Please note that we want to set up a music club in our school. You are good at music. Can you sing, dance, play the piano? You can play the guitar or other musical instruments.

If you can join us, you want to be a musician. If your answer is yes, please join us. Please call us.

If you want to join us, welcome to our club. We want musicians to join our club You are good at music. Can you sing, dance, play piano and guitar? If you want to join us, please join us.

Welcome to our club.

中文翻译：

注意，请我们想在我们学校成立一个音乐俱乐部你擅长音乐你会唱歌跳舞会弹钢琴吗你会弹吉他或其他乐器如果你能加入我们你想成为一名音乐家如果你的回答是是的请加入我们请打来如果你想加入我们欢迎来到我们的俱乐部我们希望音乐家加入我们的俱乐部你擅长音乐你会唱歌跳舞会弹钢琴弹吉他吗如果你想加入我们欢迎加入我们欢迎加入我们俱乐部。

The Bronx family album) and put it on billboards for everyone to see, but how can you see it when people rush by on the interstate? She asked, _don't worry, mom. They just rush by in the morning and in the morning. Commuters are everywhere on the interstate.

No one moves. They tell her that it only costs one dollar a month, so she spends most of the money. A month later, Clyde rents a month's billboard, but Clyde doesn't show up because she has little money.

Mrs. Brown called the local news to see if anyone could help her rent the billboard for a month. She was waiting, but so far, no one had come forward.

中文翻译：

布朗斯家族专辑）并把它放在广告牌上，让所有人都能看到，但是当人们在州际公路上匆匆经过时，怎么能看到它呢？她问哦，别担心，妈妈，他们每天只在上午和上午之间匆匆经过，州际公路上到处都是通勤者，没有人搬家，他们告诉她每月只需花1美元，所以她把大部分钱都掏出来了一个月过去了，克莱德租了一个月的广告牌，但克莱德没有出现，因为她几乎没有存款。布朗太太打电话给当地报纸，想看看是否有人能帮她把广告牌租一个月，她正在等待，但到目前为止，还没有人站出来。

Beyond beyond is the prince of music. He was born in the music songs on the stage. He is the lamb of God in real life.

He is the spiritual pillar of the young generation. Numerous TV programs have taken his music as the theme song. Asian singers have repeatedly covered the top of his classic songs, leading the band beyond to bring Guangdong music into the trend of the times and unfortunately fell off the stage His death is not only a great loss, but also an end to the trend of Cantonese music.

中文翻译：

BeyondBeyond他是音乐的王子，他出生于舞台上的音乐歌曲，他是现实生活中上帝的羔羊，他是年轻一代的精神支柱无数的电视节目，电影以他的音乐为主题歌，亚洲歌手也多次翻唱他的经典歌曲巅峰，带领乐队Beyond将广东音乐带入时代潮流，不幸地从舞台上摔了下来，那一首好的笔记心脏停止跳动，他的死不仅是巨大的损失之外，更是宣告引领时代潮流的粤语音乐的终结。

My favorite club is the music club. I can play the piano, I can play the trumpet, I can play the violin, I can play the drum, I can learn to sing. I like this club very much.

I go to the club after school every day. I like music very much. I can have a good time in the music club.

I want to be a musician one day.

中文翻译：

我最喜欢的俱乐部是音乐俱乐部我会弹钢琴我会吹小号我会拉小提琴我会打鼓我也会学歌唱歌我很喜欢这个俱乐部我每天放学后都去俱乐部我非常喜欢音乐我可以在音乐俱乐部度过美好的时光我想有一天成为一名音乐家。

My favorite band. I want to talk about my favorite band, Westlife boys. You know, you don't know how great they are.

I bet Westlife is one of the most famous bands in the world. Four guys come from Ireland. They have a good view and a good voice.

They sing a lot of classic songs, such as _season under the sun_, _my love_, I put my love On you, yoaised me, and when you told me you loved me, I didn't know how to describe them in one word. They were really cute. I did like them, especially Nick, who looked like a million dollars.

To my disappointment, Nicky got married. His wife was the daughter of the Irish Prime Minister. Anyway, if he didn't marry her, he would marry another beautiful girl The music and lyrics are very good.

I like to listen to their songs. When I feel lonely or the songs before bed are peaceful, they make me feel comfortable and peaceful. Of course, I also like other types of music.

I like hip hop, rap, R & B, rock, jazz and so on. It's a wonderful thing for people.

中文翻译：

我最喜欢的乐队我想谈谈我最喜欢的乐队西城男孩你肯定知道，你不知道他们有多了不起我打赌西城男孩是世界上最著名的乐队之一四个家伙来自爱尔兰他们有很好的观赏性和很好的声音他们唱了很多经典的歌曲，比如《阳光下的季节》，《我的爱》，我把我的爱放在你身上，你把我养大，当你告诉我你爱我的时候我不知道怎么用一个词来形容他们，他们真的很可爱我确实喜欢他们，特别是尼克看起来像百万美元让我失望，尼基结婚了他的妻子是爱尔兰的女儿不管怎样，如果他不娶她，他会的嫁给另一个漂亮的女孩旋律和歌词都很好我喜欢听他们的歌当我感到孤独或睡前的歌曲是和平的，他们让我感到舒适和和平当然我也喜欢其他类型的音乐，我喜欢嘻哈，说唱，R&B，摇滚，爵士乐等等音乐对人们来说是一件美妙的事情。

Our school music club needs musicians. Our school music club needs some students. Do you like music? You can sing and dance.

You are good at musical instruments. You can play guitar, drum or violin. But later, please call me at our school music club.

中文翻译：

我们学校音乐俱乐部需要音乐家我们学校音乐俱乐部需要一些学生你喜欢音乐吗你会唱歌会跳舞你擅长乐器你会弹吉他，鼓或小提琴然后来我们学校音乐俱乐部请打给我。

Thank you so much for writing to me, dear Bob. Now I want to tell you something about my hometown Wenzhou. Located on the Bank of the Yangtze River, the city is a beautiful place where people live.

In the past decade, the economy has developed rapidly. New factories, houses and more schools and hospitals have been built for residents to use. But I think there are still some problems, such as water and air pollution, and traffic congestion during rush hours.

Wenzhou should develop its economy scientifically. I also think that population growth should be controlled. In this way, we will have a better hometown, your Xiaohua.

中文翻译：

亲爱的鲍勃，非常感谢你写信给我，让我了解你美丽的城市。现在我想告诉你一些关于我家乡温州的事。这座城市坐落在长江岸边，是一个美丽的人们居住的地方。

在过去的xx年里，经济发展很快。新工厂，房子和已经建成了更多的学校和医院可供居民使用，但我认为还有一些问题，如水和空气污染，以及高峰时段交通拥挤，温州应该科学发展经济，我也认为应该控制人口增长，这样我们将来会有一个更好的家乡，你的小华。

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The following was written as a part of an application for a small business loan by a group of developers in the city of Monroe:

_A jazz music club in Monroe would be a tremendously profitable enterprise. Currently, the nearest jazz club is 65 miles away; thus, our proposed club, the _ote, would have the local market all to itself. Plus, jazz is extremely popular in Monroe: over 100,000 people attended Monroe's jazz festival last summer, several well-known jazz musicians live in Monroe, and the highest-rated radio program in Monroe is 'Jazz Nightly,' which airs every weeknight. Finally, a nationwide study indicates that the typical jazz fan spends close to $1,000 per year on jazz entertainment. It is clear that the _ote cannot help but make money._

【满分范文赏析】

This loan applicant claims that a jazz club in Monroe would be a profitable venture. To support this claim the applicant points out that a jazz club in Monroe would face no competition, as the nearest club is 65 miles away. He also cites various other evidences that jazz is popular among Monroe residents. Careful examination of this supporting evidence, however, reveals that it lends little credible support to the applicant's claim.

【本段结构】

本文采用了标准的Argument开头段结构，即C—A—F的开头结构。本段首先概括原文的Conclusion，之后简要提及原文为支持其结论所引用的一系列Assumption及细节，最后给出开头段到正文段的过渡句，指出原文的Flaw，即这些Assumption无法让原文逻辑上没有问题。

【本段功能】

作为Argument开头段，本段具体功能就在于发起攻击并概括原文的结论，即在Monroe地区开办一个爵士乐俱乐部是有利可图的。本段接下来提到了原文中为支持之前的Conclusion所提供的证据，包括，在该地区不存在竞争对手，以及在该地区爵士乐非常流行。文章提及这些信息，为是在正文段中对这些Assumption即将进行的具体攻击做铺垫。

First of all, if the demand for a live jazz club in Monroe were as great as the applicant claims, it seems that Monroe should already have one or more such clubs. The fact that the closest jazz club is 65 miles away reveals a point of uncertainty, which should be reserved for further study. Since the applicant has not adequately responded to this concern, his claim that the proposed club would be profitable is untenable.

【本段结构】

本段采用了标准的Argument正文段结构，即先是提及原文的第一个逻辑错误，之后分析该逻辑错误的原因，接下来，进一步分析这样的错误为什么让原文的Conclusion不成立。

【本段功能】

作为正文第一段，本段攻击原文所犯的第一个重要逻辑错误——因果类错误。原文当中提到，虽然爵士乐在当地很流行，但是在Monroe当地并没有爵士乐俱乐部，所以在Monroe并不存在俱乐部的竞争者。但相反，这个假设的因果关系可能被颠倒了，即正是因为爵士乐在当地需求量不高导致当地不存在爵士乐俱乐部。所以，原文当中的这个观点不合理。

Thirdly, while several well-known jazz musicians live in Monroe, their residing in Monroe lend little significant support to the applicant's claim. It is entirely possible that these musicians perform elsewhere, perhaps at the club located 65 miles away. This would go a long way toward explaining why Monroe does not currently have a jazz club, and it would weaken the applicant's assertion that the C-Note would be profitable.

【本段结构】

本段采用了标准的Argument正文段结构，即先是提及原文的第三个逻辑错误，之后分析该逻辑错误的原因，接下来，进一步分析这样的错误为什么让原文的Conclusion不成立。

【本段功能】

作为正文第三段，本段攻击原文所犯的第三个重要逻辑错误——因果类错误。原文假设因为在Monroe当地有很多爵士乐音乐家，他们的存在会促进C-Note这个爵士乐俱乐部的盈利。但实际上这些音乐家可能不会更倾向于在当地的俱乐部演出。因此，原文的这个关于音乐家和俱乐部盈利的因果假设是没有说服力的。

Finally, the nationwide study showing that the average jazz fan spends $1,000 each year on jazz entertainment would lend support to the applicant's claim only if it could be determined that a portion of this budget would certainly be allocated for the use of enjoyment in a new club.

【本段结构】

本段采用了标准的Argument正文段结构，即先是提及原文的第三个逻辑错误，之后分析该逻辑错误的原因，接下来，进一步分析这样的错误为什么让原文的Conclusion不成立。

【本段功能】

作为正文第四段，本段攻击原文所犯的第四个重要逻辑错误——样本类错误。原文假设国家性质的调查能够等同于当地的情况。但实际上当地的个体情况可能并非如此，因此原文的这个观点是没有说服力的。

*Ee5aebmuzhimi's first lesson of the new semester, ATV's course on self-protection in emergency situations, aims to provide school students with knowledge of self-protection. It will help students in the event of natural disasters such as earthquakes, fires, snowstorms or floods. Many examples show that enough knowledge of self-protection and enough courage and willpower can help many people survive.

The most recent example is the earthquake in Sichuan Province in May. At that time, hundreds of students were killed by the collapsed school buildings. Even if no one was injured, all the students in a middle school could survive because they evacuated in a timely and orderly manner.

I am glad to see that this project is the most important activity for students to improve their personal safety awareness. With the development of modern science and technology, China's Ministry of education has called on schools across the country to teach students self-protection knowledge in case of emergency. Private cars are no longer a luxury for ordinary people.

More and more people drive to work instead of taking buses. The popularization of private cars has many advantages: first, it is very convenient and time-saving. You can drive to work by yourself, instead of waiting for crowded buses or worrying about being late for work.

It can also improve the traffic structure and reduce the traffic pressure. Third, the popularity of private cars helps to promote the development of the automobile industry and other related industries. I believe that in the future, the private car will become the most important car, we can not do without it ithttp://wwmuzhimicom/a//html.

中文翻译：

*ee5aebmuzhimi新学期的第一课，aTV关于紧急情况下如何自我保护的课程，旨在向学校学生提供自我保护的知识，它将帮助学生在发生地震、火灾、暴风雪或洪水等自然灾害时帮助学生。许多例子表明，有足够的自我保护知识只要有足够的勇气和意志力，就可以帮助许多人幸存下来。最近的例子是xx月四川省的地震，当时有数百名学生被倒塌的校舍炸死，一所中学的所有学生即使没有一人受伤，也能幸免于难，因为他们及时、有序地疏散很高兴看到这个项目是全国学生提高人身安全意识的最重要的活动。

随着现代科技的发展，中国号召全国各所学校在紧急情况下向学生传授自我保护知识，私家车对普通人来说已不再是一件奢侈的事情，越来越多的人开车去上班而不是坐公交车。普及私家车有很多优点：第一，它非常方便，省时，你可以自己开车去上班，而不用等拥挤的公交车，也不用担心上班迟到，它还可以改善交通结构，减轻交通压力。第三，私家车的普及有助于促进汽车工业和其他相关产业的发展。

我相信，在未来，私家车将成为最重要的汽车，我们离不开它ithttp://wwmuzhimicom/a//html。