日英语作文7

　　I spent this holiday very quick, on the 1st May, we went to the Zoo, there were crowded there, so many travelers ing from all over the country to have some fun during the holidays.On 2nd May, I visited my relatives with my parents, we had a GREat lunch together, the resturant were crowded as well.On 3rd May, we went to shopping in the mall, after the shopping we went to watch a new movie. All the other days leftI didn't go anywhere, no only becasue I still have some homework,but also there were almost all crowded in everywhere!

节日英语作文8

　　The lunar August 15th is the annual Mid-Autumn festival. There are many theories about the origin of the festival, and there are many legends and traditions about the day. The Mid-Autumn festival is celebrated with the Spring Festival, the qingming festival and the Dragon Boat Festival.

　　Mid-Autumn festival this morning, I went to the grandmother home, mom and dad together Mid-Autumn festival, I am very happy, the way we went to the "happy 100" supermarket buy moon cakes and all kinds of snacks, buy moon cakes have really much ah, various head drive, everyone is busy choose moon cakes, moon cakes, a variety of forms, there is a small, a variety of shapes, different decorative pattern, is really beautiful.

　　To grandma's home, my grandmother was so happy that she welcomed us immediately, and we said to my grandmother, "happy Mid-Autumn festival!" It is. Grandma bring out already prepared delicious dumpling stuffing, start with noodles, rolling surface, the mother is responsible for package, dad and I didn't work, but I'm really very lively, all in a reunion atmosphere spent a happy Mid-Autumn festival...

　　We are together after dinner just dark down, I'll take out my telescope to like "white jade bowl the moon looked up, I saw a lot of black shadow on the moon, just like wu gang cut the legend of greening in fairy tales!

　　I picked up a piece of moon cake eat it, I found the white lotus double yellow in the moon cake stuffing is very delicious, I was reminded of a myth and legend, legend has it the ancient times, the goddess of the moon when the descent between day and countless moon cakes, and was on the day of the lunar calendar in August 15, so he has the habit of August 15 Mid-Autumn festival to eat moon cakes.

节日英语作文9

　　The August Moon Festival or Mid-Autumn Festival (Chinese characters above) is one of the traditional Chinese holidays. It is held on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month. Chinese legends say that the moon is at its brightest and roundest on this day. Based on the Gregorian calendar, this year's August Moon Festival will be held on September 19.

　　The August Moon Festival is often called the Women's Festival. The moon (Chinese character on right) symbolizes elegance and beauty. While Westerners worship the sun (yang or male) for its power, people in the Far East admire the moon. The moon is the 'yin' or female principle and it is a trusted friend. Chinese parents often name their daughters after the moon, in hope that they will be as lovely as the moon.

　　ending festivals produces several disadvantages such as money wasting and transportation overloading. But we cannot disregard its other side: traditional festivals play an active role in our life. Traditional festivals not only bring joy but also bring the family together, which is so priceless in modern society.

　　What we should do is to preserve the positive things and make them flourish in the modern world. As for the negative aspects of it, we should not hesitate to abandon them and prevent them from affecting and troubling us and the next generation.

节日英语作文10

　　Last March, my mother told my father and me that my grandfather would come in April. We were very happy because my grandfather was an interesting old man and he had not visited us since he went to Hong Kong. On April 1 my father and I bought a lot of food from the supermarket and bought a big bunch of flowers home.

　　Then we did some cleaning at home. At night when we were waiting for my grandfather, the bell rang andmy mother came in. She smiled to us and said "April fools"!

my father英语作文10篇（扩展8）

——英语分析作文10篇

英语分析作文1

　　1.描述图画

　　图画作文对图画的描述应在第一段进行，且最好在首句即开始。此类作文大部分是一幅图，也会有两幅图出现的情况。如果出现两幅图，则很有可能是突显对比的情况。

　　图画上可能没有任何文字，也可能在上面出现了一句话，也可以单个人物说话或两个人物对话，也可能在图画外写了总结性的一句话。大家注意，这一句话或两句话一般是非常重要的，应予译出。

　　一般说来，对图画的描写不必过长，应以简练、准确为标准。

　　2.图画类作文结构分析

　　我们想象中的最典型最理想的图画题提纲应该是下面这样：

　　1. 描述图画

　　2. 推导绘画者的意图

　　3. 做出评论

　　对于这一提纲我们来做具体分析，其中第三点更要细致研究。首先由图画引出一种社会现象或社会问题，可以是好的，也可以是不好的。在推导绘画者的意图时多是展开说此现象或问题的表现，以证明其引人注目。还有一种可能性是说此现象或问题产生的原因，提纲可直接列出，或还用上述提纲。这时可把简单意图推导直接放到第一段描述图画之后，而在第二段中说原因。

　　第三段做出评论，有可能只是简单评论、深化主题就结束，但这种可能性越来越小了。这一部分很可能说的是办法，不好的事情就是如何解决的办法，好的事情就是如何进一步发展的方法。

　　通过上述列表，我们可以看出，多年以来，真实的提纲是怎样一步步地向我们想象中的理想模式靠近的。对于提纲里面出现的变化和规律，我们来分析一下。

　　我们仔细分析，会发现历年考研真题基本上都呈现"现象或问题--原因解释--解决办法"这样的模式，但变化非常多。因为我们谈论的既可以是一件值得弘扬的好事，也可能是一个令人忧心忡忡的社会问题;针对后者我们极有可能需要提出做法;而对于前者，可能解释一下就结束了，也可能要写出相应的做法。

　　综上所述，可以看出，比起图表作文来，图画作文要更灵活，更富于变化。我们一定要多练习，以达到一看到图画(含图中和图边文字)和提纲(有时有文章标题)就能有效地审题解题，构造出合理的具体段落的目的。

　　这里面还有个问题，就是举例子，**来已明确出现了两次，这一点大家一定要多练习。

英语分析作文2

　　俗话说“千里之行始于足下”。英语书面表达能力的形成不是一日之功，必须从*时的课堂学习一点一滴抓起，持之以恒。

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　　一篇优秀的英语作文在内容和语言两方面应是一个**体，任何一方面的欠缺都会直接影响到作文的质量。然而，很多考生在写作中或者由于粗心大意，或者由于基本功不扎实而经常出现名词不变复数、第三人称单数不加s，前后不一致，以及时态语态、句子完整性等方面的错误。

　　1.审题不清

　　如20xx年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动，有些考生将作文的主题定位为“我最喜欢的活动”，偏离了“一项、课外活动”这一主题。依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被判为零分。

　　2.拼写错误

　　拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。

　　3.名词单复数问题

　　误：my father and my mother is all teacher。

　　正：my father and my mother are both teachers。

　　4.缺少动词

　　在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成，如：“我累了。”这个句子没有动词作谓语，而用形容词，但英语形容词不能作谓语，一定要写成：i'm tired。

　　误：i happy i can come to beijing zoo。

　　正：i am happy i can come to beijing zoo。

　　误：the apples cheap. i'll take some。

　　正：the apples are cheap.i'll take some。

　　5.缺少介词、冠词等

　　还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法，不了解中英文语言习惯的不同，也会出现明显的错误，造成丢分现象。

　　误：because heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。

　　正：because of the heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。

　　6.代词的误用

　　英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不可省略的，代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误。

　　误：i mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for i father。

　　正：my mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for my father。

　　7.句子不完整

　　有的考生因为对句子结构认识模糊，所以出现只写半句的现象，这也是造成失分的原因之一。

　　误：many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college.for example,my friend in high school。

　　(这段文章的第二句话没有动词，他不能**构成一个句子。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。)

　　正：many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college,for example,my friend in highs chool。

　　8.前后不一致

　　所谓不一致，包括数的'不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等。

　　例1.when one have knowledge,he can do what he want to do。

　　(人一旦有了知识，他就能想干什么就干什么。)

　　剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has;同理，want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致。

　　改为when one has knowledge,he can do what he wants(todo)。

　　9.时态、人称和数的搭配错误

　　汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化，而对英语来说，这些都至关重要。例：

　　误：when i get to the station the train leave。

　　正：when i got to the station the train had left。

　　10.综合性错误

　　综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等，以及形容词和副词的混淆、连词的误用等等。这些都是靠考生*时知识的积累，所以考生应该从*时练习出发，每天坚持写英语日记，多读适合自己英语水*的原版著作，提高自己的英语素养。

英语分析作文3

　　一、指代方面的错误

　　在使用代词it，he，this，that，which，one等时，前文中应出现明确的先行词。

　　如：Since we cannot know what particular bit of knowledge a child will need in the future，it is senseless to force him to learn it.，这句话中，him和it这两个代词都有明确的先行词，分别是a child和knowledge，因此句子的含义非常清楚。

　　可是，不少学生在使用这些代词时，虽然自己很清楚它们指代的是什么，但在作文中却没有交代清楚，结果这些代词非但没有使行文简洁，反而造成了意思上的模糊，让阅卷老师不知所云。

　　误：Sometimes teachers will inform students of the heavy burden they have to bear.

　　正：Sometimes the teacher will inform students of the heavy burden he has to bear.

　　【说明】句1中的they既可指教师，也可指学生，属指代不清的。可以把它们中的任意一个改成单数名词。因为单数名词也可以泛指一类。

　　二、修饰方面的错误

　　修饰语应紧靠被修饰的成分，并和它形成正确的逻辑关系。如果修饰语的位置不妥当，就会造出模棱两可的病句。

　　误：To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.

　　正：To keep the air clean, we must move the factories to the countryside if they give off poisonous gases.

　　【说明】句1要表达的是把有害气体排放到农村，还是把工厂迁到农村去?显然修饰语to the countryside的位置放错了。如句2改变一下结构，就能清楚地表达要表达的意思了。

　　三、一致方面的错误

　　在一个句子内部或紧邻的两三个句子之间，要保持时态、人称、数等的一致。

　　误：Whether one enjoys or resents advertisements, we are actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.

　　正：Whether we enjoy or resent advertisements, we are actually bombarded with them every hour of the day.

　　【说明】代词应与所指代的先行词保持人称和数上的一致。句1也可改成Whether one enjoys or resents the advertisement, he is actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.

　　四、*行结构方面的错误

　　这里专指语态、比较级、非谓语形式、冠词用法、可数名词和不可数名词、不定代词单复数以及时态等错误。

　　1、误：Narrow streets easily cause to happen many traffic accidents.

　　正：narrow streets easily cause many traffic accidents. (to happen)

　　误：A great change has been taken place since then.

　　正：A great change has taken place since then.

　　误：But it may occur some new problems.

　　正：But some new problems may occur/arise.

　　误：Opportunities are only belonged to those who work hard.

　　正：Opportunities only belong to those who work hard.

　　【说明】happen，take place，occur，arise等动词和动词词组一般既不能用作被动结构，也不能作为及物动词带宾语的'。但学生作文中类似的错误较多：Our country has taken place a great change in many fields.

　　2、误：The pace of our modern life is getting more faster and faster.

　　正：The pace of our modern life is getting faster and faster.

　　误：Electricity is the most important power in our daily life than other kinds of power.

　　正：Electricity is the most important power in our daily life.

　　误：Thus our city will be greatly beautiful than it is now.

　　正：Thus our city will be far more beautiful than it is now.

　　【说明】这些都是在使用比较形式时出现的错误。尤其是第1例较普遍。如more easier，more stronger等。

　　五、断句方面的错误

　　一句句子没有结束，又开始新的一句，结果造成句子结构不全，这就成为断句。

　　误：TV becomes an important part in our daily life. Because we cannot live without it.

　　正：TV becomes an important part in our daily life，because we cannot live without it.

　　【说明】以because，since，if等引导的从句是不能**成句的，只能依属于主句，所以不能写成另一句。

　　六、连词方面的错误

　　作文中缺少必要的连词，或错用连词的现象也比较普遍。

　　误：One should improve his English，one should overcome difficulties in studies.

　　正：If one wants to improve his English，he should overcome difficulties in studies.

　　【说明】学生在写作中往往意识不到连词的重要，不善于使用连词和连接副词来明确标示出因果关系、转折关系、递进关系等。

　　七、搭配方面的错误

　　学生作文中用词搭配方面的错误也占有较大比例。曾经在一次六级作文阅卷中，近千篇作文在表达上海交通越来越拥挤这个意思时，几乎没有一篇用 heavier，大多数人用的是The traffic in Shanghai is getting more and more crowded，而traffic是不能与crowded搭配的。

　　1、误：However the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle.

　　正：However the speed of a car is much higher than that of a bicycle.

　　【说明】speed只能和high，low，good，top，normal，fantastic，moderate，surprising等搭配，不能与fast，quick，slow搭配。但可以这样说A car is much faster in speed than a bicycle.

　　2、误：In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it.

　　正：In the past the price of milk was so high that most families couldnt afford it.

　　【说明】price只和high，low，inflated，moderate，minimum，original，popular，prevailing，published，reduced，reasonable等搭配，不能与expensive，cheap搭配，但可以说In the past，milk was so expensive that most families couldnt afford it.

　　由此可见，要提高对词语搭配的驾驭能力，除了要在*时的阅读过程中多积累，还需要克服中文中诸如速度快、价格贵、学习知识、人减少等搭配的影响，避免写出look book或see book这样的笑话来。

　　八、误用方面

　　学生作文中对词语的误用也相当普遍，误用词语不仅不能准确地表达作者的意思，而且也会闹出笑话。

　　1、误：With the industrious development，there is a great need for different kinds of energy.

　　正：With the industrial development，there is a great need for different kinds of energy.

　　2、误：Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which effect our daily life.

　　正：Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which affect our daily life.

　　【说明】以上错句都是因为对形容词的辨析不清而造成的。Industrious是勤劳的，工业上的应为industrial。effect一般用作名词，其动词形式表示产生、实现，而这里的意思是影响，应换成affect。

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　　⑴话题关注度

　　考研英语作文通常并非最热点，因为最热点也最容易被押中，对考生来说具有投机取巧的嫌疑，并不能真正的测试出考生的水*;此外，考题被押中也是命题的失败。所以一般来说考研写作的话题会是当年的次重点，可能和最热点有关系，也可能没有关系。

　　⑵写作前身

　　英语二是从20xx年开始设置的一门考试科目，但事实上它的历史并非如此短暂，它的前身是MBA，一提到这个很多人，尤其是学经济的小伙伴肯定都很熟悉了，有的人想多练练手，就把MBA的真题找出来做，但事实上MBA的真题并不需要做，因为事物的发展是一个逐渐成熟，逐渐发展壮大的过程，早些年的MBA的考题太过简单，不过建议大家，可以练习下MBA试卷的写作部分。

　　⑶图表作文考什么?

　　众所周知，英语二的写作就是以图表作文的形式出现，那图表作文侧重于考查什么内容呢?在英语老师看来，大纲要求上表明了主要考察考生观察数据的能力。但在分析的'时候，只抓住最有特点的数据进行分析就行，面面俱到就没有意义了。

　　⑷图表难易度

　　我们都知道，英语二考查的图表主要分为四类：柱状图、饼状图、线形图和表格图。其中，又以表格图为最难，饼状图最为简单，而柱状图的写作方法和线形图较为类似。

　　⑸段落安排

　　英语二的大作文都是essay，所谓的“essay”，不是散文，也不是随笔，而是短议论文。一般将其分成三段，而且遵循议论文的写作风格，按照提出问题、分析问题和解决问题的思路去行文就可以了。

　　⑹词汇

　　很多人觉得词汇就是在阅读部分的啊，只有认识单词就能看懂阅读，会做题了。写作部分也需要记单词吗?对于这个问题，考研英语老师的回答是肯定的。因为如果你不会写这个单词，又何谈遣词造句呢?所以，在日常的学习备考中，将写作中所会用到的单词都记住并掌握，不仅是重要的，而且是必须的。

英语分析作文5

　　为了能更好更全面的做好复习和迎考准备，确保将所涉及的'中考考点全面复习到位，让孩子们充满信心的步入考场，现特准备了中考英语作文被扣分的原因。

　　一：先看一下扣分点：

　　1.内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“I want to do something for my school”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的;若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。

　　2.字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

　　中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。但是60字的作文能不能得高分?从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

　　3. 语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计;

　　4. 标点错误：每4个扣0.5.

　　二：加分点

　　除了这些扣分点，还有一些得分点：比如说作文的**结构分，就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。

　　只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。例如，有一些“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。

　　其次就是卷面分

　　很多家长和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

　　据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。所谓的书法并不需要写的很漂亮，符合3个简单的标准即可：没有斜体、没有连笔、涂改较少。

英语分析作文6

　　俗话说“千里之行始于足下”。英语书面表达能力的形成不是一日之功，必须从*时的课堂学习一点一滴抓起，持之以恒。

　　一篇优秀的英语作文在内容和语言两方面应是一个**体，任何一方面的欠缺都会直接影响到作文的质量。然而，很多考生在写作中或者由于粗心大意，或者由于基本功不扎实而经常出现名词不变复数、第三人称单数不加s，前后不一致，以及时态语态、句子完整性等方面的错误。

　　1.审题不清

　　如20xx年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动，有些考生将作文的主题定位为“我最喜欢的活动”，偏离了“一项、课外活动”这一主题。依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被判为零分。

　　2.拼写错误

　　拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。

　　3.名词单复数问题

　　误：my father and my mother is all teacher。

　　正：my father and my mother are both teachers。

　　4.缺少动词

　　在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成，如：“我累了。”这个句子没有动词作谓语，而用形容词，但英语形容词不能作谓语，一定要写成：i'm tired。

　　误：i happy i can come to beijing zoo。

　　正：i am happy i can come to beijing zoo。

　　误：the apples cheap. i'll take some。

　　正：the apples are cheap.i'll take some。

　　5.缺少介词、冠词等

　　还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法，不了解中英文语言习惯的不同，也会出现明显的错误，造成丢分现象。

　　误：because heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。

　　正：because of the heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。

　　6.代词的误用

　　英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不可省略的，代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误。

　　误：i mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for i father。

　　正：my mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for my father。

　　7.句子不完整

　　有的考生因为对句子结构认识模糊，所以出现只写半句的现象，这也是造成失分的原因之一。

　　误：many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college.for example,my friend in high school。

　　(这段文章的第二句话没有动词，他不能**构成一个句子。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。)

　　正：many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college,for example,my friend in highs chool。

　　8.前后不一致

　　所谓不一致，包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等。

　　例1.when one have knowledge,he can do what he want to do。

　　(人一旦有了知识，他就能想干什么就干什么。)

　　剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has;同理，want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致。

　　改为when one has knowledge,he can do what he wants(todo)。

　　9.时态、人称和数的搭配错误

　　汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化，而对英语来说，这些都至关重要。例：

　　误：when i get to the station the train leave。

　　正：when i got to the station the train had left。

　　10.综合性错误

　　综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等，以及形容词和副词的混淆、连词的误用等等。这些都是靠考生*时知识的积累，所以考生应该从*时练习出发，每天坚持写英语日记，多读适合自己英语水*的原版著作，提高自己的.英语素养。

英语分析作文7

　　俗话说“千里之行始于足下”。英语书面表达能力的形成不是一日之功，必须从*时的课堂学习一点一滴抓起，持之以恒。

　　一篇优秀的英语作文在内容和语言两方面应是一个**体，任何一方面的欠缺都会直接影响到作文的质量。然而，很多考生在写作中或者由于粗心大意，或者由于基本功不扎实而经常出现名词不变复数、第三人称单数不加s，前后不一致，以及时态语态、句子完整性等方面的错误。

　　1.审题不清

my father英语作文50带翻译

　　如20xx年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动，有些考生将作文的主题定位为“我最喜欢的活动”，偏离了“一项、课外活动”这一主题。依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被判为零分。

　　2.拼写错误

　　拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。

　　3.名词单复数问题

　　误：my father and my mother is all teacher。

　　正：my father and my mother are both teachers。

　　4.缺少动词

　　在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成，如：“我累了。”这个句子没有动词作谓语，而用形容词，但英语形容词不能作谓语，一定要写成：i'm tired。

　　误：i happy i can come to beijing zoo。

　　正：i am happy i can come to beijing zoo。

　　误：the apples cheap. i'll take some。

　　正：the apples are cheap.i'll take some。

　　5.缺少介词、冠词等

　　还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法，不了解中英文语言习惯的不同，也会出现明显的错误，造成丢分现象。

　　误：because heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。

　　正：because of the heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。

　　6.代词的误用

　　英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不可省略的，代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误。

　　误：i mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for i father。

　　正：my mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for my father。

　　7.句子不完整

　　有的考生因为对句子结构认识模糊，所以出现只写半句的现象，这也是造成失分的原因之一。

　　误：many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college.for example,my friend in high school。

　　(这段文章的第二句话没有动词，他不能**构成一个句子。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。)

　　正：many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college,for example,my friend in highs chool。

　　8.前后不一致

　　所谓不一致，包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等。

　　例1.when one have knowledge,he can do what he want to do。

　　(人一旦有了知识，他就能想干什么就干什么。)

　　剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has;同理，want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致。

　　改为when one has knowledge,he can do what he wants(todo)。

　　9.时态、人称和数的搭配错误

　　汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化，而对英语来说，这些都至关重要。例：

　　误：when i get to the station the train leave。

　　正：when i got to the station the train had left。

　　10.综合性错误

　　综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等，以及形容词和副词的.混淆、连词的误用等等。这些都是靠考生*时知识的积累，所以考生应该从*时练习出发，每天坚持写英语日记，多读适合自己英语水*的原版著作，提高自己的英语素养。

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　　一、指代方面的错误

　　在使用代词it，he，this，that，which，one等时，前文中应出现明确的先行词。

　　如：Since we cannot know what particular bit of knowledge a child will need in the future，it is senseless to force him to learn it.，这句话中，him和it这两个代词都有明确的先行词，分别是a child和knowledge，因此句子的含义非常清楚。

　　可是，不少学生在使用这些代词时，虽然自己很清楚它们指代的是什么，但在作文中却没有交代清楚，结果这些代词非但没有使行文简洁，反而造成了意思上的模糊，让阅卷老师不知所云。

　　误：Sometimes teachers will inform students of the heavy burden they have to bear.

　　正：Sometimes the teacher will inform students of the heavy burden he has to bear.

　　【说明】句1中的they既可指教师，也可指学生，属指代不清的`。可以把它们中的任意一个改成单数名词。因为单数名词也可以泛指一类。

　　二、修饰方面的错误

　　修饰语应紧靠被修饰的成分，并和它形成正确的逻辑关系。如果修饰语的位置不妥当，就会造出模棱两可的病句。

　　误：To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.

　　正：To keep the air clean, we must move the factories to the countryside if they give off poisonous gases.

　　【说明】句1要表达的是把有害气体排放到农村，还是把工厂迁到农村去?显然修饰语to the countryside的位置放错了。如句2改变一下结构，就能清楚地表达要表达的意思了。

　　三、一致方面的错误

　　在一个句子内部或紧邻的两三个句子之间，要保持时态、人称、数等的一致。

　　误：Whether one enjoys or resents advertisements, we are actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.

　　正：Whether we enjoy or resent advertisements, we are actually bombarded with them every hour of the day.

　　【说明】代词应与所指代的先行词保持人称和数上的一致。句1也可改成Whether one enjoys or resents the advertisement, he is actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.

　　四、*行结构方面的错误

　　这里专指语态、比较级、非谓语形式、冠词用法、可数名词和不可数名词、不定代词单复数以及时态等错误。

　　1、误：Narrow streets easily cause to happen many traffic accidents.

　　正：narrow streets easily cause many traffic accidents. (to happen)

　　误：A great change has been taken place since then.

　　正：A great change has taken place since then.

　　误：But it may occur some new problems.

　　正：But some new problems may occur/arise.

　　误：Opportunities are only belonged to those who work hard.

　　正：Opportunities only belong to those who work hard.

　　【说明】happen，take place，occur，arise等动词和动词词组一般既不能用作被动结构，也不能作为及物动词带宾语的。但学生作文中类似的错误较多：Our country has taken place a great change in many fields.

　　2、误：The pace of our modern life is getting more faster and faster.

　　正：The pace of our modern life is getting faster and faster.

　　误：Electricity is the most important power in our daily life than other kinds of power.

　　正：Electricity is the most important power in our daily life.

　　误：Thus our city will be greatly beautiful than it is now.

　　正：Thus our city will be far more beautiful than it is now.

　　【说明】这些都是在使用比较形式时出现的错误。尤其是第1例较普遍。如more easier，more stronger等。

　　五、断句方面的错误

　　一句句子没有结束，又开始新的一句，结果造成句子结构不全，这就成为断句。

　　误：TV becomes an important part in our daily life. Because we cannot live without it.

　　正：TV becomes an important part in our daily life，because we cannot live without it.

　　【说明】以because，since，if等引导的从句是不能**成句的，只能依属于主句，所以不能写成另一句。

　　六、连词方面的错误

　　作文中缺少必要的连词，或错用连词的现象也比较普遍。

　　误：One should improve his English，one should overcome difficulties in studies.

　　正：If one wants to improve his English，he should overcome difficulties in studies.

　　【说明】学生在写作中往往意识不到连词的重要，不善于使用连词和连接副词来明确标示出因果关系、转折关系、递进关系等。

　　七、搭配方面的错误

　　学生作文中用词搭配方面的错误也占有较大比例。曾经在一次六级作文阅卷中，近千篇作文在表达上海交通越来越拥挤这个意思时，几乎没有一篇用 heavier，大多数人用的是The traffic in Shanghai is getting more and more crowded，而traffic是不能与crowded搭配的。

　　1、误：However the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle.

　　正：However the speed of a car is much higher than that of a bicycle.

　　【说明】speed只能和high，low，good，top，normal，fantastic，moderate，surprising等搭配，不能与fast，quick，slow搭配。但可以这样说A car is much faster in speed than a bicycle.

　　2、误：In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it.

　　正：In the past the price of milk was so high that most families couldnt afford it.

　　【说明】price只和high，low，inflated，moderate，minimum，original，popular，prevailing，published，reduced，reasonable等搭配，不能与expensive，cheap搭配，但可以说In the past，milk was so expensive that most families couldnt afford it.

　　由此可见，要提高对词语搭配的驾驭能力，除了要在*时的阅读过程中多积累，还需要克服中文中诸如速度快、价格贵、学习知识、人减少等搭配的影响，避免写出look book或see book这样的笑话来。

　　八、误用方面

　　学生作文中对词语的误用也相当普遍，误用词语不仅不能准确地表达作者的意思，而且也会闹出笑话。

　　1、误：With the industrious development，there is a great need for different kinds of energy.

　　正：With the industrial development，there is a great need for different kinds of energy.

　　2、误：Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which effect our daily life.

　　正：Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which affect our daily life.

　　【说明】以上错句都是因为对形容词的辨析不清而造成的。Industrious是勤劳的，工业上的应为industrial。effect一般用作名词，其动词形式表示产生、实现，而这里的意思是影响，应换成affect。

英语分析作文9

　　一、指代方面的错误

　　在使用代词it，he，this，that，which，one等时，前文中应出现明确的先行词。

　　如：Since we cannot know what particular bit of knowledge a child will need in the future，it is senseless to force him to learn it.，这句话中，him和it这两个代词都有明确的先行词，分别是a child和knowledge，因此句子的含义非常清楚。

　　可是，不少学生在使用这些代词时，虽然自己很清楚它们指代的是什么，但在作文中却没有交代清楚，结果这些代词非但没有使行文简洁，反而造成了意思上的模糊，让阅卷老师不知所云。

　　误：Sometimes teachers will inform students of the heavy burden they have to bear.

　　正：Sometimes the teacher will inform students of the heavy burden he has to bear.

　　【说明】句1中的they既可指教师，也可指学生，属指代不清的。可以把它们中的任意一个改成单数名词。因为单数名词也可以泛指一类。

　　二、修饰方面的错误

　　修饰语应紧靠被修饰的成分，并和它形成正确的逻辑关系。如果修饰语的位置不妥当，就会造出模棱两可的病句。

　　误：To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.

　　正：To keep the air clean, we must move the factories to the countryside if they give off poisonous gases.

　　【说明】句1要表达的是把有害气体排放到农村，还是把工厂迁到农村去?显然修饰语to the countryside的'位置放错了。如句2改变一下结构，就能清楚地表达要表达的意思了。

　　三、一致方面的错误

　　在一个句子内部或紧邻的两三个句子之间，要保持时态、人称、数等的一致。

　　误：Whether one enjoys or resents advertisements, we are actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.

　　正：Whether we enjoy or resent advertisements, we are actually bombarded with them every hour of the day.

　　【说明】代词应与所指代的先行词保持人称和数上的一致。句1也可改成Whether one enjoys or resents the advertisement, he is actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.

　　四、*行结构方面的错误

　　这里专指语态、比较级、非谓语形式、冠词用法、可数名词和不可数名词、不定代词单复数以及时态等错误。

　　1、误：Narrow streets easily cause to happen many traffic accidents.

　　正：narrow streets easily cause many traffic accidents. (to happen)

　　误：A great change has been taken place since then.

　　正：A great change has taken place since then.

　　误：But it may occur some new problems.

　　正：But some new problems may occur/arise.

　　误：Opportunities are only belonged to those who work hard.

　　正：Opportunities only belong to those who work hard.

　　【说明】happen，take place，occur，arise等动词和动词词组一般既不能用作被动结构，也不能作为及物动词带宾语的。但学生作文中类似的错误较多：Our country has taken place a great change in many fields.

　　2、误：The pace of our modern life is getting more faster and faster.

　　正：The pace of our modern life is getting faster and faster.

　　误：Electricity is the most important power in our daily life than other kinds of power.

　　正：Electricity is the most important power in our daily life.

　　误：Thus our city will be greatly beautiful than it is now.

　　正：Thus our city will be far more beautiful than it is now.

　　【说明】这些都是在使用比较形式时出现的错误。尤其是第1例较普遍。如more easier，more stronger等。

　　五、断句方面的错误

　　一句句子没有结束，又开始新的一句，结果造成句子结构不全，这就成为断句。

　　误：TV becomes an important part in our daily life. Because we cannot live without it.

　　正：TV becomes an important part in our daily life，because we cannot live without it.

　　【说明】以because，since，if等引导的从句是不能**成句的，只能依属于主句，所以不能写成另一句。

　　六、连词方面的错误

　　作文中缺少必要的连词，或错用连词的现象也比较普遍。

　　误：One should improve his English，one should overcome difficulties in studies.

　　正：If one wants to improve his English，he should overcome difficulties in studies.

　　【说明】学生在写作中往往意识不到连词的重要，不善于使用连词和连接副词来明确标示出因果关系、转折关系、递进关系等。

　　七、搭配方面的错误

　　学生作文中用词搭配方面的错误也占有较大比例。曾经在一次六级作文阅卷中，近千篇作文在表达上海交通越来越拥挤这个意思时，几乎没有一篇用 heavier，大多数人用的是The traffic in Shanghai is getting more and more crowded，而traffic是不能与crowded搭配的。

　　1、误：However the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle.

　　正：However the speed of a car is much higher than that of a bicycle.

　　【说明】speed只能和high，low，good，top，normal，fantastic，moderate，surprising等搭配，不能与fast，quick，slow搭配。但可以这样说A car is much faster in speed than a bicycle.

　　2、误：In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it.

　　正：In the past the price of milk was so high that most families couldnt afford it.

　　【说明】price只和high，low，inflated，moderate，minimum，original，popular，prevailing，published，reduced，reasonable等搭配，不能与expensive，cheap搭配，但可以说In the past，milk was so expensive that most families couldnt afford it.

　　由此可见，要提高对词语搭配的驾驭能力，除了要在*时的阅读过程中多积累，还需要克服中文中诸如速度快、价格贵、学习知识、人减少等搭配的影响，避免写出look book或see book这样的笑话来。

　　八、误用方面

　　学生作文中对词语的误用也相当普遍，误用词语不仅不能准确地表达作者的意思，而且也会闹出笑话。

　　1、误：With the industrious development，there is a great need for different kinds of energy.

　　正：With the industrial development，there is a great need for different kinds of energy.

　　2、误：Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which effect our daily life.

　　正：Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which affect our daily life.

　　【说明】以上错句都是因为对形容词的辨析不清而造成的。Industrious是勤劳的，工业上的应为industrial。effect一般用作名词，其动词形式表示产生、实现，而这里的意思是影响，应换成affect。

英语分析作文10

　　⑴话题关注度

　　考研英语作文通常并非最热点，因为最热点也最容易被押中，对考生来说具有投机取巧的嫌疑，并不能真正的测试出考生的水*;此外，考题被押中也是命题的失败。所以一般来说考研写作的话题会是当年的次重点，可能和最热点有关系，也可能没有关系。

　　⑵写作前身

　　英语二是从20xx年开始设置的一门考试科目，但事实上它的历史并非如此短暂，它的前身是MBA，一提到这个很多人，尤其是学经济的小伙伴肯定都很熟悉了，有的人想多练练手，就把MBA的真题找出来做，但事实上MBA的真题并不需要做，因为事物的发展是一个逐渐成熟，逐渐发展壮大的过程，早些年的MBA的考题太过简单，不过建议大家，可以练习下MBA试卷的写作部分。

　　⑶图表作文考什么?

　　众所周知，英语二的写作就是以图表作文的形式出现，那图表作文侧重于考查什么内容呢?在英语老师看来，大纲要求上表明了主要考察考生观察数据的能力。但在分析的时候，只抓住最有特点的数据进行分析就行，面面俱到就没有意义了。

　　⑷图表难易度

　　我们都知道，英语二考查的图表主要分为四类：柱状图、饼状图、线形图和表格图。其中，又以表格图为最难，饼状图最为简单，而柱状图的写作方法和线形图较为类似。

　　⑸段落安排

　　英语二的大作文都是essay，所谓的“essay”，不是散文，也不是随笔，而是短议论文。一般将其分成三段，而且遵循议论文的写作风格，按照提出问题、分析问题和解决问题的思路去行文就可以了。

　　⑹词汇

　　很多人觉得词汇就是在阅读部分的啊，只有认识单词就能看懂阅读，会做题了。写作部分也需要记单词吗?对于这个问题，考研英语老师的.回答是肯定的。因为如果你不会写这个单词，又何谈遣词造句呢?所以，在日常的学习备考中，将写作中所会用到的单词都记住并掌握，不仅是重要的，而且是必须的。