关于建议信的英语作文

关于建议信的英语作文

  篇一:高中英语作文--建议信

  请你代表你班同学给校长写一封信,反映一下你校食堂的几点问题,以引起学校重视,并针对问题提出两条合理建议。问题包括:

  1. 菜价昂贵,菜市单一;2. 排队时间长,浪费午休时间;3. 味道不佳,浪费现象严重。

  注意:1. 词数不少于120; 2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;3. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 参考词汇: 食堂 canteen Dear Principal,

  Recently, many students are discussing the problems of the canteen. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I sincerely hope you can adopt my suggestions. Thank you!

  Yours, Li Hua

  作文范文: Dear Principal,

  Some students think the prices of the dishes are too high and that the choices are too limited. Another concern is that the time spent in waiting is so long that we have less time to have a rest. Meanwhile, some students think that the taste of the food is awful, which leads to a lot of waste. the prices be more reasonable and the choices of dishes be more various.需注意的词汇、表达:

  1. delicious waiting taste(n.味道) tasty (adj.可口的) cook (n.厨师) cooker (n.炊具)

  price 价格

  2. lower /bring down the price 降低价格 3. at a lower/reasonable price 以较低的价格 4. varieties of dishes 种类多样的菜品 5. For one thing,……. For another,……

  6. make sb (not)do sth

  7. wait /stand in line / in a queue for a long time 8. The kinds of food are . 表达食堂出现的问题:

  9. The prices of dishes are so high that many of us can’t afford them.

  10. There are so few dishes to choose from, which is far from satisfactory. / which can’t satisfy our

  needs.

  11. It takes us so much time to stand in line, which decreases our time of rest at noon. 12. The food in the canteen doesn’t taste .

  The taste of food in the canteen isn’t

  13. The food in the canteen tastes so bad that a lot of food is left and wasted 14. It’s a waste of time to stand in line for a long time.

  15. The food in the canteen tastes so bad, which leads to a severe phenomenon of wasting food. 16. In the long run, it’s bad for our health and study.

  17. It goes without saying that it will influence our sleep in the afternoon. 表达提出的建议:

  18. Improving the taste of the food is also a good solution to the problems. 19. I think it’s necessary to provide more kinds of food. 20. It’s high time that we took measures to solve the problems.

  So it’s high time for us to take measures

  21. To solve the problems, I think the canteen should set up a new figure(形象) and improve the

  present condition to satisfy the students’ needs.

  22. We hope the canteen can provide us with dishes of a high quality at a reasonable price. 23. The canteen should open more windows so that we needn’t wait so long.

  24. As far as I’m concerned, the canteen should attach importance to the quality. What’s more,

  different kinds of food should be provided.

  25. Measures are supposed to be taken to improve the conditions of the canteen.

  建议模板: Dear ….,

  I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to…….(引出话题). Here are a few suggestions. First of all, it is important to do sth. Then, it also helps to do sth. Besides, it should be a good idea to do sth.

  建议句型积累:

  1. Many ways can contribute to solving the problem, but I think the following may be the most

  effective ones.

  2. I’d like to make some suggestions on ……. 3. It’s of great importance for sb to do sth.

  It’s necessary for sb to do sth

  4. It would be a good idea for sb to do sth. / It would be a better idea if……. 5. It contributes /helps a lot if ……… 6. I suggest that …../ My suggestion is that …

  It’s suggested / advised / recommended that…… 7. You’d better do sth./ We’d better do sth

  It’s better to do sth

  8. Measures are supposed to be taken to do sth

  We are supposed to take effective measures to do sth 9. It’s high time that sb sth. / It’s high time for sb to do sth

  篇二:高中英语建议信作文

  Dear Peter, Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you'll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. In addition, You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.

  Try writing to me in Chinese next time.

  写作注意问题

  一是单词拼写要正确,大小写等。开头结尾部分的语法要正确。 ? 二是选择多种表达方式,例如给出的不同的提建议的句式。 ? 三是结构要清晰,三段式,有过渡词。

  四是卷面要整洁。

  五是字数要够,答题卡上划得横线部分尽量写满,最多剩一行

  篇三:高中英语作文 建议信(如何学英语)

  假如你是李华,你刚收到了你的朋友王梅的`电子邮件,她在邮件里向你询问在高中如何学好英语。请你根据下列的内容给她写封回信。

  1. 上课认真听讲,做好笔记,课后及时复习;

  2. 词汇是基础,每天早上花半个小时的时间背诵单词,朗读课文;

  3. 课外多与同学用英语交流,提高听力和口语能力;

  4. 每天坚持写日记。

  注意:1.词数120—150词左右,短文的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总数;

  2.内容可适当发挥,注意行文连贯。

  Dear Wang Mei,

  I’m very glad to have received your e-mail.

  Best wishes!

  Yours,

  Li Hua

  Dear Wang Mei,

  I’m very glad to have received your e-mail.Now I’m writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school. First of all,you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class so that 众所周知),vocabulary is of great importance / essential.You should spend half an hour in the morning reciting words and reading texts aloud.What’s more,try to your classmates in English out of class.In this way you can improve your listening and spoken English quickly.Last but not least,you should keeping a diary,which helps improve your written English and helps you go over/review the words and expressions that you have learnt.

  I hope these suggestions will be of use to you.Remember:where there is a will,there is a way. 有志者事竟成 /The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”. 一个决心要成功的人是从来不会说“不可能的”。

  Best wishes!

  Yours, Li Hua

  篇四:高中英语建议信和倡议书作文精心整理

  How to write a letter for advice

  ⑴ 说明建议的内容;

  ⑵ 提出具体建议的原因;

  ⑶ 指出采纳建议的益处。

  注意事项:语言要委婉、礼貌,顾及对方感受。

  Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter. Suppose you are Zhang Ying. Write a letter to Xiao Wang, a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you during the summer holiday for a week. You should write at least 100 words according to the suggestions given below in Chinese.

  1、表示欢迎。 2、提出对度假安排的建议。 3、祝愿

  Dear Xiao Wang,

  coming to Beijing to join me in the summer holiday. 第一段表示欢迎 If you can stay in Beijing only for a week, 表明建议的原因 语气亲切,符合说话人身份关系 for visiting a number of places of historic interest. 叙述词和副词一目了然 places that you have the greatest interest in, such as

  the Palace Museum, the Summer Place, the Great then使文章结构紧凑

  will make you have enough time to appreciate(欣赏) 使自己的安排具有说服力 what you really want to see.

  traveler, it is necessary for you to read some 建议有理有据 books about these places before you come to see

  them with your own eyes. With more knowledge

  about these places, you will have a better

  understanding of Chinese history and culture.

  I am eager to meet you soon in Beijing. 表达良好的祝愿,符合文体要求

  假如你叫孙军,是恩施高中的学生,要给市长写一封信,反映学校门前交通拥挤现象,包括以下要点:

  参考词汇: 穿行 thread one’s way 天桥 overpass

  范文1

  Dear Mayor,

  I’m a student of No.1 Middle School. Here I have something to tell you.

  Next to a primary school stands our school, facing a main street. When it comes to traffic jams, it’s crammed with cars during the rush hour. What makes things worse is that children have to be picked up by their parents owing to their young age. As a consequence, ①it’s of great danger/②it’s extremely dangerous for the students to go through the traffic. According to the phenomenon stated above, it is high time that relevant authorities took some measures like building an overpass.

  I’m looking forward to your reply.

  Yours,

  Sun Jun

  范文2

  Dear Mayor,

  I’m a student of No.1 Middle School. Here I have something to tell you.

  ①Bordering a primary school,/②Located next to a primary school, my school faces the main road directly, which always has a traffic jam at the peak time of the whole day. ①Additionally/②In addition, many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home,① thus making the traffic heavier./②thus causing more serious traffic jams./③thus resulting in more serious traffic jams. There is no denying that we students, threading our way through masses of cars, are exposed to great danger. ①Seeing these matters, never will I stop urging our government to take some measures. For the sake of improving the quality of traffic, it is significant to build an overpass./②In order to release the stress of traffic problems, I strongly suggest that relevant authorities should take active/effective measures like building an overpass./③From my point of view,/As far as I’m concerned,/In my opinion, some measures are supposed to be taken by government as soon as possible such as building an overpass to improve the conditions of the traffic./④Aimed at solving these problems, the government should take some measures immediately, such as building an overpass ahead of our school.

  I’m looking forward to your reply.

  Yours,

  Sun Jun

  例1广州某电视台打算开办一个面向中学生观众的英语节目, 新聘任了来自英国的John作为节目编辑助理。现在, John就节目内容向广大中学生征求意见。假如你是学生李华, 建议开办“广州全接触” (All-round Guangzhou)节目。请根据以下节目设想给John写信:

  Dear John,

  I know you’re going to set up an English program for middle school students. So I’m writing to suggest a program — “All-round Guangzhou”. This program will cover topics like the history, education, famous scenic spots, food and famous people of Guangzhou. It would be better to broadcast it on weekends so that we students can have the chance to watch it.

  Besides, you can also invite some middle school students to get involved in the program, which will surely arouse other students’ interest in it. Not only will this program help students improve their English, but also get them to know more about the culture of Guangzhou so as to introduce Guangzhou to foreign visitors. I am sure it will be well-received by the middle school students. I hope you can take my suggestion into consideration.

  Sincerely yours, Li Hua

  例2 假设你是小明的好朋友李华,小明参加了一个英语演讲比赛,他对比赛非常担心,向你求助,请你根据以下内容给他写一封建议信。

  [精华点评]

  建议信的写作关键在于作者给出建议的语气委婉而中肯, 使对方容易接受。很多考生习惯使用祈使句或者You should的句型表示建议, 这样比较生硬,因此考生转换不同的句型使语言丰富, 如范文中使用了you should..., you had better..., remember to do等句型。在最后祝愿对方成功的时候, 可以用简明扼要的句型, 如wish you good luck / wish you success / may you succeed, 使文章长短句结合得当。

  Dear Xiaoming,

  You have told me that you are very nervous about the coming speech contest and I will try to make some suggestions which I hope can help you. In my opinion, you should get well prepared before the speech contest by practicing before a mirror. Besides, you had better use a brief and concise language in your speech so that you can leave a deep impression on the judges. When you are giving the speech, remember to keep smile and even if you forget your words, don’t be panic and just continue your speech, because no one will notice it. Wish you success in the speech! Yours,

  Li Hua

  例3假如你是李华,你刚收到了你的朋友王梅的电子邮件,她在邮件里向你询问在高中如何学好英语。请你根据下列的内容给她写封回信。

  1. 上课认真听讲,做好笔记,课后及时复习;

  2. 词汇是基础,每天早上花半个小时的时间背诵单词,朗读课文;

  3. 课外多与同学用英语交流,提高听力和口语能力;

  4. 每天坚持写日记。

  注意:1.词数120—150词左右,短文的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总数;

  2.内容可适当发挥,注意行文连贯。

  Dear Wang Mei,

  I’m very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I’m writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school.

  First of all, you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class so that you can go over your lessons as soon as you can/regularly after class. As is known to all=As we all know, vocabulary is of great importance / essential. You should spend half an hour in the morning reciting words and reading texts aloud. What’s more, try to communicate with your classmates in English out of class. In this way you can improve your listening and spoken English quickly. Last but not least, you should develop the habit of keeping a diary, which helps improve your written English and helps you go over/review the words and expressions that you have learnt.

  I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way. /The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”.

  Best wishes!

  Yours,

  Li Hua

  例4你是我们学校一名很热心的学生,得知我们校要建设娱乐休闲中心,正在征求同学们的意见,请你根据以下几个方面的提示给校长写一封120词左右的建议信。

  1. 娱乐休闲中心应该包括乒乓球室和羽毛球室。

  2. 最好在学生的课余时间开放。

  3. 尽量不要收费。

  4. ……

  Dear Mr. President,

  It’s come to my attention that our school is going to build a new leisure center. I’m writing to ask you to consider the following suggestions.

  Firstly, I’d like to suggest that there should be a table-tennis room as well as a badminton court. I think it would do great good if you could build the center with an eye to those students who are interested in playing table-tennis or badminton. Secondly, could the center open in our spare time? If so, we will have enough time to make full use of it. Thirdly, we will be more than happy if the center is free. As we all know, not every student can afford the extra expense.

  Thank you for reading my letter. I hope you will consider my suggestions. If the center is built, it will greatly enhance student life here on campus.

  Yours sincerely,

  Li Hua

  倡议书

  写倡议书时,尽量使用具有鼓动性和感召力的语言,如名人名言、格言、警句、以及对偶、排比等句式,以提高语言的表达效果。例如,在倡议书的结尾使用下列句子就可起到很好的效果。

  “Believe yourself and you can , manage it! Stick to it, and your dream will come true!” “Dear friends, come on! If you think you can, you can!”

  “Please start from now on! You never know what you can do until you try!”

  Structure:

  1. Introduction 发出倡议的根据、原因和目的。

  statement of the problem

  how serious is the problem

  summary of the proposed solution----in brief, what solution do you propose?

  2. Body 所倡议的具体内容和要求。

  What do you want done?

  How should it be done?

  What things or people are needed?

  When? How much will it cost?

  3. Conclusion 要表示倡议者的决心和希望

  benefits—How will the proposal help the person reading the letter

  a call to action—what do you want the reader to do

  范文欣赏

  As chairman of the Environmental Protection Committee, I have no reason different kinds of pollutions we human beings one of the serious problems. It human beings, plants and animals. to solve the problem.

  (Introduction of the topic and himself/ threats / proposal)

  Since we water, we should finding this problem. We may take a decade or more to improve the water quality, even though it may cost a lot of money to clean the polluted rivers.|| Secondly,

  (measures / difficulties ) ’s act now to make our world a better place.

  (foreseeable results/ a call)

  例1由于废气、污水、白色垃圾等环境污染已危及到人类的健康与生存, 为鼓励大家节能环保,你们学校将举办一次“低碳行动”的环保活动, 假设你是高三(6)班的一名学生, 将要在这个活动中向全体师生发起“低碳生活”的倡议,以下是倡议的内容:

  1. 尽量绿色出行:采取步行或自行车方式; 2. 少喝一次瓶装水;3. 尽量不用一次性制品, 如一次性木筷子和塑料袋;4. 每周至少手洗衣服一次; 5. 每周少开手机、电视一天。

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