描写人物的英语作文 (荟萃20篇)
描写人物的英语作文1
Myself
I have a round face. And when I look in the mirror, I can see a pallid face. I am well-featured but I have some pimples. I don’t have any dimples.
My haircut is a crew cut. Sometimes it’s center parting and sometimes it’s side parting. And my hair is jet-black. I have two big eyes, and they are close-set. And I have double eyelids. And I even have long eyelashes.
My nose is pointed. I have a pair of beautiful ears, and I have a big mouth, sometimes I am a very big mouth).My teeth are even (maybe, it’s just I think), and the color are blonde. My chin is round, and my neck is a little long. My belly is flat because I am too thin though I eat a lot of food every day. My back is a little bended. I am of medium height and I am very thin. My classmates say that I am very cute but I don’t think so.
My dress is tidy and well-featured, and sometimes it’s very fashionable!
描写人物的英语作文2
My father is a tall, with big eyes and black hair...
He is also a kind person, like to participate in activities...
I remember one time I failed the exam on the exam. But dad didnt scold me also said that after "to learn" Im a 5th grade children, still have to need to take care of mom and dad. In my small heart father is how great ah! Dad to work to make money to feed us, dad every day to day work. Father will be very early Monday to Friday to cook for us...
When I was a kid my father often told me stories, for example: "Cinderella" "little red riding hood," "Snow White"... Actually when I was a child is very naughty, often fell bad things, break things, dad would say: be careful next time dont fell bad things again, each child will get errors, mistakes and just change the are good children. The words impressed dee* in my heart. I want to say to my father: dad, you really great, you are my hero in my heart.
我的爸爸是个个子高高的,眼睛**的,头发黑黑的……
他也是个善良的人,喜欢参加活动……
我记得有一次我在考试上考砸了。但是爸爸并没骂我还说“以后要好好学习”我现在是个5年级的孩子,还得需要爸爸妈**照顾。在我小小的心里爸爸是多么伟大呀!爸爸要工作赚钱养活我们,爸爸每天还要起早贪黑的工作。星期一到星期五爸爸会很早起来为我们做饭……
在我小时候的时候爸爸经常会给我讲故事比如说:《灰姑娘》《小红帽》《白雪公主》……其实我小时候很调皮,经常会摔烂东西,弄坏东西,爸爸都会说:下次小心点不要再摔烂东西了,每个孩子都会出错,知错就改那是好孩子。这句话深深的'印在了我的心里。我想对爸爸说:爸爸你真的很伟大,在我的心目中你是我的英雄。
描写人物的英语作文3
My friend Vivi is a lively and smart girl,she has long black hair and she is a tallest girl in our class.She is warm-hearted and good- looking so that everyone loves her.I'm so glad to make friend with her.I'm out-going too,so we have been good friends for long time.But sometimes I like quiet but she doesn't.And her marks are not good as me.So,i suggested her that she should work-hard in her study so that we can go to the same university.
This person is my best friend Vivi who i can tell everything to.Like my dee* feelings and thoughts.
描写人物的英语作文4
Deng Yaping,28,is a world-famous woman player of table tennis.She comes from Henan Province. At the age of 4,she began to play ping-pong under her fathers instructions. When she was 8 years old,she won the championship in the national competition of the * sports school. In 1988 she entered the National Training Team. After that she won medals one after another,including gold medals in the 1 l th Asian Games Table Tennis Competition and the 41st World Table Tennis Championship and two gold medals in the 25th Olympic Games. Is she born a table tennis player? No. She is only 1.5 meters in height,which is her disadvantage. However,she overcame it by hard work and perservance.Her success proves where there is a will,there is a way.
描写人物的英语作文5
My father is a humorous person.My father short stature,fine fine thin,white skin,black hair,a head of the “big wave” self-invited roll hair,who would think that he is met at the barbers hot. His colleagues said he is narrowed down fei xiang,I think so too. He is a fine art,is famous in the central south five provinces binding artist,his one-man show has a favorable review in the many famous people. After another wall,he is a funny people,special love kidding,I dont know if all of the art is very humor,I think my dads body is full of humor cells. No matter how tired he how busy work,as long as take a door,exactly,he said,as long as a see me,and immediately he smile,I followed delightful sounds.
描写人物的英语作文6
My grandmother lived in the village dock, grandma is not tall nor short, she has a round face, some body fat, has gray hair, teeth down only five or six teeth, my grandma is very love to laugh, cheerful personality, is a courteous and accessible person.
Grandma is more than and 60 years old this year, do things very seriously, do not open her grandmother are so old age, but she wrote the word can be good, and neat, and beautiful, often praised by others.
My grandmother is a warm-hearted person, love to care about others, especially for me, every time I go home, always said: "my daughter, come back, and grow taller"! Hurried to the house, gave me a lot of love to eat food, this time I can be happy, thought: grandma is too good to me, I will certainly be good filial piety grandmother.
Every time I come home, I have to give grandma a painting, grandmothers assessment of me every time is very high: "painting every time, awesome!" Let me the most happy is: grandma every picture is well preserved, home to the guests, grandma took my picture and let them appreciate, hear the guests praise, she was very happy, that laugh is not close the mouth.
This is my grandmother, is not great, my grandmother has many advantages, I will tell you later.
描写人物的英语作文7
My sister is a university student, wearing a black shiny hair, a pair of big eyes, as if talking, slightly raised nose, very beautiful.
My sister and I feel particularly good, my sister is meticulous care about me. I remember one time, I was sick, in the middle of the night coughing, wake up the sister, sister did not want to disturb mom and Dad, so he went up to the pharmacy to buy medicine. Some pharmacies have been closed, the sister ran far enough to buy the right medicine. I was moved to tears brim over with tears.
My sister is not only concerned about life, take care of me, in other ways, too. On one occasion, my sister gave her beloved watch to me, I did not take good care of the table lost. I thought to myself: This is finished, must be scolded by my sister. When sister asked me, I would hide, finally found my sister. My sister said: "sincere words and earnest wishes must be honest, have Never mind is the key to mistakes, correct them in time, it is good. In addition, others to give things to take care of, to develop good habits, to have a big." I nod.
Although my sister often does not go home, I miss her very much. I will study hard and be a useful person. Live up to my sisters hope.
描写人物的英语作文8
Liu Xiang is one of the famous athletes/ players in China. He was born on July 13th, 1983.
In his spare time, he likes singing and playing com*r games. He is best at 110-metre hurdle in sports.
He got the gold medal in 2004 Athens Olympic Games.
And in 2006, he set a new world record with the time of 12.88 seconds.
He didn’t take part in 2008 Beijing Olympics because of the condition of his wound.But he got the gold medal in 2010 Guangzhou Asian Games.
He hopes to to be the winner at 110-metre hurdle in 2012 London Olympic Games.
We think that his dream will come true. We are very proud of him. Good luck to him.
描写人物的英语作文9
Deng Yaping,28,from Henan Province,is a talented woman player f table tennis. She was the table tennis champion of the 1 l th Asian Games nd the 41st World Table Tennis Championship. And in the 25th Olympic ames she won two gold medals. Why can she make such brilliant chievements with the disadvantage of her Short figure? Her hard work and etermination to succeed helped her to overcome many disadvantages. At the age of 4,she began to play table tennis under the guidance of her father. When she was 8,she won the championship in the national competition of the * sports school. In 1988 she became a member of the National Training Team. On her way to success,she proved that height was nothing and hard work was everything.
描写人物的英语作文10
My father is a humorous person.My father short stature,fine fine thin,white skin,black hair,a head of the “big wave” self-invited roll hair,who would think that he is met at the barbers hot. His colleagues said he is narrowed down fei xiang,I think so too. He is a fine art,is famous in the central south five provinces binding artist,his one-man show has a favorable review in the many famous people. After another wall,he is a funny people,special love kidding,I dont know if all of the art is very humor,I think my dads body is full of humor cells. No matter how tired he how busy work,as long as take a door,exactly,he said,as long as a see me,and immediately he smile,I followed delightful sounds.
我的爸爸是一幽默的人。我的`爸爸身材矮小,瘦精精的,白白的皮肤,黑黑的头发,那一头自来卷儿的“**浪”发型,谁见了都会以为他是在理发店烫的。他的同事们都说他是缩小了的费翔,我也这样认为。他是个搞美术的,是中南五省小有名气的装帧艺术家,他的个人画展得到过很多知名人士的好评。他又是个顶顶滑稽的人,特别爱开玩笑,我不知道是不是所有搞艺术的人都非常幽默,反正我觉得我爸爸身上充满了幽默细胞。不管他上班有多忙多累,只要一进家门,确切他说,只要一见到我,他就立刻眉开眼笑,我也跟着手舞足蹈起来。
描写人物的英语作文11
Perhaps the most vital person I have ever met is an Italian professor of philosophy who teaches at the University of Pisa.Although I last met this man eight years ago, I have not forgotten his special qualities.First of all,I was impressed by his devotion to teaching. Because his lectures were always well-prepared and clearly delivered, students swarmed into his classroom.
His followers appreciated the fact that he believed in what he taught and that he was intellectually stimulating.Furthermore, he could be counted on to explain his ideas in an imaginative way,introducing such aids to understanding as paintings, recordings,pieces of sculpture, and guest lecturers. Once he even sang a song in class to illustrate a point. Second, I admired the fact that he would confer with students outside of the classroom or talk with them on the telephone. Drinking coffee in the snack bar, he would easily make friends with students. Sometimes he would challenge a student to a game of chess. At other times, he would join groups to discuss subjects ranging from astronomy to scuba ping.
Many young people visited him in his office for academic advice; others came to his home for social evenings.
Finally,I was attracted by his lively wit. He believed that no class hour is a success unless the students and the professor share several chuckles and at least one loud laugh.Through his sense of humor, he made learning more enjoyable and more lasting.If it is true that life makes a wise man smile and a foolish man cry,then my friend is truly a wise man. Probably the best example of his wit is this bit of wisdom with which he once ended a lecture:“It is as dangerous for man to model himself upon his invention, the machine,as it would be for God to model Himself upon His invention.”
描写人物的英语作文12
Deng Yaping,28,from Henan Province,is a talented woman player f table tennis. She was the table tennis champion of the 1 l th Asian Games nd the 41st World Table Tennis Championship. And in the 25th Olympic ames she won two gold medals. Why can she make such brilliant chievements with the disadvantage of her Short figure? Her hard work and etermination to succeed helped her to overcome many disadvantages. At the age of 4,she began to play table tennis under the guidance of her father. When she was 8,she won the championship in the national competition of the * sports school. In 1988 she became a member of the National Training Team. On her way to success,she proved that height was nothing and hard work was everything.
邓亚萍,女,28岁,河南人,一位杰出的乒乓球运动员。她分别在11届亚运会和41届世界乒乓球锦标赛上获得冠军,并在25后奥运会中获得两枚金牌。为什么她能在个子不高的状况下取得如此辉煌的成就呢?是她的勤奋和决心弥补了她的缺陷,指引她走向功。4岁时,她在父亲的指导下开始打乒乓球;8岁时就夺得业余体校全国冠军;1998年,成为国家集训队员。在成功的路上,她向我们证明了:个子矮小并不重要,勤奋才是成功的关键。
描写人物的英语作文13
Franklin Delano Roosevelt was the 32ndPresident of the United States and a central figure in world events during the mid-20th century, leading the United States during a time of worldwide economic cr**** and world war.
The only American president elected to more than two terms, he forged a durable coalition that realigned American politics for decades. FDR defeated incumbent Republican Herbert Hoover in November 1932, at the depths of the Great Depression. FDR's combination of optimism and activism contributed to reviving the national spirit.
Working closely with Winston Churchill andJoseph Stalin in leading the Allies against Germany and Japan in World War II, he died just as victory was in sight.
描写人物的英语作文14
have a round face. And when I watch the mirror, I can see a pallid face. I am well-featured but I have some pimple . I don't have any dimple .
My haircut is a crew cut. Sometimes it's center parting and sometimes it's side parting. And my hair is jet-black. I have two big eyes, and they are close-set. And I have double eyelids. And I even have long eyelashs .
My nose is pointed. I have a pair of beautiful ears, and I have a big mouth, so sometimes I am very big mouth . My teeth are even , and the color are blonde. My chin is round, and my neck is a little long. My belly is flat because I am too thin though I eat a lot of things every day. My back is a little bended. I am of medium height and I am very thin. My classmates say that I am very cute but I don't think so.
My dress is tidy and well-featured, but sometimes it's very fashionable!
描写人物的英语作文15
Franklin Delano Roosevelt was the 32ndPresident of the United States and a central figure in world events during the mid-20th century, leading the United States during a time of worldwide economic cr**** and world war.
The only American president elected to more than two terms, he forged a durable coalition that realigned American politics for decades. FDR defeated incumbent Republican Herbert Hoover in November 1932, at the depths of the Great Depression. FDRs combination of optimism and activism contributed to reviving the national spirit.Working closely with Winston Churchill andJoseph Stalin in leading the Allies against Germany and Japan in World War II, he died just as victory was in sight.
描写人物的英语作文16
My grandfather has a pair of small eyes, smiling eyes narrowed into a seam, his face engraved with the traces of the years. I am very impressed with him, the most profound is his forgetfulness and stingy.
On one occasion, the sun in the summer sun drying the earth, I was too hot at home, let my grandfather to buy ice cream, Grandpa readily promised. At the store, grandpa bought two ice cream, paid the money to go away, but forgot to find the change, the waiter shouting in the back, grandpa does not know, or I take those changes back. On the way home, Grandpa saw a long lost friend, and grandpa to play chess, the grandfather of the ice cream into the trash, eating the skin, jubilant to play chess, Grandpa suddenly feel right, look down, the original, Grandpa threw the skin as ice cream, snow cake, I was laugh, oh! My grandpa is so forgetful. I remember once, Grandpa and I went to buy food, go to the door locked, went to the market. To the market, Grandpa wanted to buy some tomatoes, even forgot to give money away, but fortunately I remind Grandpa, or else we will be regarded as a thief. Buy vegetables, car home, to the door, Grandpa dig out pocket, said to himself: "hey? Where's the key?" Grandpa thought carefully, the original lock the door, locked the key inside, only to call the door to the grandmother. Hey! But I can't help him.
My grandfather is not only healthy but also very stingy! When I came home from school in the summer, I felt very hot when I entered the room. When I turned on the electric fan, I was enjoying it. My grandfather turned off the electric fan. He said to me, "it's a waste of electricity."! Grandpa fan wind is much stronger than the electric fan, do not believe you try!" Say that finish, the hands of the fan to make the fan fan, and for a while, I will be very cool, and grandpa tired sweating profusely, he is also the province's electricity tariff grin, hey, my grandfather can really mean!
Look, this is my grandfather who is forgetful and mean!
描写人物的英语作文17
I have a brother, he is like the other boys, with a long black hair, look, he has a child right here on the forehead, the hair upwards, a pair of big eyes, a flat nose under thick lips. My brother is a clever boy!
I have a brother, he is like the other boys, with a long black hair, look, he has a child right here on the forehead, the hair upwards, a pair of big eyes, a flat nose under thick lips. My brother is a clever boy!
Once at noon, my mother was cooking, my brother and I were watching TV, a cartoon will come soon. At this time, the home of the oil ran out, the mother pushed open the door and said: "the home of oil run out, you who go to buy?" My brother turned his eyes and went to turn off the TV and said, "I have a lot of homework to do." I had no choice but to go. As soon as I closed the door, my brother turned on the TV again and said, "aren't you doing more homework?" Brother smiled and said: "I finished my homework yesterday, but I forgot." When I came back, I saw my brother watching TV again.
My brother is not only clever, but also a "bookworm". Saturday morning, brother to eat breakfast go to read him with a "Andersen fairy tale", imperceptibly, brother to buy the little match girl sitting together, the little girl lit a match, the food appeared in their eyes…… "Boy, have lunch." Mother's voice pulled her brother out of the illusion. "Mom, I'm reading a book." "You ah, is really a little bookworm, go for lunch." Brother looked at her mother's smiling face, he laughed.
This is my brother, a smart and like reading brother.
描写人物的英语作文18
My father is a tall, with big eyes and black hair...
He is also a kind person, like to participate in activities...
I remember one time I failed the exam on the exam. But dad didn't scold me also said that after "to learn" I'm a 5th grade children, still have to need to take care of mom and dad. In my small heart father is how great ah! Dad to work to make money to feed us, dad every day to day work. Father will be very early Monday to Friday to cook for us...
When I was a kid my father often told me stories, for example: "Cinderella" "little red riding hood," "Snow White"... Actually when I was a child is very naughty, often fell bad things, break things, dad would say: be careful next time don't fell bad things again, each child will get errors, mistakes and just change the are good children. The words impressed dee* in my heart. I want to say to my father: dad, you really great, you are my hero in my heart.
描写人物的英语作文19
My father is a humorous person.My father short stature,fine fine thin,white skin,black hair,a head of the “big wave” self-invited roll hair,who would think that he is met at the barbers hot. His colleagues said he is narrowed down fei xiang,I think so too. He is a fine art,is famous in the central south five provinces binding artist,his one-man show has a favorable review in the many famous people. After another wall,he is a funny people,special love kidding,I dont know if all of the art is very humor,I think my dads body is full of humor cells. No matter how tired he how busy work,as long as take a door,exactly,he said,as long as a see me,and immediately he smile,I followed delightful sounds.
我的爸爸是一幽默的人。我的爸爸身材矮小,瘦精精的,白白的皮肤,黑黑的头发,那一头自来卷儿的“**浪”发型,谁见了都会以为他是在理发店烫的。他的同事们都说他是缩小了的费翔,我也这样认为。他是个搞美术的,是中南五省小有名气的装帧艺术家,他的个人画展得到过很多知名人士的好评。他又是个顶顶滑稽的人,特别爱开玩笑,我不知道是不是所有搞艺术的人都非常幽默,反正我觉得我爸爸身上充满了幽默细胞。不管他上班有多忙多累,只要一进家门,确切他说,只要一见到我,他就立刻眉开眼笑,我也跟着手舞足蹈起来。
描写人物的英语作文20
A friend is a person who can let you feel warm when you are depressed.So I have many friends.But XXX is my best friend.He is as old as me.He taller than me.Basketball is his favorite sport.We are in the same class.He is good at study.So his study is very good.We learn from each other and help each other.He will help me if i got in trouble.I will help he as much as I can. I hope our friendship will forever and ever.
We are in the same class. He likes studying and is good at it, so he gets high marks. We learn from each other and help each other. He will help me if I ever get into troubles. So will I. I hope our friendship will last forever and ever。
朋友是当你在沮丧消沉的时候能给你温暖的人。因此我又很多朋友。XXX是我最好的朋友。他和我一样大却比我高。他最喜欢的运动是打篮球。我们是同班同学。他的学习很棒,因此他的成绩很好。我们相互学习相互帮助。我有困难的时候他会帮我,而他又困难我也会尽力帮他。我希望我们的友谊能天长地久。
他很爱学习,所以学习很棒,因此总能得高分。我们相互帮助相互学习。我有困难的时候他总会帮我,他有困难时我也一样会帮他。我希望我们的友谊是永恒的。
我的朋友相对狂野而我相对沉静。他又高又瘦,但是很结实,留着短发。一些时候他马虎又懒散。与他相比,我显得矮胖,而虚弱。我也是短头发。他很乐于助人,因为我很懒不想做仍和运动。我会在学**帮助他。我希望我们的友谊能够持续到永远。
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描写人物的英语作文 (荟萃20篇)(扩展1)
——描写人物外貌作文 (荟萃20篇)
描写人物外貌作文1
我有一个弟弟,叫余荣皓,但我习惯叫他皓皓。他长着一双水汪汪的大眼睛,就像两颗晶莹剔透的葡萄,皓皓的鼻子很小,他的嘴巴则有点大。皓皓是一个古灵精怪、调皮又可爱的小屁孩。
有一次,我和皓皓在玩玩具,他拿了两个可以变怪兽的圆球打来打去,说了一声:“可恶,**队长太厉害了,得让猪猪侠来帮我。”当时他用蚊子般很小的声音自言自语着,不过我还是听到了,就问他说什么,皓皓很小声的说:“猪猪侠是也。”小不点敢撒谎!“你不说实话我就把你的直升机扔掉!”我威胁道。他终于把原话说了一遍,我听了后捧腹大笑。你们说我这个弟弟是不是很可爱呀!
都说孩子的脸就像这七月的天,时而晴,时而雨,说变就变。这一点在我的弟弟身上也体现的淋漓尽致。一天晚上,我、皓皓和奶奶去广场上玩,路上,皓皓在一块被我踩过的'石礅子上发现了一张贴纸,撕下来玩了起来,我说:“这个很脏,扔了!”他不听,继续拿着玩,我一把抢过来扔进了旁边的垃圾桶,他很生气,几乎快哭了,我见不妙,忙给他讲了一个笑话,还真没想到,他居然被我逗笑了,可没过十五秒,他又变回了原来那个表情,唉!
看!这就是我的弟弟,是不是既可爱又调皮呢?
描写人物外貌作文2
学习目标:
1、知识与技能目标:掌握描写的方法,学会抓住特点对人物进行描写。
2、 过程与方法:通过范例,引导学生理解怎样抓住特点进行人物描写。
教学过程
一、前言:
走在大街上,人们步履匆匆,擦肩而过,一张张鲜活各异的面孔如花瓣一般,在我们面前闪现。我们如何去将一张张各异的面孔定格,化为永恒的一瞬呢画家可以用颜料去绘图,摄影师可以用相机去拍摄,而我们所能做的就是用手中的笔去描绘。所以今天,就让我们一同走进“人物的外貌描写”。
二、故事导入,认识外貌描写的重要性 :
师讲述:古时候,有一户人家被盗,主人随即报官,但听完他的描述,知县也不知所措,这是什么原因呢?原来他描述的盗贼模样是: 出示幻灯片:
个子不高不矮,身材不胖不瘦,脸不白不黑,眼不大不小,鼻子不高不低,嘴巴不宽不窄,耳朵不圆不长。
大家说,根据描述你们能帮他抓到小偷吗?在科技发展的今天,利用电脑技术能帮他抓到小偷吗?为什么?
指名回答
师小结:同学们说抓不到小偷的原因就是主人的描述不形象,不传神。这是我们在外貌描写时的一个通病,写眼睛不是炯炯有神,就是水汪汪,不然就是黑葡萄似的,而且还都是大眼睛,鼻子都是不大不小,鼻梁都是不高不低,这样的人物缺乏个性,不符合个生活真实,都是克隆出来的人物。怎样才能把人物描绘得惟妙惟肖呢?今天我们就一起来学习外貌描写。
三、对人物进行外貌描写时需要注意的问题
外貌描写也称肖像描写。即是对人物的外貌特征(包括人物的容貌、衣着、神情、体 型、姿态等等)进行描写,以揭示人物的思想性格,表达作者的爱憎,加深读者对人物的印象。所以说,我们要对人物进行外貌描写,首先要抓住人物的特征。那什么是特征? 生:自己独有的不同于别人的特点。
(一)、抓住人物特点
师:做游戏。猜猜他们是谁?
1、“只见他黑脸短毛,长嘴大耳,圆身肥肚,穿一件青不青、蓝不蓝的梭布衣服,提一柄九齿钉耙。”
生:猪八戒
师:为什么能猜出是猪八戒?
生:抓住了特征
师:看来《西游记》的作者吴承恩的确技高一筹,他抓住了猪八戒的外貌特征,使猪八戒成为我们耳熟能详的经典人物。
2、出示课件
生猜
师小结:自然界中没有两片完全相同的树叶,也没有完全相同的人,我们在进行外貌描写时一定要抓住人物独有的外貌特征。使认识他(她)的人看到你写的内容能猜出他(她)是谁,不认识他(她)的人也能想象出他(她)的样子。
(二)、进行外貌描写时要注意反映出人物的性格特点。
出示张飞的图片,**:你能猜出这个人物是谁吗
生:张飞
师:从图片中你能看出他是一个怎样的人?
生:勇猛、豪放、不拘小节、急躁、耿直------
师:由此看来,从外貌描写中我们不仅能了解人物的外形,还可以知道什么?
生:人物的性格。
出示课件:猜性格
引导学生探究
生讨论交流
师小结:我们在对人物进行外貌描写时,也要注意表现人物的性格特点。这样我们就可以更深入的领会人物的神韵。如果通过我们的描写,可以让读者了解人物的性格,那我们的写作就是成功的。
(三)、描写外貌要注意反映人物的内心感情。
1、知识导引
师:揣摩下面几段文字,谈谈你的感受
(1)、 除夕晚上,儿子、孙子都来到她身边,她满脸皱纹都舒展开了,就像盛开的菊花瓣,每根皱纹里都洋溢着笑意。
(2)、一天,她的老伴儿病倒了,她脸上珠网般的皱纹更深了,两道眉毛拧成的疙瘩锁到一块儿了。
(3)、她望着老伴儿的遗像,嘴唇微微抖动着,刀刻般的皱纹里,流淌着串串泪珠。
学生归纳:分别体会到了幸福快乐;着急发愁;伤心悲痛三种心情 师小结:三个例段描写的是一位老人的外貌,却反映了三种不同的内心感情:例一表达了老人享受“天伦之乐”的幸福;例二反映了老人为老伴儿生病而着急发愁的.心态;例三写出了老人伤心、悲痛的思想感情。由此说明,描写人物外貌,一定要注意反映人物的内心感情。透过人物的外貌感知人物的内心活动。
师: 刚才的三个例段有什么共同点?
刚才的三个语段都抓住了老人的皱纹来刻画,皱纹是老年人的特征,作者注意到了这一年龄段人物的特征,并运用了比喻修辞使三段描写都非常精彩,这也是值得我们学习的。
四、才艺展示
每个同学用3——5分钟的时间描写教室中任何一个人的外貌,抓住他(她)的特征,写出后让大家来猜猜你写的是谁,大家猜得出你就顺利过关了哦
五、总结:
刚才我们共同探讨了进行人物外貌描写时需要注意的三个问题:抓住人物外貌的特征;反映出人物的性格特点;反映人物的内心感情。 抓特征是为了做到形似。反映人物的性格特点和内心感情是为了更深入的了解人物,显示神韵。今天,我们只是简单地学习了人物的外貌描写,掌握了人物外貌描写的简单方法,要写好作文,我们要做一个有心人,多读多练,慢慢地我们的写作能力就会提高。
六、作业:
一个特点鲜明的人,总是给人留下深刻的印象,即使偶然见上一面,他的音容笑貌、举手投足,也会留在心中挥之不去。这次习作,我们就来写这样一个人,可以是身边熟悉的人,也可以是偶然见到的陌生人。写的时候,一定要注意突出人物的特点,写完以后,同学之间互相评一评,改一改,让人物特点更加突出。
板书:人物外貌描写
外貌描写
(容貌、体态、衣着打扮、神态)
1、抓住人物特点
2、反映性格特点
3、反映内心情感
描写人物外貌作文3
(一) 指导思想
记叙文写作离不开人物描写,而人物的外貌描写是塑造人物的一个不可或缺的方面。传神的人物外貌描写除了可以展现人物的外貌特征之外,还可以表现人物的性格特点和内心感受。本课的教学意在让学生明确外貌描写的概念,引导学生由表及里的认识到外貌描写并不是单纯孤立的描写人物的外貌特征。还可以透视人物的性格特点和内心感受。可以通过传神的外貌描写更好的塑造人物形象,为更好的突出文章主旨服务。
(二) 背景分析
1、学习内容分析:由表及里引导学生认识到人物外貌描写并不是单纯的描写人物的外貌特征,还可以通过外貌描写感知人物性格特点和内心的情感变化,深入领会人物外貌描写对于塑造人物形象的作用。
2、学生情况分析:人物的外貌描写在小学阶段应该接触过,但大多数学生不能抓住人物的外貌特征,写人千人一面,更谈不上通过外貌描写去展现人物性格特点和内心情感变化了。所以本节课我重在引导学生明确外貌描写是什么,了解准确的概念;外貌描写应该写什么,透过外貌传递人物的哪些信息;如何去写好,可以用到哪些可行的修辞和手法。让学生通过板块式的学习和训练,对每一部分形成系统的认识。
3、教学方式:以学生为主体,教师为主导,引导学生发现问题、归纳问题、解决问题。 以学生的探究和训练为主。
4、教学准备:多**课件
(三) 教学目标:
1、指导学生能抓住人物特征进行较准确、具体地描述人物的外貌。
2、使学生懂得外貌描写应该为刻画人物性格,表达中心意思服务。
3、尝试通过人物的外貌描写表现人物个性
(四)教学过程设计:
一、导入
很高兴今天能有机会与各位同学共度一节课,来共同学习人物外貌描写,谁能告诉我人物的外貌描写包括哪些内容?(结合学生的回答板书。)
大屏幕显示:
外貌描写也称肖像描写。即是对人物的外貌特征(包括人物的容貌、衣着、神情、体 型、姿态等等)进行描写,以揭示人物的思想性格,表达作者的爱憎,加深读者对人物的印象。
二、对人物进行外貌描写时需要注意的问题
(一)抓住人物外貌的特征
1、知识导引
我来描述我们班一位同学的外貌,然后你们告诉我他是谁,好吗?
“他诘拿济乱凰髁恋难劬Γ淮蟛恍〉谋亲樱
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