my holiday英语作文1

　　We are going to have the winter holiday.During the holiday we will have the Spring Festival.So all of the families in China are having a busy time.All of the children in China like Spring Festival very much,because they can eat many delicious food and get many money.But children in China have to do the homework for Winter Holiday.So that the could remember what they have learn the year before.Each of the children likes Winter Holiday.

　　I think everybody did a lot of things in the Winter Holiday. But I didn’t. Let you to listen to my story of Winter Holiday.

　　I spend a lot of time on the homework.. Every day in my Winter Holiday, I always got up late. Then I listened to the tape, it was nine o’clock. Then I ate breakfast and then I did my homework during the daytime! I’m not very slow but the homework was too heavy!

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my holiday英语作文10篇（扩展1）

——my,dream大学英语满分作文5篇

my,dream大学英语满分作文1

　　Everyone has their own dreamsSo do I.An old saying:Great dreams make great man.It is very important to dreamSo hold on to your dreams;One day they may just come ture.You must believe:Where there is a willthere is a way.

　　My dream is to be an expert in English.You may ask:Why can like this?I will tell you:In factI have a lot of reasons.

　　FirstBecause English is an international language now.It is widely used in the world.Just the study of English makes life so colorful.English is taught throughout the world.So we must learn English.

　　NextBecause we need a common language to communicate.This kind of language is English.I would like to walk out of Chinainto the world.I love my motherlandChinaI will let her become more prosperous and powerful.

　　FinallyBecause I am going to promate Chinese culture everywhere.I am going to teach Chinese all over the world.I can undoubtedlly change the world for the better!

　　I do not give up my dream no matter what happens.Nothing is difficult in the world if you put your heart into it.I feel strongly that I can make it.Let us make miracles together!

my,dream大学英语满分作文2

　　Dream, avers, countless people in compiling the dream of frustrations. At night, when the dark dream of fire happens, bring people farther and nearly hope suddenly. It floats in the imagination and expect, is the people heart longing.

　　In reality, under the impact of dreams just peace of mind, make life more than a light. Established in persistent dream forever, sweat, and tears, overlooking efforts over the past: the great Madame Curie to benefit human, hard struggle for life, and finally produced a pure radium. Her life though because long-term accept radioactive substances stimulation and gone, but she dreamers never stop footstep. She used her dream, write down the eternal life.

　　But we, because many obstacles and stopped because of laziness, or heart and give up the dream. Don't flashy longing dream will come true, also don't immersed in a busy and noisy. Choose the right way, so you must go, no matter how long the road ahead, regardless of whether, as long as have danger "and a" belief, came to the joy of dreams, is far away from you will also?

　　The dream is flower seeds, the eagle's dream is ready to fly. "Li-an old hero, costraint", even a nag are able to support the weak body dream. So, whether we should be more young take advantage of this wonderful time chasing the dream trace?

　　Dream, it is like the butterfly wings, with beautiful we capture it, But it is more like a fragrance pubi fragrance, we find it, temptation to catch a refreshing "to". Also no wonder that someone will give up the pursuit of dreams, because "the real dream too is". Don't dream really so hard to reach? No, because those who are too greed, will put the dream with high places, all day but never considered himself ever reach the dream. When it is discovered, he is already dispirited and discouraged, no interest in exploring the dream again.

　　Dream really so far? In fact, it might be far ahead, are you looking forward to your hand, eagerly. Or, it in the corner, prepare crossroads in unexpected jumped out when you scare you jump, give you a surprise. It may be illusory dreams, perhaps is immensely. The life forever, because dream and flash.

　　In the streets to see the girl singing a song, sweet singing on stage, this should now, but in the eyes of silent singing. Oh, don't disturb her, don't think she is poor, you know, she is in order to realize her dream and playing well. In the persistent efforts, sweat, and tears filled with turn your heart, your dreams will release its.

my,dream大学英语满分作文3

　　I want to be an inventor in the future. I want to invent new things such as AI robots, new energy cars and electronics ,etc. For example, I will make a new energy car, because there is too much pollution. It can make use of wastes as energy and when there is a traffic jam ,it can fly in sky and drive into water ,it can be faster, more comfortable and convenient . I want to make the world better, I'll follow my dream.

my,dream大学英语满分作文4

　　when i was a naughty boy, may be because of the influence of the film."iao bing zhang ga",my dream was to be a soldier just like zhang ga. i thought if i was a soldier, i should be able to swim, pe and climb trees as he did. it seemed to be very wonderful. so i began to learn swimming, ping and climbing trees. i practiced every day and finally i could do them well. but when i entered junior high school and had the military training. i suddenly found that being a soldier was very difficult and i wasn＇t strong enough to bear it . i had to give my dream up.

　　but i wasn＇t discouraged, and i had new aim, which was to be a postman, or rather to be a newspaper boy. as a newspaper boy. i could speed along streets on a bike and throw newspapers onto every porch. that＇s also very cool. so i started learning to ride a bicycle. after the everyday practice, i could go very fast by bicycle. but to my disappointment, the job which i wanted only eisted in western counties not in china, because there was no porch in china. and chinese postmen had to stuff very thick newspapers into very small mailboes from very narrow entrances. the job was far from what i had epected. so once again my dream fell through.

　　perhaps you have had the same eperience as i and most of your dreams haven＇t come true yet. but i think it doesn＇t matter, because if you have a dream, you＇ll make many efforts to realize it. this course is really important. if i hadn＇t dreamt of being a soldier or a newspaper boy. i wouldn＇t have learned to swim, to pe, to climb trees or to ride a bicycle. even if our dream can＇t come true, you＇ll learn much from the efforts you have made. so what i want to tell us is that dream helps us to grow up and teaches us how to control our lives . it is dream that gives us power and makes our lives colorful

my,dream大学英语满分作文5

　　When I was small, because often sick, and often go to see a doctor. Every time a doctor my disease good, I think the doctor is like a magician, very strong, very magical, I dream I can be a doctor when he grows up.

　　Didn't go to school before I like and grandpa play the game of doctors and patients. Grandpa and I are so play, pretend grandpa is sick, come to me to see a doctor, I took a toy stethoscope help grandpa hear here, listen to there, although I don't know should listen to what position, but I listened very carefully, and then I find a piece of paper as records, drawing on the paper, wildly seriously say: "the patient, you have the cold, need an injection." Then I took the toy needle and cotton buds, alcohol to disinfect with a bowl of water, I solemnly to help grandpa disinfection, give or take an injection, and prescribed some medicine, and finally told him: "the patient, must take medicine on time, drink more boiled water, so your condition will soon be ok."

　　Gradually I grow up, I know grandpa and grandma already have diabetes, high blood pressure, my grandma body is not good, there are frequent dizziness, vertigo once grandmother also fell handles all hurt, they are my most close relatives, I don't want they get sick, I hope they healthy, so I more determined to grow up to be a doctor, because the doctor can make sick people rehabilitation, let people away from pain.

　　This is what I always dream of.

my holiday英语作文10篇（扩展2）

——holiday英语作文5篇

holiday英语作文1

　　Summer holiday has already come. How happy am I!

　　The favorite thing I wanna do is traveling. I joined an outdoor club and went to the seaside in Zhejiang province with other members. On July 20, we started our journey at 21:00 in the evening. I was so sleepy that I fell asleep in the bus.

　　Suddenly someone was pushing me. I opened my eyes and a beautiful sea was right there. What a beautiful place! We swam in the sea and played beach volleyball. The wind, the sunshine, the blue sky and the happy boys and girls formed a wonderful picture! At noon, we cooked seafood like crabs, shrimps, seashells and so on. They are all so delicious.

　　My mouth is now watering again. I will never forget such interesting expirence.

holiday英语作文2

　　Hello! My name is Zhu Hao. I like summer holiday very much.

　　Summer holiday is a long holiday. There are two months. So I can do a lot of things I like. I can go swimming, go for a travel, play with my friends and so on. Last summer holiday, I went to America. I enjoyed the beautiful world under the sea of Hawaii in a U-boat. In the sea, I saw a lot of beautiful fishes, the fishes have beautiful colours, such as red, yellow, blue…… But when I in the deep sea, I surprised that I can’t see red! That’s interesting. After a long time, we went back to the ground. We all had a wonderful time.

　　Do you envy me? Ha ha!

holiday英语作文3

　　Summer holiday is coming . I will travel to Hang zhou with my friends . we will go to Hang zhou is graffiti wall painting. I will go to the playground in Hang zhou.

　　Because i heard that the people of the wheel will be very happy. I hope that wu have a smooth journey. Have a good time ! If you want to travel with us, you can contact me before 20.

holiday英语作文4

　　Summer Holiday

　　Our summer holiday is coming. How exciting! It will last for two months. What shall I do in my summer holiday? Let me tell you.

　　In the morning, I get up at 7:00, and read some books in the yard. Then I have breakfast with my family. After breakfast, I help my father with the farm work. I look after the cow when it eats grass in the fields. It’s very hot, but I’m happy.

　　In the afternoon, I do my homework at home. Sometimes I help my mother cook supper. After supper, I watch TV. I like to watch cartoons. It’s very interesting.

　　I go to bed early, because I’ll get up early the next day.

holiday英语作文5

　　Now, the summer holiday is coming to the end. I really spend a rich but happy holiday. As a junior student, I am not totally free in the summer holiday, because study is still an important part in my life.

　　In the first month of the holiday, I study at home to finish my homework. There are many tasks I have to finish. Besides, I have to go to the English and mathtraining class, because I am weak inthe two subjects. Therefore, I need some extra training. After that, I visit to my father with my mother. My father works in other province and I have not seen him for half a year.

　　My mother and I miss him very much. We spend near a month with him.When my father is free, he often takes us go out. We are happy together.

my holiday英语作文10篇（扩展3）

——My英语作文5篇

My英语作文1

　　I have a dog. My dog name is DuDu. DuDu is 9 years. DuDu is fat. It wears a white coat. DuDu has two big eyes and two small ears. It has one short mouth. My dog is smart. I like my dog. Do you like it?

　　我的狗

　　我有一只狗。我的狗名叫杜都。都都是9年。都都是脂肪。它穿着一件白大褂。嘟嘟有两只大眼睛和两只小耳朵。它有一个简短的'嘴巴。我的狗很聪明。我喜欢我的狗。你喜欢它吗?

My英语作文2

　　Everybody has a wish, but thry're all different. me, too, also have a wish. what is my wish, do you want to know? my wish is , i have that wish because . my wish might not be something that's great, but it's my wish. it's very important to me, no what have happened.

My英语作文3

　　今天的天气虽然不怎么好，可是我的心情是阳光明媚的，因为昨天我写了一篇作文发表到优秀作文网**，这是大家对我的认可和鼓励，写作的道路上我才刚刚起步，虽然前方的路还很漫长，但是我相信有了我向老师虚心实意的求教，妈妈不辞辛劳的辅导以及我自己的不懈努力，我一定会越走越好，越走越远的。

　　Today's weather is not so good, but my mood is sunny, because yesterday I wrote a composition and published it on the excellent composition website, which is everyone's recognition and encouragement for me. I just started on the road of writing, although the road ahead is still very long, but I believe that with my modest and practical advice from the teacher, my mother's painstaking guidance and my own My unremitting efforts, I will go better and further.

　　今天的我很快乐，虽然我并没有得到什么，但我感觉自己也能做一些事情了。

　　Today I am very happy, although I did not get anything, but I feel that I can do something.

My英语作文4

　　In ten years,I think the I‘ll be a reporter.I‘ll live in Shanghai,because I went to Shanghai last year and fell in love with it.I think it‘s really a beautiful city.As a reporter,I think I will meet lots of interesting people.I think I‘ll live in an apartment with my best friends, because I don‘t like living alone.

　　I‘ll have pets.I can‘t have any pets now because my mother hates them and our apartment is too small.So in ten years,I‘ll have many different pets.I might even keep a pet parrot! I‘ll probably go skating and swimming every day.During the week I‘ll look smart,and probably will wear a suit.

　　On the weekends, I‘ll be able to dress more casually. I think I‘ll go to Hong Kong on vacation,and one day I might even visit Australia.

My英语作文5

　　Ten years later, I write to you for the first time, my mood is unable to use my poor language to express, is very complex, some excitement, are looking forward to, and some fear.

　　I have a lot of question want to ask you, there are many many words can express... .

　　After ten years of I, how are you now? Happiness? Do you still insist on ten years ago that become a cartoonist, a novelist's dream? This dream realized after ten years?

　　Or have forgotten it? Just have a simple job, live a flatly light day?

　　Where more will not be dropped off in the exam, not on the university and was wondering how is good looking for work, lived a poor dog's life?

　　My parents are ok? You have to let them live a good life, healthy? They also like ten years ago young and tall? Or is the white-haired?

my holiday英语作文10篇（扩展4）

——英语holiday是什么中文意思3篇

英语holiday是什么中文意思1

　　1. As the holiday season approaches, new economic indicators show a business activity firming up and rising consumer confidence and spending.

　　2. Uplifting movies dominated the Top 10 for the holiday weekend, a busy period at turnstiles.

　　3. These suburbs are often very busy during the holiday period when throngs of holiday makers from the cities descend on the beach.

　　4. Especially during the busy holiday season, many unemployed professionals are working at temporary jobs in stores and other seasonal businesses.

　　5. Rescue teams around the capital had a busy holiday season responding to calls for help.

　　6. While the'Skinny Genes'singer is very busy with her work, she is relishing the chance to finally take a holiday over the festive season.

　　7. According to a recent survey from the National Retail Federation, some 62 percent of women plan to buy clothing or clothing accessories this holiday season.

　　8. In addition to buying at home, a large number of consumers also thronged Hong Kong for holiday shopping sprees here.

英语holiday是什么中文意思2

　　spend or take a vacation

　　leisure time away from work devoted to rest or pleasure

　　a day on which work is suspended by law or custom

英语holiday是什么中文意思3

　　holidayn.假日,节日,假期 v.【英】(=vocation【美】)休假,外出度假

　　half holidayn. 半日休假

　　holiday maker度假者

my holiday英语作文10篇（扩展5）

——On Happiness英语作文10篇

On Happiness英语作文1

　　Someone asks me what on earth happiness means? I can't give you the exact definition of it, but I'm sure if you love and help others, you'll get it.

　　I'll never forget an old lady. She lives in a small house alone. It's said that her husband and her son died in a traffic accident. How bitter her life is! But the old lady often helps others with a smile. Whenever it snows, she is always the first to clean the paths. She looks after several children living nearby. I am one of them. I often remember the stories she told us and her kind smile. Perhaps she is unlucky, but I think she is a happy person. Her life is full of laughter and love.

　　But I'm sad to see some people getting their happiness in bad ways. They speak loudly in cinemas and meeting rooms; they destroy trees to enjoy themselves and they laugh at others' shortcomings. Perhaps they feel happy at that time, but they will never get true happiness because they have lost their personality.

　　Now I know what happiness is. It means kindness, love and unselfishness. Above all, only bringing happiness to others can make you yourself get it.

On Happiness英语作文2

　　Happiness means different things to different people. for example, some students believe that if they have much money or a large number of possessions, they will be happy. they believe that they will be able to do anything they want to if they have money. some students think that they should be in good health, and enjoy whatever they like. many students wish to have much wealth from their parents.

　　In this way they don’t have to work hard, and they can have everything. i don’t agree with the above points. we can’t buy many important things with money, such as health, happiness and knowledge. i value knowledge, which makes me happy, for i can do much for mankind with knowledge. although different people value happiness differently, my “wealth” of happiness is in my study.

On Happiness英语作文3

　　Everyone has a family. I have a family, too. I name it “Happy family”, because everyone in my family is happy.

　　Come and meet my family, please! My mother is kind. I love her, and she loves me, too. My mother is pretty. She likes beautiful clothes. I call her“Dressy Mum”. My father is a boss. He is tall and thin. He has a small head. I give him a nickname“Small Head Father”. I am fat and lovely. I have a big head. I give myself a nickname“Big Head Girl”. I study hard. I am a good student.

　　We are happy every day!

On Happiness英语作文4

　　In this long journey we call life, everybody is in pursuit of happiness and has their own interpretation of happiness. An inspiring idea is that happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them, which reveals the very truth about happiness. It cannot be achieved through waiting, but only through striving.

　　There is no way that life always progresses as we wish. Problems may occur and we find ourselves in trouble, but it doesnt mean we are deprived of happiness. There are numerous examples for us to follow: disabled people overcoming obstacles, patients fighting against disease, poverty-stricken people achieving their dreams -- all these inspiring heroes. Their lives are definitely not problem-free, but they have found happiness by courageously solving problems.

On Happiness英语作文5

　　Everyone has a family. I have a family, too. I name it “Happy family”, because everyone in my family is happy.

　　Come and meet my family, please! My mother is kind. I love her, and she loves me, too. My mother is pretty. She likes beautiful clothes. I call her“Dressy Mum”. My father is a boss. He is tall and thin. He has a small head. I give him a nickname“Small Head Father”. I am fat and lovely. I have a big head. I give myself a nickname“Big Head Girl”. I study hard. I am a good student.

　　We are happy every day!

　　每个人都有家，我也有一个家庭。我将其命名为“幸福的家庭”，因为家里每个人都很幸福。

　　来认识一下我的家人吧!我的妈妈非常友善，我爱她，她也爱我。妈妈非常漂亮，她喜欢漂亮的衣服，我常常叫她“考究妈妈”。我的父亲是一个老板，他又高又瘦，有个小脑袋，我给了他一个绰号“小头爸爸”。我又胖又可爱，我的头很大，我给自己一个绰号“大头女孩”。我努力学习，是个好学生。

　　我们每天都很快乐!

On Happiness英语作文6

　　Happiness is for everyone. Some students think happiness comes from studying hard at their lessons. Their parents are always taking good care of their life and their health. They feel happy. Some students say when they do something wrong, people around them will help them to correct it. They believe this is happiness. I agree with them. I love my friends congratulating me when I enjoy success. When I do something kind to others, like congratulate them, I feel happy, too. When we think of these things, we realize that happiness is all around us.

On Happiness英语作文7

　　Last night, I read the news about a professor who wrote the paper 20 years ago.

　　He did some research about asking people whether they were happy and he came up with the conclusion that happiness belonged to two kinds of people, they are the one who lived in peace and the other was who lived with great achievement.

　　But 20 years later, he decided to revisit these people and he found that the conclusion about happiness he made before was wrong. Most people with great achievement felt not happy because they met setbacks.

　　The professor came up with the new conclusion that the real happiness lies in the peaceful soul. This is the code of happiness.

　　昨晚，我阅读了一则**关于一位教授20年前写的一篇论文。他做了一些**，询问人们是否感到幸福，然后他得出结论，幸福属于两类人，那就是趋于*淡的人和取得非凡成就的人。但是20年以后，他决定重新去拜访那些人，他发现他以前对幸福的结论是错的。大部有着非凡成就的人并不感到开心，因为他们遭遇了大挫折。这位教授得出新的结论，真正的幸福在于心灵上的*静。这就是幸福的密码。

On Happiness英语作文8

　　How to Enhance Our Sense of Happiness?

　　Along with the improvement of living standards，people are no longer content with being fed and clothed adequately.They are more concerned about how to enhance their sense of happiness.

　　To a large extent，happiness depends on inpiduals’understanding about it.For some people，happiness relies on material basis.without which they can’t live comfortably and decently.For others，they believe that happiness has nothing to do with money.Thus to enhance the sense of happiness is not equal to improving one’s material living standards.Instead，people are supposed to confront their life with right attitude，to be active and grateful in order to have a happy life.

　　For my part，money does buy happiness.but only up to the point where it enables one to live comfortably.To boost one’s sense of happiness not only needs the material but also the spiritual enrichment. It encompasses living a meaningful life，utilizing your gifts and your time，living with reflection and objective.

On Happiness英语作文9

　　happiness means different things to different people. for example, some people believe that if they have lots of money, they will be happy. they believe that if they are wealthy, they will be able to do anything they want, which means happiness. on the other hand, some people believe that holding a high position in the government is happiness. in this way, you have not onlymoney, but also many other things which can＇t be bought by money. however, other people believe that having lots of money is not happiness nor is holding a high position in the government. these people value their beliefs, or their intelligence, or their health. they think these can make them happy. for me, happiness is closely tied to my studies, my work and my family. when i made great progress in my studies, when i made contributions to the society through my work, when all the members in my family live in harmony, sharing good and sad times, i was happy. although the definition of happiness depends on each inpidual my "wealth" of happiness is in my studies, my work, and my family.

On Happiness英语作文10

　　Happiness is them most precious thing in life.Without it,a man will feel that his ill fate has taken charge of (支配) him and the world is utterly(完全地) dark and dreadful(可怕的).

　　On that account，his body grows weaker,his work slackens(变松弛),and above all,he thinks he would rather die than live.”

　　How to be happy, then?”you may ask.Now,this is the very puzzle that we are going to solve.First,do things in accordance with your conscience(良心);that is,do to others,as you would have other do to you.Secondly,pay more attention to your health,which is the root of success,for a sound constitution(体质) enables you to succeed.Thirdly,worry and sorrow are of no use at all!

　　In case you meet with some hard situation, you must try to overcome it without any hesitation(犹豫.Willpower(意志力) is essential(不可缺的) to happiness.And the last,but not the least, adopt(采取) an optimistic attitude toward life,for the world is still in making and you can have a share in it.In this way,true happiness can be obtained.

my holiday英语作文10篇（扩展6）

——英语分析作文10篇

英语分析作文1

　　1.描述图画

　　图画作文对图画的描述应在第一段进行，且最好在首句即开始。此类作文大部分是一幅图，也会有两幅图出现的情况。如果出现两幅图，则很有可能是突显对比的情况。

　　图画上可能没有任何文字，也可能在上面出现了一句话，也可以单个人物说话或两个人物对话，也可能在图画外写了总结性的一句话。大家注意，这一句话或两句话一般是非常重要的，应予译出。

　　一般说来，对图画的描写不必过长，应以简练、准确为标准。

　　2.图画类作文结构分析

　　我们想象中的最典型最理想的图画题提纲应该是下面这样：

　　1. 描述图画

　　2. 推导绘画者的意图

　　3. 做出评论

　　对于这一提纲我们来做具体分析，其中第三点更要细致研究。首先由图画引出一种社会现象或社会问题，可以是好的，也可以是不好的。在推导绘画者的意图时多是展开说此现象或问题的表现，以证明其引人注目。还有一种可能性是说此现象或问题产生的原因，提纲可直接列出，或还用上述提纲。这时可把简单意图推导直接放到第一段描述图画之后，而在第二段中说原因。

　　第三段做出评论，有可能只是简单评论、深化主题就结束，但这种可能性越来越小了。这一部分很可能说的是办法，不好的事情就是如何解决的办法，好的事情就是如何进一步发展的方法。

　　通过上述列表，我们可以看出，多年以来，真实的提纲是怎样一步步地向我们想象中的理想模式靠近的。对于提纲里面出现的变化和规律，我们来分析一下。

　　我们仔细分析，会发现历年考研真题基本上都呈现"现象或问题--原因解释--解决办法"这样的模式，但变化非常多。因为我们谈论的既可以是一件值得弘扬的好事，也可能是一个令人忧心忡忡的社会问题;针对后者我们极有可能需要提出做法;而对于前者，可能解释一下就结束了，也可能要写出相应的做法。

　　综上所述，可以看出，比起图表作文来，图画作文要更灵活，更富于变化。我们一定要多练习，以达到一看到图画(含图中和图边文字)和提纲(有时有文章标题)就能有效地审题解题，构造出合理的具体段落的目的。

　　这里面还有个问题，就是举例子，**来已明确出现了两次，这一点大家一定要多练习。

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　　俗话说“千里之行始于足下”。英语书面表达能力的形成不是一日之功，必须从*时的课堂学习一点一滴抓起，持之以恒。

　　一篇优秀的英语作文在内容和语言两方面应是一个**体，任何一方面的欠缺都会直接影响到作文的质量。然而，很多考生在写作中或者由于粗心大意，或者由于基本功不扎实而经常出现名词不变复数、第三人称单数不加s，前后不一致，以及时态语态、句子完整性等方面的错误。

　　1.审题不清

　　如20xx年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动，有些考生将作文的主题定位为“我最喜欢的活动”，偏离了“一项、课外活动”这一主题。依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被判为零分。

　　2.拼写错误

　　拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。

　　3.名词单复数问题

　　误：my father and my mother is all teacher。

　　正：my father and my mother are both teachers。

　　4.缺少动词

　　在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成，如：“我累了。”这个句子没有动词作谓语，而用形容词，但英语形容词不能作谓语，一定要写成：i'm tired。

　　误：i happy i can come to beijing zoo。

　　正：i am happy i can come to beijing zoo。

　　误：the apples cheap. i'll take some。

　　正：the apples are cheap.i'll take some。

　　5.缺少介词、冠词等

　　还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法，不了解中英文语言习惯的不同，也会出现明显的错误，造成丢分现象。

　　误：because heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。

　　正：because of the heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。

　　6.代词的误用

　　英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不可省略的，代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误。

　　误：i mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for i father。

　　正：my mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for my father。

　　7.句子不完整

　　有的考生因为对句子结构认识模糊，所以出现只写半句的现象，这也是造成失分的原因之一。

　　误：many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college.for example,my friend in high school。

　　(这段文章的第二句话没有动词，他不能**构成一个句子。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。)

　　正：many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college,for example,my friend in highs chool。

　　8.前后不一致

　　所谓不一致，包括数的'不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等。

　　例1.when one have knowledge,he can do what he want to do。

　　(人一旦有了知识，他就能想干什么就干什么。)

　　剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has;同理，want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致。

　　改为when one has knowledge,he can do what he wants(todo)。

　　9.时态、人称和数的搭配错误

　　汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化，而对英语来说，这些都至关重要。例：

　　误：when i get to the station the train leave。

　　正：when i got to the station the train had left。

　　10.综合性错误

　　综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等，以及形容词和副词的混淆、连词的误用等等。这些都是靠考生*时知识的积累，所以考生应该从*时练习出发，每天坚持写英语日记，多读适合自己英语水*的原版著作，提高自己的英语素养。

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　　一、指代方面的错误

　　在使用代词it，he，this，that，which，one等时，前文中应出现明确的先行词。

　　如：Since we cannot know what particular bit of knowledge a child will need in the future，it is senseless to force him to learn it.，这句话中，him和it这两个代词都有明确的先行词，分别是a child和knowledge，因此句子的含义非常清楚。

　　可是，不少学生在使用这些代词时，虽然自己很清楚它们指代的是什么，但在作文中却没有交代清楚，结果这些代词非但没有使行文简洁，反而造成了意思上的模糊，让阅卷老师不知所云。

　　误：Sometimes teachers will inform students of the heavy burden they have to bear.

　　正：Sometimes the teacher will inform students of the heavy burden he has to bear.

　　【说明】句1中的they既可指教师，也可指学生，属指代不清的。可以把它们中的任意一个改成单数名词。因为单数名词也可以泛指一类。

　　二、修饰方面的错误

　　修饰语应紧靠被修饰的成分，并和它形成正确的逻辑关系。如果修饰语的位置不妥当，就会造出模棱两可的病句。

　　误：To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.

　　正：To keep the air clean, we must move the factories to the countryside if they give off poisonous gases.

　　【说明】句1要表达的是把有害气体排放到农村，还是把工厂迁到农村去?显然修饰语to the countryside的位置放错了。如句2改变一下结构，就能清楚地表达要表达的意思了。

　　三、一致方面的错误

　　在一个句子内部或紧邻的两三个句子之间，要保持时态、人称、数等的一致。

　　误：Whether one enjoys or resents advertisements, we are actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.

　　正：Whether we enjoy or resent advertisements, we are actually bombarded with them every hour of the day.

　　【说明】代词应与所指代的先行词保持人称和数上的一致。句1也可改成Whether one enjoys or resents the advertisement, he is actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.

　　四、*行结构方面的错误

　　这里专指语态、比较级、非谓语形式、冠词用法、可数名词和不可数名词、不定代词单复数以及时态等错误。

　　1、误：Narrow streets easily cause to happen many traffic accidents.

　　正：narrow streets easily cause many traffic accidents. (to happen)

　　误：A great change has been taken place since then.

　　正：A great change has taken place since then.

　　误：But it may occur some new problems.

　　正：But some new problems may occur/arise.

　　误：Opportunities are only belonged to those who work hard.

　　正：Opportunities only belong to those who work hard.

　　【说明】happen，take place，occur，arise等动词和动词词组一般既不能用作被动结构，也不能作为及物动词带宾语的'。但学生作文中类似的错误较多：Our country has taken place a great change in many fields.

　　2、误：The pace of our modern life is getting more faster and faster.

　　正：The pace of our modern life is getting faster and faster.

　　误：Electricity is the most important power in our daily life than other kinds of power.

　　正：Electricity is the most important power in our daily life.

　　误：Thus our city will be greatly beautiful than it is now.

　　正：Thus our city will be far more beautiful than it is now.

　　【说明】这些都是在使用比较形式时出现的错误。尤其是第1例较普遍。如more easier，more stronger等。

　　五、断句方面的错误

　　一句句子没有结束，又开始新的一句，结果造成句子结构不全，这就成为断句。

　　误：TV becomes an important part in our daily life. Because we cannot live without it.

　　正：TV becomes an important part in our daily life，because we cannot live without it.

　　【说明】以because，since，if等引导的从句是不能**成句的，只能依属于主句，所以不能写成另一句。

　　六、连词方面的错误

　　作文中缺少必要的连词，或错用连词的现象也比较普遍。

　　误：One should improve his English，one should overcome difficulties in studies.

　　正：If one wants to improve his English，he should overcome difficulties in studies.

　　【说明】学生在写作中往往意识不到连词的重要，不善于使用连词和连接副词来明确标示出因果关系、转折关系、递进关系等。

　　七、搭配方面的错误

　　学生作文中用词搭配方面的错误也占有较大比例。曾经在一次六级作文阅卷中，近千篇作文在表达上海交通越来越拥挤这个意思时，几乎没有一篇用 heavier，大多数人用的是The traffic in Shanghai is getting more and more crowded，而traffic是不能与crowded搭配的。

　　1、误：However the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle.

　　正：However the speed of a car is much higher than that of a bicycle.

　　【说明】speed只能和high，low，good，top，normal，fantastic，moderate，surprising等搭配，不能与fast，quick，slow搭配。但可以这样说A car is much faster in speed than a bicycle.

　　2、误：In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it.

　　正：In the past the price of milk was so high that most families couldnt afford it.

　　【说明】price只和high，low，inflated，moderate，minimum，original，popular，prevailing，published，reduced，reasonable等搭配，不能与expensive，cheap搭配，但可以说In the past，milk was so expensive that most families couldnt afford it.

　　由此可见，要提高对词语搭配的驾驭能力，除了要在*时的阅读过程中多积累，还需要克服中文中诸如速度快、价格贵、学习知识、人减少等搭配的影响，避免写出look book或see book这样的笑话来。

　　八、误用方面

　　学生作文中对词语的误用也相当普遍，误用词语不仅不能准确地表达作者的意思，而且也会闹出笑话。

　　1、误：With the industrious development，there is a great need for different kinds of energy.

　　正：With the industrial development，there is a great need for different kinds of energy.

　　2、误：Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which effect our daily life.

　　正：Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which affect our daily life.

　　【说明】以上错句都是因为对形容词的辨析不清而造成的。Industrious是勤劳的，工业上的应为industrial。effect一般用作名词，其动词形式表示产生、实现，而这里的意思是影响，应换成affect。

英语分析作文4

　　⑴话题关注度

　　考研英语作文通常并非最热点，因为最热点也最容易被押中，对考生来说具有投机取巧的嫌疑，并不能真正的测试出考生的水*;此外，考题被押中也是命题的失败。所以一般来说考研写作的话题会是当年的次重点，可能和最热点有关系，也可能没有关系。

　　⑵写作前身

　　英语二是从20xx年开始设置的一门考试科目，但事实上它的历史并非如此短暂，它的前身是MBA，一提到这个很多人，尤其是学经济的小伙伴肯定都很熟悉了，有的人想多练练手，就把MBA的真题找出来做，但事实上MBA的真题并不需要做，因为事物的发展是一个逐渐成熟，逐渐发展壮大的过程，早些年的MBA的考题太过简单，不过建议大家，可以练习下MBA试卷的写作部分。

　　⑶图表作文考什么?

　　众所周知，英语二的写作就是以图表作文的形式出现，那图表作文侧重于考查什么内容呢?在英语老师看来，大纲要求上表明了主要考察考生观察数据的能力。但在分析的'时候，只抓住最有特点的数据进行分析就行，面面俱到就没有意义了。

　　⑷图表难易度

　　我们都知道，英语二考查的图表主要分为四类：柱状图、饼状图、线形图和表格图。其中，又以表格图为最难，饼状图最为简单，而柱状图的写作方法和线形图较为类似。

　　⑸段落安排

　　英语二的大作文都是essay，所谓的“essay”，不是散文，也不是随笔，而是短议论文。一般将其分成三段，而且遵循议论文的写作风格，按照提出问题、分析问题和解决问题的思路去行文就可以了。

　　⑹词汇

　　很多人觉得词汇就是在阅读部分的啊，只有认识单词就能看懂阅读，会做题了。写作部分也需要记单词吗?对于这个问题，考研英语老师的回答是肯定的。因为如果你不会写这个单词，又何谈遣词造句呢?所以，在日常的学习备考中，将写作中所会用到的单词都记住并掌握，不仅是重要的，而且是必须的。

英语分析作文5

　　为了能更好更全面的做好复习和迎考准备，确保将所涉及的'中考考点全面复习到位，让孩子们充满信心的步入考场，现特准备了中考英语作文被扣分的原因。

　　一：先看一下扣分点：

　　1.内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“I want to do something for my school”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的;若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。

　　2.字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

　　中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。但是60字的作文能不能得高分?从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

　　3. 语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计;

　　4. 标点错误：每4个扣0.5.

　　二：加分点

　　除了这些扣分点，还有一些得分点：比如说作文的**结构分，就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。

　　只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。例如，有一些“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。

　　其次就是卷面分

　　很多家长和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

　　据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。所谓的书法并不需要写的很漂亮，符合3个简单的标准即可：没有斜体、没有连笔、涂改较少。

英语分析作文6

　　俗话说“千里之行始于足下”。英语书面表达能力的形成不是一日之功，必须从*时的课堂学习一点一滴抓起，持之以恒。

　　一篇优秀的英语作文在内容和语言两方面应是一个**体，任何一方面的欠缺都会直接影响到作文的质量。然而，很多考生在写作中或者由于粗心大意，或者由于基本功不扎实而经常出现名词不变复数、第三人称单数不加s，前后不一致，以及时态语态、句子完整性等方面的错误。

　　1.审题不清

　　如20xx年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动，有些考生将作文的主题定位为“我最喜欢的活动”，偏离了“一项、课外活动”这一主题。依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被判为零分。

　　2.拼写错误

　　拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。

　　3.名词单复数问题

　　误：my father and my mother is all teacher。

　　正：my father and my mother are both teachers。

　　4.缺少动词

　　在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成，如：“我累了。”这个句子没有动词作谓语，而用形容词，但英语形容词不能作谓语，一定要写成：i'm tired。

　　误：i happy i can come to beijing zoo。

　　正：i am happy i can come to beijing zoo。

　　误：the apples cheap. i'll take some。

　　正：the apples are cheap.i'll take some。

　　5.缺少介词、冠词等

　　还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法，不了解中英文语言习惯的不同，也会出现明显的错误，造成丢分现象。

　　误：because heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。

　　正：because of the heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。

　　6.代词的误用

　　英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不可省略的，代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误。

　　误：i mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for i father。

　　正：my mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for my father。

　　7.句子不完整

　　有的考生因为对句子结构认识模糊，所以出现只写半句的现象，这也是造成失分的原因之一。

　　误：many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college.for example,my friend in high school。

　　(这段文章的第二句话没有动词，他不能**构成一个句子。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。)

　　正：many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college,for example,my friend in highs chool。

　　8.前后不一致

　　所谓不一致，包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等。

　　例1.when one have knowledge,he can do what he want to do。

　　(人一旦有了知识，他就能想干什么就干什么。)

　　剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has;同理，want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致。

　　改为when one has knowledge,he can do what he wants(todo)。

　　9.时态、人称和数的搭配错误

　　汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化，而对英语来说，这些都至关重要。例：

　　误：when i get to the station the train leave。

　　正：when i got to the station the train had left。

　　10.综合性错误

　　综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等，以及形容词和副词的混淆、连词的误用等等。这些都是靠考生*时知识的积累，所以考生应该从*时练习出发，每天坚持写英语日记，多读适合自己英语水*的原版著作，提高自己的.英语素养。

英语分析作文7

　　俗话说“千里之行始于足下”。英语书面表达能力的形成不是一日之功，必须从*时的课堂学习一点一滴抓起，持之以恒。

　　一篇优秀的英语作文在内容和语言两方面应是一个**体，任何一方面的欠缺都会直接影响到作文的质量。然而，很多考生在写作中或者由于粗心大意，或者由于基本功不扎实而经常出现名词不变复数、第三人称单数不加s，前后不一致，以及时态语态、句子完整性等方面的错误。

　　1.审题不清

　　如20xx年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动，有些考生将作文的主题定位为“我最喜欢的活动”，偏离了“一项、课外活动”这一主题。依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被判为零分。

　　2.拼写错误

　　拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。

　　3.名词单复数问题

　　误：my father and my mother is all teacher。

　　正：my father and my mother are both teachers。

　　4.缺少动词

　　在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成，如：“我累了。”这个句子没有动词作谓语，而用形容词，但英语形容词不能作谓语，一定要写成：i'm tired。

　　误：i happy i can come to beijing zoo。

　　正：i am happy i can come to beijing zoo。

　　误：the apples cheap. i'll take some。

　　正：the apples are cheap.i'll take some。

　　5.缺少介词、冠词等

　　还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法，不了解中英文语言习惯的不同，也会出现明显的错误，造成丢分现象。

　　误：because heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。

　　正：because of the heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。

　　6.代词的误用

　　英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不可省略的，代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误。

　　误：i mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for i father。

　　正：my mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for my father。

　　7.句子不完整

　　有的考生因为对句子结构认识模糊，所以出现只写半句的现象，这也是造成失分的原因之一。

　　误：many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college.for example,my friend in high school。

　　(这段文章的第二句话没有动词，他不能**构成一个句子。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。)

　　正：many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college,for example,my friend in highs chool。

　　8.前后不一致

　　所谓不一致，包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等。

　　例1.when one have knowledge,he can do what he want to do。

　　(人一旦有了知识，他就能想干什么就干什么。)

　　剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has;同理，want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致。

　　改为when one has knowledge,he can do what he wants(todo)。

　　9.时态、人称和数的搭配错误

　　汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化，而对英语来说，这些都至关重要。例：

　　误：when i get to the station the train leave。

　　正：when i got to the station the train had left。

　　10.综合性错误

　　综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等，以及形容词和副词的.混淆、连词的误用等等。这些都是靠考生*时知识的积累，所以考生应该从*时练习出发，每天坚持写英语日记，多读适合自己英语水*的原版著作，提高自己的英语素养。

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　　一、指代方面的错误

　　在使用代词it，he，this，that，which，one等时，前文中应出现明确的先行词。

　　如：Since we cannot know what particular bit of knowledge a child will need in the future，it is senseless to force him to learn it.，这句话中，him和it这两个代词都有明确的先行词，分别是a child和knowledge，因此句子的含义非常清楚。

　　可是，不少学生在使用这些代词时，虽然自己很清楚它们指代的是什么，但在作文中却没有交代清楚，结果这些代词非但没有使行文简洁，反而造成了意思上的模糊，让阅卷老师不知所云。

　　误：Sometimes teachers will inform students of the heavy burden they have to bear.

　　正：Sometimes the teacher will inform students of the heavy burden he has to bear.

　　【说明】句1中的they既可指教师，也可指学生，属指代不清的`。可以把它们中的任意一个改成单数名词。因为单数名词也可以泛指一类。

　　二、修饰方面的错误

　　修饰语应紧靠被修饰的成分，并和它形成正确的逻辑关系。如果修饰语的位置不妥当，就会造出模棱两可的病句。

　　误：To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.

　　正：To keep the air clean, we must move the factories to the countryside if they give off poisonous gases.

　　【说明】句1要表达的是把有害气体排放到农村，还是把工厂迁到农村去?显然修饰语to the countryside的位置放错了。如句2改变一下结构，就能清楚地表达要表达的意思了。

　　三、一致方面的错误

　　在一个句子内部或紧邻的两三个句子之间，要保持时态、人称、数等的一致。

　　误：Whether one enjoys or resents advertisements, we are actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.

　　正：Whether we enjoy or resent advertisements, we are actually bombarded with them every hour of the day.

　　【说明】代词应与所指代的先行词保持人称和数上的一致。句1也可改成Whether one enjoys or resents the advertisement, he is actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.

　　四、*行结构方面的错误

　　这里专指语态、比较级、非谓语形式、冠词用法、可数名词和不可数名词、不定代词单复数以及时态等错误。

　　1、误：Narrow streets easily cause to happen many traffic accidents.

　　正：narrow streets easily cause many traffic accidents. (to happen)

　　误：A great change has been taken place since then.

　　正：A great change has taken place since then.

　　误：But it may occur some new problems.

　　正：But some new problems may occur/arise.

　　误：Opportunities are only belonged to those who work hard.

　　正：Opportunities only belong to those who work hard.

　　【说明】happen，take place，occur，arise等动词和动词词组一般既不能用作被动结构，也不能作为及物动词带宾语的。但学生作文中类似的错误较多：Our country has taken place a great change in many fields.

　　2、误：The pace of our modern life is getting more faster and faster.

　　正：The pace of our modern life is getting faster and faster.

　　误：Electricity is the most important power in our daily life than other kinds of power.

　　正：Electricity is the most important power in our daily life.

　　误：Thus our city will be greatly beautiful than it is now.

　　正：Thus our city will be far more beautiful than it is now.

　　【说明】这些都是在使用比较形式时出现的错误。尤其是第1例较普遍。如more easier，more stronger等。

　　五、断句方面的错误

　　一句句子没有结束，又开始新的一句，结果造成句子结构不全，这就成为断句。

　　误：TV becomes an important part in our daily life. Because we cannot live without it.

　　正：TV becomes an important part in our daily life，because we cannot live without it.

　　【说明】以because，since，if等引导的从句是不能**成句的，只能依属于主句，所以不能写成另一句。

　　六、连词方面的错误

　　作文中缺少必要的连词，或错用连词的现象也比较普遍。

　　误：One should improve his English，one should overcome difficulties in studies.

　　正：If one wants to improve his English，he should overcome difficulties in studies.

　　【说明】学生在写作中往往意识不到连词的重要，不善于使用连词和连接副词来明确标示出因果关系、转折关系、递进关系等。

　　七、搭配方面的错误

　　学生作文中用词搭配方面的错误也占有较大比例。曾经在一次六级作文阅卷中，近千篇作文在表达上海交通越来越拥挤这个意思时，几乎没有一篇用 heavier，大多数人用的是The traffic in Shanghai is getting more and more crowded，而traffic是不能与crowded搭配的。

　　1、误：However the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle.

　　正：However the speed of a car is much higher than that of a bicycle.

　　【说明】speed只能和high，low，good，top，normal，fantastic，moderate，surprising等搭配，不能与fast，quick，slow搭配。但可以这样说A car is much faster in speed than a bicycle.

　　2、误：In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it.

　　正：In the past the price of milk was so high that most families couldnt afford it.

　　【说明】price只和high，low，inflated，moderate，minimum，original，popular，prevailing，published，reduced，reasonable等搭配，不能与expensive，cheap搭配，但可以说In the past，milk was so expensive that most families couldnt afford it.

　　由此可见，要提高对词语搭配的驾驭能力，除了要在*时的阅读过程中多积累，还需要克服中文中诸如速度快、价格贵、学习知识、人减少等搭配的影响，避免写出look book或see book这样的笑话来。

　　八、误用方面

　　学生作文中对词语的误用也相当普遍，误用词语不仅不能准确地表达作者的意思，而且也会闹出笑话。

　　1、误：With the industrious development，there is a great need for different kinds of energy.

　　正：With the industrial development，there is a great need for different kinds of energy.

　　2、误：Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which effect our daily life.

　　正：Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which affect our daily life.

　　【说明】以上错句都是因为对形容词的辨析不清而造成的。Industrious是勤劳的，工业上的应为industrial。effect一般用作名词，其动词形式表示产生、实现，而这里的意思是影响，应换成affect。

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　　一、指代方面的错误

　　在使用代词it，he，this，that，which，one等时，前文中应出现明确的先行词。

　　如：Since we cannot know what particular bit of knowledge a child will need in the future，it is senseless to force him to learn it.，这句话中，him和it这两个代词都有明确的先行词，分别是a child和knowledge，因此句子的含义非常清楚。

　　可是，不少学生在使用这些代词时，虽然自己很清楚它们指代的是什么，但在作文中却没有交代清楚，结果这些代词非但没有使行文简洁，反而造成了意思上的模糊，让阅卷老师不知所云。

　　误：Sometimes teachers will inform students of the heavy burden they have to bear.

　　正：Sometimes the teacher will inform students of the heavy burden he has to bear.

　　【说明】句1中的they既可指教师，也可指学生，属指代不清的。可以把它们中的任意一个改成单数名词。因为单数名词也可以泛指一类。

　　二、修饰方面的错误

　　修饰语应紧靠被修饰的成分，并和它形成正确的逻辑关系。如果修饰语的位置不妥当，就会造出模棱两可的病句。

　　误：To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.

　　正：To keep the air clean, we must move the factories to the countryside if they give off poisonous gases.

　　【说明】句1要表达的是把有害气体排放到农村，还是把工厂迁到农村去?显然修饰语to the countryside的'位置放错了。如句2改变一下结构，就能清楚地表达要表达的意思了。

　　三、一致方面的错误

　　在一个句子内部或紧邻的两三个句子之间，要保持时态、人称、数等的一致。

　　误：Whether one enjoys or resents advertisements, we are actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.

　　正：Whether we enjoy or resent advertisements, we are actually bombarded with them every hour of the day.

　　【说明】代词应与所指代的先行词保持人称和数上的一致。句1也可改成Whether one enjoys or resents the advertisement, he is actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.

　　四、*行结构方面的错误

　　这里专指语态、比较级、非谓语形式、冠词用法、可数名词和不可数名词、不定代词单复数以及时态等错误。

　　1、误：Narrow streets easily cause to happen many traffic accidents.

　　正：narrow streets easily cause many traffic accidents. (to happen)

　　误：A great change has been taken place since then.

　　正：A great change has taken place since then.

　　误：But it may occur some new problems.

　　正：But some new problems may occur/arise.

　　误：Opportunities are only belonged to those who work hard.

　　正：Opportunities only belong to those who work hard.

　　【说明】happen，take place，occur，arise等动词和动词词组一般既不能用作被动结构，也不能作为及物动词带宾语的。但学生作文中类似的错误较多：Our country has taken place a great change in many fields.

　　2、误：The pace of our modern life is getting more faster and faster.

　　正：The pace of our modern life is getting faster and faster.

　　误：Electricity is the most important power in our daily life than other kinds of power.

　　正：Electricity is the most important power in our daily life.

　　误：Thus our city will be greatly beautiful than it is now.

　　正：Thus our city will be far more beautiful than it is now.

　　【说明】这些都是在使用比较形式时出现的错误。尤其是第1例较普遍。如more easier，more stronger等。

　　五、断句方面的错误

　　一句句子没有结束，又开始新的一句，结果造成句子结构不全，这就成为断句。

　　误：TV becomes an important part in our daily life. Because we cannot live without it.

　　正：TV becomes an important part in our daily life，because we cannot live without it.

　　【说明】以because，since，if等引导的从句是不能**成句的，只能依属于主句，所以不能写成另一句。

　　六、连词方面的错误

　　作文中缺少必要的连词，或错用连词的现象也比较普遍。

　　误：One should improve his English，one should overcome difficulties in studies.

　　正：If one wants to improve his English，he should overcome difficulties in studies.

　　【说明】学生在写作中往往意识不到连词的重要，不善于使用连词和连接副词来明确标示出因果关系、转折关系、递进关系等。

　　七、搭配方面的错误

　　学生作文中用词搭配方面的错误也占有较大比例。曾经在一次六级作文阅卷中，近千篇作文在表达上海交通越来越拥挤这个意思时，几乎没有一篇用 heavier，大多数人用的是The traffic in Shanghai is getting more and more crowded，而traffic是不能与crowded搭配的。

　　1、误：However the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle.

　　正：However the speed of a car is much higher than that of a bicycle.

　　【说明】speed只能和high，low，good，top，normal，fantastic，moderate，surprising等搭配，不能与fast，quick，slow搭配。但可以这样说A car is much faster in speed than a bicycle.

　　2、误：In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it.

　　正：In the past the price of milk was so high that most families couldnt afford it.

　　【说明】price只和high，low，inflated，moderate，minimum，original，popular，prevailing，published，reduced，reasonable等搭配，不能与expensive，cheap搭配，但可以说In the past，milk was so expensive that most families couldnt afford it.

　　由此可见，要提高对词语搭配的驾驭能力，除了要在*时的阅读过程中多积累，还需要克服中文中诸如速度快、价格贵、学习知识、人减少等搭配的影响，避免写出look book或see book这样的笑话来。

　　八、误用方面

　　学生作文中对词语的误用也相当普遍，误用词语不仅不能准确地表达作者的意思，而且也会闹出笑话。

　　1、误：With the industrious development，there is a great need for different kinds of energy.

　　正：With the industrial development，there is a great need for different kinds of energy.

　　2、误：Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which effect our daily life.

　　正：Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which affect our daily life.

　　【说明】以上错句都是因为对形容词的辨析不清而造成的。Industrious是勤劳的，工业上的应为industrial。effect一般用作名词，其动词形式表示产生、实现，而这里的意思是影响，应换成affect。

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　　⑴话题关注度

　　考研英语作文通常并非最热点，因为最热点也最容易被押中，对考生来说具有投机取巧的嫌疑，并不能真正的测试出考生的水*;此外，考题被押中也是命题的失败。所以一般来说考研写作的话题会是当年的次重点，可能和最热点有关系，也可能没有关系。

　　⑵写作前身

　　英语二是从20xx年开始设置的一门考试科目，但事实上它的历史并非如此短暂，它的前身是MBA，一提到这个很多人，尤其是学经济的小伙伴肯定都很熟悉了，有的人想多练练手，就把MBA的真题找出来做，但事实上MBA的真题并不需要做，因为事物的发展是一个逐渐成熟，逐渐发展壮大的过程，早些年的MBA的考题太过简单，不过建议大家，可以练习下MBA试卷的写作部分。

　　⑶图表作文考什么?

　　众所周知，英语二的写作就是以图表作文的形式出现，那图表作文侧重于考查什么内容呢?在英语老师看来，大纲要求上表明了主要考察考生观察数据的能力。但在分析的时候，只抓住最有特点的数据进行分析就行，面面俱到就没有意义了。

　　⑷图表难易度

　　我们都知道，英语二考查的图表主要分为四类：柱状图、饼状图、线形图和表格图。其中，又以表格图为最难，饼状图最为简单，而柱状图的写作方法和线形图较为类似。

　　⑸段落安排

　　英语二的大作文都是essay，所谓的“essay”，不是散文，也不是随笔，而是短议论文。一般将其分成三段，而且遵循议论文的写作风格，按照提出问题、分析问题和解决问题的思路去行文就可以了。

　　⑹词汇

　　很多人觉得词汇就是在阅读部分的啊，只有认识单词就能看懂阅读，会做题了。写作部分也需要记单词吗?对于这个问题，考研英语老师的.回答是肯定的。因为如果你不会写这个单词，又何谈遣词造句呢?所以，在日常的学习备考中，将写作中所会用到的单词都记住并掌握，不仅是重要的，而且是必须的。

my holiday英语作文10篇（扩展7）

——英语小作文10篇

英语小作文1

It was quite unlucky for anyone to be stolen from.. However， President Roosevelt had such three reasons to be so grateful. This story tells us how we can learn to be grateful in our life.

　　对任何人来说，家中失窃绝非幸事。但是，罗斯福总统却能找到三个感恩的'理由。这个故事告诉我们，生活中，我们应该学会感恩。

英语小作文2

　　上周，ViVi老师让我担当学校英语卡拉OK比赛的主持人。我既兴奋有紧张。兴奋的是能在老师、同学面前展示我的风采，紧张的是我连中文小主持都没做过，何况做英文主持？但我还是暗暗下决心，一定要做好英语小主持。

　　主持时间为本周二至周五的中午。在主持前一天，我在ViVi老师的帮助下完成了演讲稿。

　　回家后，我反复朗读，发现有几个不能确定发音的单词，请教了字典老师，在边上注**音标，才完整地读了下来。

　　周二的五六年级比赛开始了，我**的步子那么小，速度那么缓慢，脸蛋红红的，手心不停冒汗，连话筒都湿漉漉的。我紧张极了，读每一个单词都是那么小心翼翼，生怕自己会读错。一句句台词中，不是这个单词读错，就是那个单词发音不标准，有的地方还要搭档提醒……主持时真是状况百出。虽然已到了秋末初冬，我的头上还是布满了密密的汗珠。

　　放学回家，我飞快地做完作业，又开始主持稿的练习。

　　周三，我明显感觉轻松了许多，能较熟练地朗读了，真是一天比一天好了！

　　时间过得飞快，像长着飞轮，转着转着就到周五了，是学校英语卡拉OK比赛的汇报演出。校长来了，老师来了，家长来了，同学们来了，把小礼堂挤得满满的`。经过前几天的磨练，我已能完全脱离演讲稿，有时还会蹦出几句赞美选手的话语。紧张的情绪完全消失了，取而代之的是微笑与轻松。

　　这个星期，我虽然比其他同学少了中午休息和学习的时间，但我觉得很值得，因为通过担当英语主持人，是我的胆子练大了许多，给我的童年时代增添了不可磨灭的快乐！

英语小作文3

　　上周，ViVi老师让我担当学校英语卡拉OK比赛的主持人。我既兴奋有紧张。兴奋的是能在老师、同学面前展示我的风采，紧张的是我连中文小主持都没做过，何况做英文主持？但我还是暗暗下决心，一定要做好英语小主持。

　　主持时间为本周二至周五的中午。在主持前一天，我在ViVi老师的帮助下完成了演讲稿。

　　回家后，我反复朗读，发现有几个不能确定发音的单词，请教了字典老师，在边上注**音标，才完整地读了下来。

　　周二的五六年级比赛开始了，我**的步子那么小，速度那么缓慢，脸蛋红红的，手心不停冒汗，连话筒都湿漉漉的。我紧张极了，读每一个单词都是那么小心翼翼，生怕自己会读错。一句句台词中，不是这个单词读错，就是那个单词发音不标准，有的地方还要搭档提醒……主持时真是状况百出。虽然已到了秋末初冬，我的头上还是布满了密密的汗珠。

　　放学回家，我飞快地做完作业，又开始主持稿的练习。

　　周三，我明显感觉轻松了许多，能较熟练地朗读了，真是一天比一天好了！

　　时间过得飞快，像长着飞轮，转着转着就到周五了，是学校英语卡拉OK比赛的汇报演出。校长来了，老师来了，家长来了，同学们来了，把小礼堂挤得满满的。经过前几天的磨练，我已能完全脱离演讲稿，有时还会蹦出几句赞美选手的话语。紧张的情绪完全消失了，取而代之的是微笑与轻松。

　　这个星期，我虽然比其他同学少了中午休息和学习的时间，但我觉得很值得，因为通过担当英语主持人，是我的胆子练大了许多，给我的童年时代增添了不可磨灭的快乐！

英语小作文4

　　My English name is sally. I‘m from China. I‘m Chinese.

　　I always wear green and white shirt and blue trousers. I have big eyes,small mouth and a small nose.

　　My favorite sports are tennis, Ping-Pong and running.

　　My favorite subject is English. I like eating apple and cake.

　　My favorites drink is coke, milk and juice.

　　This is me, we can become good friend?

英语小作文5

　　我有一个五角星形的小挂件。它是我过去的英语老师送给我的。

　　小挂件是一个橙色的五角星。五角星里面是一个白色的贝壳和一个绿色的水藻，旁边还有一些亮晶晶的圆片装饰着。挂件的反面刻着“知心知己枝江酒”几个字，道出了朋友之间彼此心系相连的情感。

　　记得去年我参加“希望之星”英语选拔赛，可是我并没有被选上，辜负了李老师对我的期望，我十分惭愧。自己是英语班长还选不上，别人不是班**都能被选上，你丢不丢人啊？我就这么想着，结果哭了。李老师见我哭了，便对我说：“别哭了，没关系的，还有下一次嘛，只要你不哭了，我就送你一个小挂件，这可是我最最最喜欢的小挂件哦！你可以把它当作小挂件，还可以用它来激励自己。如果我以后不带你课了，去别的学校任教，你也好有个纪念，你说是吧！”我擦干眼泪点点头，郑重地接过小挂件。从那以后，只要我在学习中，坚持不下去的时候，我就会拿起小挂件，仔细的看起来，仿佛看到了李老师那双炯炯有神的大眼睛在对我说：“少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲”啊！坚持坚持再坚持！

　　我爱小挂件，更爱李老师送我的小挂件，它会永远激励着我。

英语小作文6

　　从今个第一节英语课开始，老师身上多了几分气势，收走了笔记与英语书，摆置一摞，决定检查笔记，有些突然，但我倒也没放在心上，从网课那时起，笔记从未真正被我当做重要的部分，于是便又埋头写着英语卷子。

　　却偶然抬头，望英语老师眉眼间微皱，总觉得气氛中夹杂着不少愤怒的余温，果不其然，交**卷子，老师语气同以往的*和明显增加了几分硬度，告诉我们书本上不缺一页笔记的，只有五人。有几分羞愧存于心中，老师显然因为这件事怀着些不满与不安，也确实，三个月网课下，我们所做的却连将笔记做的完整都没有，还不寒了一番苦心呐。老师接着将周末作业添加了补充笔记这一项，有了对于它重新并深刻的认识，在周末认真补充笔记，同等重要，务必漂亮的`完成。

　　还记得上午做的一张英语小卷，老师更表示会严肃对待，上下午间，像系在心上的一个结，时时刻惦记着，但又谁都不敢向老师询问，好奇却又小心翼翼，期待又害怕，种种复杂交错，倒也还是最后一节英语课，将一天的积虑排除为了一张张卷子。我眼瞧放在桌上这张87分的试卷，咋看咋不顺眼，我多想挥挥手指头，将分数变成个一百分装回家，虽然分数苦涩，相比下老师的讲解反而是甜的，以甜化苦，倒也不觉得英语无可挽救了。

　　老师反复强调时间压缩紧张，道不尽苦苦忧虑，我们也是时候紧绷起来，将英语认真对待不悔当下！

英语小作文7

　　As a small kid, I want to grow up soon, so that I can be independent. But the *s always tell me that it is a lucky thing to be a child, because I can be young and innocent. Though I don’t understand their words totally, I must keep my young heart and enjoy every moment of my life.

英语小作文8

　　从今个第一节英语课开始，老师身上多了几分气势，收走了笔记与英语书，摆置一摞，决定检查笔记，有些突然，但我倒也没放在心上，从网课那时起，笔记从未真正被我当做重要的部分，于是便又埋头写着英语卷子。

　　却偶然抬头，望英语老师眉眼间微皱，总觉得气氛中夹杂着不少愤怒的余温，果不其然，交**卷子，老师语气同以往的*和明显增加了几分硬度，告诉我们书本上不缺一页笔记的，只有五人。有几分羞愧存于心中，老师显然因为这件事怀着些不满与不安，也确实，三个月网课下，我们所做的却连将笔记做的完整都没有，还不寒了一番苦心呐。老师接着将周末作业添加了补充笔记这一项，有了对于它重新并深刻的认识，在周末认真补充笔记，同等重要，务必漂亮的完成。

　　还记得上午做的一张英语小卷，老师更表示会严肃对待，上下午间，像系在心上的一个结，时时刻惦记着，但又谁都不敢向老师询问，好奇却又小心翼翼，期待又害怕，种种复杂交错，倒也还是最后一节英语课，将一天的积虑排除为了一张张卷子。我眼瞧放在桌上这张87分的试卷，咋看咋不顺眼，我多想挥挥手指头，将分数变成个一百分装回家，虽然分数苦涩，相比下老师的讲解反而是甜的，以甜化苦，倒也不觉得英语无可挽救了。

　　老师反复强调时间压缩紧张，道不尽苦苦忧虑，我们也是时候紧绷起来，将英语认真对待不悔当下！

英语小作文9

　　今天，我去上写作课。

　　老师让我们写一个小故事。我便“刷刷”的动起笔来，教室里都静悄悄地，维有听见一个同学在

　　“q-uěh-ěn”。一小时后，大家都写完了。就请了一个同学上讲台念他的作文。

　　那个同学开始念了：“森林里有一q-uě可爱的小动物，他们生活得h-ěn美m-ěi。但是有一天......”

　　我发觉刚才那个在拼拼音的人就是他。这时，老师说：“x-ièx-iè，zh-èw-èit-óngx-ué。”大家都笑了。

　　老师接着说：“你这个‘英语’小天才，佩服佩服！”

　　这就是我认识的小天才。

英语小作文10

　　英语课上，老师夹了厚厚的一叠纸走进教室，说“这是我们班上次默写的英语课文，下面我要公布一些写得非常好的同学的分数。”

　　我的心一下子提到了嗓子眼，心想：爸爸一向对我的英语抓得很紧，如果我不属于这个学得好的行列，那我该如何向父母交待呢？

　　老师开始念了“李怡慧，一百，韩雨婷，一百，贺小轩，一百~~~~”班里很静，没有一个人提出反对意见，只见那纸一点一点的变薄，我的心也仿佛离地越来越高。“李洁，九十八，陈莹，九十九，~~~~~”仍然没有我的，我的手心里冒出了一点汗，“秦天枫，九十四，葛格，九十八，”班里响起了一点骚动，突然几个**喊到“一定是抄书的”！这一喊，老师也停了下来问道“是不是抄的？”

　　“我~~~~~~”葛格心虚的低下了头，“下回直接抄两遍！”老师气愤地说“田鑫，九十~~~~”“抄的，绝对是抄的！”老师还没念完，就有人抢先喊到。“是不是抄的？”

　　“是， 我可以做证，我看见他抄书了！”田鑫还没来得及为自己狡辩，他的同桌刘小林就抢着说了**，“下回抄两遍”老师说。

　　终于念到我了，一百分，没有一个人说我是抄的。

　　我心里想，同学们的眼睛是雪亮的，你的努力和所取得的成绩都是成正比的，所以，你不如老老实实的面对实事。

my holiday英语作文10篇（扩展8）

——三年级下册英语《my family》说课稿菁选

三年级下册英语《my family》说课稿

　　作为一名老师，时常需要编写说课稿，借助说课稿可以提高教学质量，取得良好的教学效果。那要怎么写好说课稿呢？下面是小编为大家收集的三年级下册英语《my family》说课稿，欢迎大家分享。

三年级下册英语《my family》说课稿1

　　一 、 说教材

　　我说课的内容是小学三年级下册第二单元第六课，本课是功能型的交际型的交际训练课，我借助“任务型”教学采用多样化的教学**将听、说、玩、演、唱溶于一体，激发学生学习英语的兴趣和愿望，使学生通过合作学习体验荣誉感和成就感从而树立自信心，发展自主学习的能力，形成初步用英语进行简单日常交际的能力。

　　结合新课程标准和大纲提出的基础教育阶段英语课程的总体目标和具体要求我将本课教学目标设计如下：

　　语言知识目标：

　　1、 能听说读写字母Hh、Ii, 会说以这两个字母为首的单词：hamburger， hot dog， ice-cream, ice。

　　2、通过说一说，做一做，巩固复习学过的字母，引导学生体会字母在单词中的读音，增加学习的乐趣。

　　语言技能目标：

　　①、使学生能够根据指令做动作。

　　②、根据图片和情境说出单词和句子。

　　③、在图文或场景下进行简单的英语交流和表演。

　　情感态度目标：

　　通过本课学习使学生有兴趣听、说英语、背歌谣，做游戏、敢干开口，乐于模仿，在鼓励性评价中树立信心在小组活动中积极参与合作，从而意识到交流对于学习英语的重要意义。充分利用教材和教师的多**教学所提供的学习资源，实现**参与和创新，能主动与他人交流，并克服交流中的困难，使交际顺利进行。

　　文化意识目标： 增加学习的乐趣，进一步调动学生的学习积极性和主动性。

　　结合教学目标的要求，我把本课的重难点设置为：

　　1、 能听说读写字母Hh、Ii, 会说以这两个字母为首的单词：hamburger， hot dog， ice-cream, ice

　　2、对情境进行模仿，创新。

　　我主要通过感知新教材——设置——灵活运用这三个主要步骤来突破教材重难点的。在教学开始让学生以旧带新引入新知，通过对教材的了解感知新任务，并在教师用红灯，头饰、图片、录音等多种媒介的感官刺激下实现对知识的体验和实践最后在真实的生活情境中运用、实现能力的发展。

　　二、 说教法和学法：

　　（一）小组活动学习法把全班分成6个小组事先用表示家庭成员名称的单词命名，课堂各项教学活动匀以小组活动为主线，结对或全班活动为辅，学生互相交流，切磋，共同完成学习任务，在合作中感受学习英语的乐趣及交流的意义，也通过小组成员之间“**与共”的关系而形成同步学习的环境。

　　（二）情境教学法：我将教学建立在满足学生心理需要的基础上。使教学活动带有浓厚的情感色彩，在单词和句型练习中使用了家人的照片，在表演中带上饰演家人的头饰，在加生活化的录音为学生设置了真实而有效的场景激发了想说的愿望也有利于学生表达能力的提高。

　　（三）鼓励法课堂评价主要以鼓励性评价为主分别采用了师评、组评、自评为主要方式，课上师恰当的使用激励性评语和赠送小礼物的`方法让学生渴望成功的心理得到满足，这也是激励学生积极投身英语学习的一个最简单而有效的方法。我把本课教学模式设置为 激趣设境——语言交流——人格发展 下面说一下教具的安排和使用依据英语教学的直观性，趣味性、实践性的教学原则，结合合作学习和任务型教学的新理念，我利用了电子零、照片、头饰、幻灯、录音、竞赛板、贴画、小礼物等**设计教学，学习则利用自制的组标、头饰、家庭照等**积极参与教学活动。

　　三、说课堂程序

　　整个教学程序我采用了听、说、玩、演、唱一系列的教学活动，具体设计为热身——新知——趣味操练——巩固练习。

　　Step1 课前热身

　　1）电子琴伴奏演唱学生一起说唱A部分的字母歌谣，边说边演渲染课堂气氛

　　2) 出示组标并请四个学生到讲台前，让孩子说说都学过了哪些字母，读一读。找一找，今天我们该掌握哪些字母了。

　　3）检查上节课布置的对话表演。

　　Step 2、新知导入

　　1. 教师出示26个字母的字母表，让孩子说说都学过了哪些字母，读一读。找一找，今天我们该掌握哪些字母了。

　　2. 让孩子先试着说出字母“Hh Ii”. 教师注意指导孩子两个字母的发音。

　　教师针对学生的错误，示范口形。

　　孩子模仿，小组说一说，查口形。

　　小组开火车认读大小写字母Hh Ii。

　　3. 教师分别出示大小写Hh，让孩子想想大小写的字母分别象什么，用语言描述或是用动作表示。

　　Step 3.趣味操练

　　1.读一读，分一分

　　孩子自己读新授的单词，根据读音分成两组。找出共同的首字母。

　　2. Guessing game

　　教师将字母卡片背过来，让孩子猜一猜。

　　孩子小组猜字母。

　　3. Let’s do

　　出示B Let’s do 动画，学习过程同前面。

　　Step 4.小结并布置任务

　　1）总结小组的战利品数目，学生掌声祝贺并鼓励未获胜小组下节课继续努力。为激活下节课气氛打下了基础。

　　2）布置下节课任务，最高3个为优，2个为良，1个为中。

三年级下册英语《my family》说课稿2

　　一、说教材

　　（一）教材来源

　　此活动选材来源于生活。英语学习更是离不开生活。一些简单用语和单词，幼儿都可以在生活中得到应用。同样生活中无处不在的英语也促进了幼儿的英语学习。本次我选的课题来自《杨文英语》第六册，第三单元，第五课《我的.家》。

　　（二）目标定位

　　1)能正确的听、说、读单词

　　2)能正确运用对话中的日常交际用语：

　　“Where are you ?”

　　“I’m in the living room,come and find me .”

　　3)培养幼儿热爱英语的良好习惯

　　（三）教学重难点

　　教学重点：

　　能正确理解掌握对话内容，并能朗读一部分表演对话

　　教学难点：

　　A.能比较流畅的朗读对话内容，并能在掌握对话内容的基础上进一步表演对话。

　　B.能正确朗读单词“kitchen,bedroom,bathroom,living room.”

　　（四）课前准备：

　　1、教具准备：

　　A.课前准备好画有实物图片及人物图片

　　B.单词卡片

　　C.录音机及磁带

　　2、板书准备：

　　画好对话背景图。

　　二、说教法

　　新《纲要》指出：“教师应成为学习活动的**者、合作者、引导者。”活动中应力求形成合作探究式的师生互动。

　　我采用的教法有：1、演示法；2、操作法；3、赏识激励法；4、游戏法。从而达到科学性、艺术性、健康性、愉悦性的****。

　　三、说学法

　　以幼儿主体，创造条件让幼儿参加探究活动。不仅提高了认识锻炼的能力各升华了感情。本次活动采用学法有：1、多通道参与法；2、尝试法；3、体验法。

　　四、说教学程序

　　我采用了环环相扣**此活动程序，采用了整体呈现——分步操练——整体操练的教学方法，即：让幼儿先对正篇对话内容有了全面了解再分场景进行分块教学，最后将对话整体进行朗读巩固。这样的方法有助于幼儿整体掌握知识和技能。本单元律动我采用了说唱表演形式。一方面可以活跃课堂气氛，另一方面也可以有效的化解对话的难度。

　　各位**，各位老师，我的说课结束了。谢谢!